This content was originally posted by: Suvika.Did Armaan actually fire the workers, I wonder!!
This content was originally posted by: bawaswiftMe first.., plzz lets not spam on this thread anymore... I want all the reviews and replies on this very thread.. I hope all of you understand this.. Thanks 😊
This content was originally posted by: Veenaper
Bawa, I second you. As a long standing reviewer of this FF, I would like to put forth my views about the spamming which takes place at times on this thread. A humble request to all the readers here to please desist from discussing personal issues. Please maintain the dignity of this FF. You can grace the thread with your reviews - be it a one liner, a small para or a big one but please give some respect to the writer who takes great pains to deliver each update. It is not an easy task to post an update at timely intervals and taking the story forward with different tracks. I noticed this morning that Indu has posted at 1.40 in the middle of the night. In spite of her ever busy schedule she is trying to satisfy the readers here with her most creative talent. It made me feel guilty because I too have lagged behind in posting timely reviews.At the end of the day a writer will wait for reviews. In my point of view the beauty of an FF is not valued by the number of pages, but the update and the reviews which are posted. I do not think there is any need to complete the thread in a hurry. This is a fervent request - please do not mistake me.
This content was originally posted by: VeenaperIndu, extremely sentimental chapter wherein you have touched upon raw emotions. Could imagine Armaan's sense of guilt in the previous chapter when the smoke made Nidhi undergo so much pain - could sense the agony she had to endure with the severe coughing bout and the breathlessness - it turned me all teary and emotional. Knew for sure that Mala will create a stir during the dinner with her remarks and that her character will get a drubbing.
But here in this update you have turned the tables brilliantly taking me by complete surprise. Nidhi in tears over the outcome of her state and fearing Ashu to explode over Armaan but just loved how he first assured her that nothing untoward will happen and how like a true friend and brother he stood behind Armaan through his doubts, self denial and worries. Armaan thinking of his last moments with his beloved - it was very painful to read.Liked the Cardio's observations on Dr. Ashutosh and his firm views on medical etiquette but could sense Nidhi's fears during the check up without Ashu's presence - she has all along been so apprehensive right from the start of the first pregnancy. Dr. Sudhir's words of assurance must have given Ashu some relief in these troubled times. But Nidhi's mood swings in the car and then completely breaking down at home must have shocked Ashu. Her emotional quotient is at an all time low and so very fragile and she needs to be dealt with utmost love and care and Ashu will have to be extremely patient with her. You brought back her bubbly self immediately with her enjoying the burgers and sharing some fun with Ashu.Mala's phone call once again raising doubts in Armaan and he in a quandary as to the fate of his workers. The best part of the update was Ashu standing behind Armaan like a rock, giving him his firm commitment, asking him to go ahead with whatever he wants and even offering him the refuge of his house - absolutely wonderful narration.👍🏼. Armaan is at complete crossroads - just do not want him to be hurt at any cost and also hoping that you will mitigate Nidhi's suffering in the coming updates.
thank you Induji 🤗...that part caught my attention more than Nidhi's pregnancy and Ashu-Armaan convo.
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