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ArHi FF #11: Desert Heat *Ch 24 Pg 1* (Next thread link pg 1) (Page 42)

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Posted: 04 February 2014 at 12:54am | IP Logged
it was fabulous!!!...I really like the flow of the story...its so lively...
and finally...khushi will have some sense...Wink...she will consider herself as his wife!!!...
and by the way...the precap pics were awesome!!!!

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Posted: 04 February 2014 at 1:02am | IP Logged
This is some Journey my dear Tina...tedious travelogue...in between that the emotions which play out...oh god! you give a high ...with all this tension riding up...how many narrow escapes, loses...god! but still thrilled and worried about these two...

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Posted: 04 February 2014 at 1:03am | IP Logged
wow...simply awesome update... and khushi is finally Mrs. Khushi Arnav Sing Raizada... congrats ;) ...

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Posted: 04 February 2014 at 1:23am | IP Logged
Loved the update.
The glimpse of Bikaner was lovely.
And you got the historical facts right, which is commendable.
I am from Rajasthan, so I was really impressed by how well researched this story is.
Very well written.
Arnav seems to have inadvertantly almost married Khushi.
Will she accept this gesture as a marriage ritual or hold him off?
Waiting now for the next update.

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Posted: 04 February 2014 at 1:27am | IP Logged
Just gotten up to speed on DH and am loving every bit of the emotional twists! Keep it coming.Smile Loving your exceptional writing Tina!Clap

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Posted: 04 February 2014 at 1:44am | IP Logged
Awesome. loved it.

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Posted: 04 February 2014 at 2:02am | IP Logged
WOW! Definitely worthy of being called a mahaupdate!!! Clap


They're married now!!  Dancing Didn't expect it would happen this soon and like this. But I honestly got creeped out when I realised that they had company of the British soldiers. Quick thinking on Arnav's part. They wouldn't have believed that Khushi was Arnav's wife without evidence!

Your work is as stunning and breathtaking as Rajasthan itself! You're doing great! Keep it up!! :D


Edited by avantika_2012 - 04 February 2014 at 2:04am

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Posted: 04 February 2014 at 2:03am | IP Logged
BEAUTIFUL- this word looks so impactless when i want to describe desert heat updates...i dont kno whether u realise what an amazing writer you are...Clap
The unknown feeling that is budding in aman...spectacular...i never knew he had that much depth...we never realli got to see his character story...but damn what a retort..."dont hurt Taj"...like seriously is that the only reason of that flashy mood...i dont think sooo
And ofcourse our fiesty Maya...love the fool vs witch fight...

The unity among the pack...beautiful expression of their concernClap

Nd ofcourse our very own arshi...i wish this would have been made into movie...Thar without food, water and ride...sounds unbelievable but with the dark prince this ride is totally worth while...

The way he lifts her, his concern, shopping through the eyes,the other guy, jealousy, the villains and the maha maha maha shocker marriage...
It had everything to the fullest ... Loved loved loved it...Heart
Update soon...Tongue

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