Arakshi FF: Ajeeb si daastan.. Chapter 18C - Pg.101 27/4 (Page 57)

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loved the update.
thankx for pm.
cont soon.

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Posted: 26 June 2014 at 12:43pm | IP Logged
Loved the update Smile
awwwsssmm Clap Clap
thanks 4 pm

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Posted: 26 June 2014 at 1:06pm | IP Logged
pdate . it was awesome.especially th e las part flash back
contnue soon

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Posted: 26 June 2014 at 4:05pm | IP Logged
hi avani diHug
the way arjun took responsibility was just like ACP RawteBig smile
n sakshi n arjun knew each otherWink  intersting !
sakshi was so stressed but still very strongClapClapClap
the conversation between two was niceTongueBig smile
waiting for more revealationBig smile
update soon diHug

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Posted: 27 June 2014 at 2:45am | IP Logged
My dear Avantika,
This one has an odd, dreamy quality to it, like the waters of that babbling brook by which Sakshi and Arjun have that vital (though neither knows it as yet)  conversation.
There is the same turbulence in the thoughts of all your main characters - Professor Khanna, Sakshi, Arjun, and even the guilt-ridden Shree - as there is in the rushing waters. And just as there are sudden pools of stillness in the  flowing  stream, as opposing eddies and current cancel each other out, so is it with Sakshi and Arjun . The one is now clear that she will not succumb to the hidden weakness in her psyche  that the events of the previous night had laid bare, though the  going will not be easy.  And the other is now relieved, after a fashion,  that she seems  to have pulled back  from emotional collapse, though he is unsure if her new found strength  will last.
Your Arjun is superb, Avantika. He is all that the TV character was, and then some more. His acute sense of responsibility for everything that was done under his aegis makes him apologise to Professor Khanna with  a degree of humility and sincerity that is as impressive as it is  rare. To right a wrong is easy, especially if you are in a position of superior authority. But to acknowledge a failing that is  really not yours, and then to act on that regret without any sense of ego is truly admirable.  
I am growing to like your Sakshi a lot too, which, for me, with an aversion of any and all Sakshis  of every shape, size and nature who proliferate in this forum, is saying  a lot!
She is, at one level, a gentle girl and a  a loving niece, and the warmth  of her affection for  her Mamaji reaches out to the reader like the warmth of  a camp fire.
At another level, she is also a would-be-tough professional, who discovers all of a sudden that undercover work is far tougher and more dangerous that she had thought it to be. Luckily  for her, she is your leading lady, and nothing really bad ever happens to leading ladies, so her knight errant  arrives (to justify your  claim to being super filmy!) just in the nick of time to save her and beat up the villain good and proper.  
As I had told you the last time, I enjoyed Arjun playing Nemesis, and like Oliver Twist, almost said Please, Ma'am, may I have some more (bashing)?
I loved the fits and starts conversation, if one can call it that, between Arjun and Sakshi besides the stream, at the end of which, both of them seem to have found that "tiny window of hope", though Arjun probably does not realise that as yet.
It was a surreal exercise by  two people, almost strangers, but bound by  a shared experience courtesy the slimy Trivedi. There was Sakshi, struggling to come to terms with what had happened and what had, very luckily, not happened to her the night before,  and there was Arjun, struggling to get her  back on her feet, literally and  otherwise,  and hoping that he could do this without her shutting him out of her life. It could not have been an easy one to write, my dear,  but  you can rest content, for it has come out beautifully.
As for the cheeky chat between sakshi_stargazer and Arjun_footballfanatic, that was as unexpected as it was a sheer delight. You are a very clever girl, Avantika, to think of such an unusual and cheerful twist to your tale. I am, as you know, not at all given to fruitless speculation about the future of any FF, but here, even I cannot help picturing the scene when the two find out about their (almost) past life bond. So this was  what you meant when you had Sakshi look back with nostalgic regret:

But it hadn't always been the case. She did have someone she could rant to, about practically everything under the sun, without having to bother about being judged. 

He wasn't exactly a friend; she'd rather preferred to call him her enemy but he wasn't just that either. He was a complete opposite of what she had been, composed and matured, a bit too much for his age and he kept her grounded. But Sakshi had given up on him, on the day she decided to step out of Mumbai. And since then, he had ceased to exist for her..

Well, she might have given up on him, but who can prevail against kismat?

Oh yes, how can I forget your opening para, so redolent of the  cosy charms of Mussoorie? It took me back straightaway to the National Academy of Administration,  and the days of my faroff youth!

Shyamala Aunty

PS: I have, as you might have noted, carefully refrained from quizzing you about your new, fancy moniker!Wink

Originally posted by Fantasia_junkie

Hola! Me is back.. Yeah, after a long unexpected break.. 


I've read all your comments on the previous one and I'm really grateful to each one of you who's read it and taken out the time to leave a feedback.. 

Here's the next one.. It's slightly longer than usual, coz I had to make up for the delay and also, coz I had to avoid cliffhangers (lollipops) LOL

                                                  Chapter 9

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Nethravathi IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 June 2014 at 3:33am | IP Logged
Awesome update.  Thanks for the PM.  Arjun is with Sakshi in every minute.  Good to see him caring for Sakshi.  Mamaji's gussa softened after hearing Arjun's apology.  Shree, Arjun both are guilty for not taking action in right time.  Hope Sakshi comes out of her trauma very soon.

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SeasonOfLeaves IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 27 June 2014 at 9:06am | IP Logged
Like an idiot I am reading the chat convo again Big smileEmbarrassed
"sakshi_stargazer : Hell no! Go win a Ashok Chakra first and then we'll talk"

ROFL This was awesomeeLOLLOL
And now I have a biiig smile on my face Approve

Edited by ritu_24 - 27 June 2014 at 9:04am

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