ArHi FF #11: Desert Heat *Ch 24 Pg 1* (Next thread link pg 1) - Page 23

Originally posted by: Satina

^ me too

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Originally posted by: ara_000

Khushi,dis girl never fails to impress me..!
She is controlling her every burning desires nly to respect d tradition where none actually should care abt it but here dis angle is all set to follow everythng properly nd in d process she was going to loose her love of life but still she stuck up wit her decision wit d belief dat her love is strong enough to make arnav undrstnd dat she loves nly her nd wit tym he will undrstnd her decision..!

I loved it how they both were so much eager to make love but khushi could not hlp it but started to submit herslf to him feeling dat she is not right but still it felt perfctly all r8 nd arnav seeing her backing off nd her uneasiness he just got all angry nd d way he said dat next tym khushi will beg him to make love nxt tym actually sent shivers down my spine breaking my skin into goosebumps..! ☺️

Goshhh dat scene,ahhh intense nd damn damn damn beautiful..!

Nd den arnav's jelousy for d dress dat khushi worn nd also he got jelous wit rebel as khushi was giving it xtra attention,oh god nly d dark prince can do like dis..! No no me not complaining at all coz i loved to see him like dis,all lost in love wit his beautiful khushi..!

Nd as xpected wit tym arnav started to undrstnd her nd seeing her attitude nd her love for him he could undrstnd dat khushi loves nly him but still as betrayal was alwaz d most common thng in his life his head cannot agree wit his heart nd still one ounce of doubt alwaz remained in his heart abt khushi chosing him over dat tradition..!

I loved it how u have brought up d childhood marriage issue nd also made that one scene perfct for arnav to undrstnd dat khushi kumari gupta will never chose d tradition over him..!

D whole part of marriage ceremony,taking from mehendi to her getting ready nd their small talks nd her getting teased by d girls of d house nd den her small eye contact wit arnav nd their sweet teasings nd their drooling over each other nd their passion,everythng was described beautifully..!

I loved it how khushi was all happy to enjoy d marriage ceremony but one look at d bride nd groom made her shiver nd she could not hlp but shout demanding d marriage to get stopped nd as usual arnav came running to her holding her close xamining her traumatised condition nd also giving her d much needed warmth making her undrstnd dat he is nd will b alwaz wit her no matter wat nd i loved it how khushi justified her points properly making everyone undrstnd dat child marriage is indeed a curse nd wit dis arnav singh raizada could easily undrstnd dat watever happens in life wit them but his khushi will never leave him nd will never ever choose anythng in life over him..!

Wit marriage ceremony getting all stopped wit everybody undrstnding khushi's point of view they both got out of d venue to continue wit their journey but dis tym also luck did not played right in their favour nd shyam's men attacked them nd as xpected shyam nd his men targetted khushi thnking dat arnav could get shattered nly if sumthng happened to his khushi but arnav sensing sumthng just turned nd undrstnding dat d gun has been pointed to khushi he shouted but it was too late nd those jerks had already set up their shot for her but this tym rebel gave his life to save his master's love..!

Ahhh wat a brilliant piece of writing,i was reading nd my tears made their way seeing rebel lying in pain wit the gun shots in his body..!

Den khushi running in order to save her life but fear gripping her thinking abt arnav's safety nd her steps slowing down tjnking abt him but den nly arnav came rushing to her making her believe dat nothng can touch her dark prince anyway md they ran away savimg their lives from those men nd from shyam,ahhh wat a chasing scene it was..!

I must say didu,d whole chasinh scene left me breatheless,though i knw it dat never will u let anythng happen to my arnav nd khushi nd i also i knw it well dat rebel will lost his life but still i could not hlp but felt all restless thinking abt them nd dats where u actually succeed being a writer,d scene was so beautifully penned down dat i was utterly tensed sensing somethng gonna happen soon to them..!

Nd den wen they both could sense dat shyam nd his men were not chasing them they came back to rebel nd arnav could not help but broke down seeing his rebel lying lifeless nd wit him touching him for d last tym he breathed his last breathe nd gave his life saving khushi nd marking a new beginning of arnav nd khushi's rltnship..!

Goshhh this is indeed a heart breaking chappy,i knw it dat u were planning dis sequence but never i felt dat i will b dis much sad reading dis part..!

I have actually nothng more to say..!

Lovely update 👍🏼

u indeed make my breathe stuck wit dis chappy didu,goshhh one of d best chapters of DH,hats off to u my darling doctorji,u simply rock..! 👏

love ya ❤️

hugs 🤗

Originally posted by: kannansangee

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dear tina...
i agree to it that historical romance needs realism...
but it just broke my heart 💔🥺😭
it was extremely painful to read it ...😆😭
after reading the update i was left thinking now what to do ?😕
i was so sad ...
heard about the threatening  pm...🥱
seriously?????😲
i feel bad about  the fact that  after spending  so much time in writing this beautiful fiction which every body cherishes, people have the audacity to talk to you like this and harass you ...😡
according to me what ever the writer writes if anybody finds anything offensive  they have the option of not reading it ......😕
and well who ever gave you a lecture on child marriage being right is just being orthodox and behaving immature ...
i hope this will give a message that child marriage is wrong ...👏
and thumbs up to you tina 👍🏼
i respect you more now for writing about this  child marriage issue ......👏👏👏
again back to the update
i hate the distance between them😕😭😭
again  pearls of beautiful words to describe passion ...hot flames of passion
and arnav being a parched desert and she an ocean
something as wild and untamed as thar👏
his love for her far outweighed red hot lust spearing through him👏👏
her soft beauty eclipsing him👏
again i  bow to thee...👍🏼
for me it just adds to the beauty of this tale ....
and  finally arnav gets to know that khushi  is weighed down by the burden of past
i loved the i believe you part...❤️
finally they are okayy🤗
loved it
❤️
they clarified upon  lavanya...
arnav is jealous of her clothes😆😆😆
then the rest of the part is a blur ...
i dont want to re live the pain 😭
arshi escaped 😎
i hope they are fine😕
loved the update  tina
huggs🤗
ps ...red coats
pps i know we will get a good description of  shyams painful 😆😆 death

Originally posted by: neag

Pending... waiting to see it change into updated or  pm later...lol

Gosh I'm refreshing the screen every five minutes. ...