Arakshi FF: Ajeeb si daastan.. Chapter 18C - Pg.101 27/4 (Page 22)

sweetpari4u97 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 04 February 2014 at 2:38am | IP Logged
amazing update.
superb writing.
thankx for pm.

Amritamalhotra Goldie

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Posted: 05 February 2014 at 11:01am | IP Logged
Awesome chapter Avni...
Equally magical like last chapter..
Like the smell of soil after first rain..
You have taken me to a wonder land..
Though I have never visited such one, but you taken me to the journey as if I know..
Beautiful. .
Beautiful journey of Arjun n Sakshi..
Like a golden shadow of sun rays..
Loved Arjun n Sameer..
Loved Arjun n Aisha bond also..
Purely magical chapter..
Waiting for next one...
Thanks Avni..

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SeasonOfLeaves IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 05 February 2014 at 12:07pm | IP Logged
I am soo late! But better late than never heheBig smile
Oh god, I must say you literally transported me back to Dhanaulti...God I miss that place so much now. I am wishing that I can go back to it pretty brought back a lot of memories..
It felt like I was actually there with them, in the car, listening to their conversations..I felt whatever they felt, wherever they went!
Ahhh the rain bit was so beautifully written..Sakshi's memories with her made me emotionalDisapprove
And then I loved the little scene where she asked him to put his jacket on..that was so awwwEmbarrassed it was a simple gesture and yet, so beautiful
He walked with her to the so beautiful! He read her thoughts without even her having to voice it aloudDay Dreaming
His protectiveness towards her, just a stranger, gave me goosebumps - seriously!Embarrassed
I love the bond between Aisha and ArjunSmile it made me smile

And ahh Sameer and Arjun..hope things get better between themSmile

Hmmm hmmm hmmm so much of mystery surrounding what happened with DIG Samar Anand...I shall be waiting for you to unfold that one

Beautifully written did it once againClap

May I say again, you really can publish a novelBig smile

Thank you so much for this beautiful story. HugHugHug

P.S - Hope you are feeling better nowHug
I will be waiting for the next updateeeBig smile

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Kiyaa-Rhapsody Senior Member

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Posted: 05 February 2014 at 4:35pm | IP Logged
This is probably one of the best fanfics I've read so far. 

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Snehajain IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 09 February 2014 at 2:05am | IP Logged
Awesome update...
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Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

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Swara85 Senior Member

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Posted: 13 February 2014 at 7:22am | IP Logged
Awesome update..
Part A:
Loved the trip..The scene was Beautifully described
Both felt as they know each other..
Sakshi remembering her father was heart touching..
They both have same goal, if they work together they will easily reach there.
Part B:
So Shree and Chotu are helping Arjun is nice.
Ayesha supporting Arjun and Sam masking his care and concern towards him was well written.
Love Ayesha's character in this story.
thanks for pm and sorry for late comments.cont soon

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Posted: 14 February 2014 at 11:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ll-Shilpa-ll

For me too pleaseSmile


Hey behna, just read your replied to the previous comment and now you have me really curious, looks like I am going to have to pester you to work on this one quicker also.LOL
Anyway...Yes I am feeling much better thank you, and yep I know how it can get with migraines too, and hope all is well with you now.

Hey B1.. Hug  Lol, no no please.. I will have to jump off the cliff then.. D'oh
Err.. the new yr hasn't really begun on a good note for me.. Ouch

Okay to the update...

The drive in the rain and its aftermath..sounds so romantic, but for Arjun and Sakshi it was much more. It brought them their favorite memories. Awe..I really felt for Sakshi the most at this point.

Yeah Arjun and Sakshi has both lost the one person they loved the most in the world perhaps..but I feel Sakshi's loss is so much greater, yet Arjun is no less either.

Yup.. It surely is very romantic.. And again, you're right. She's lost her father, and him, his mentor but along with that they've lost themselves as well.. The tragedy has taken away what their dreams and hopes.. 

The scene was beautifully described and that is what I love the most about your stories. You instantly feel as though everything is happening right in front of your eyes.

Awwie.. Thaannku.. Muah! 

This was a great start to what is to come of their relationship later, I am sure it will not be as smooth as this first introduction but with this you have set the connection between them, a silent bond/attraction that neither has realized yet.

Lol.. of course not! Remember, it's a mushkil prem kahani.. WinkTongue  *hi-five* LOL

It seems they have both heard of each other, but can't remember where, I wonder what it will take for things to click into place for them. Can't wait for more from this front and their next meet.Tongue

Yup! That's when Cupid #2 strikes.. Wink  Errm, you do know who # 1 is, right?Tongue

Aha..I am already loving this Ayesha of yours, not that I haven't always loved her but this one is definitely my favorite version.Wink

So she is not only a friend to Arjun and wife to Sameer, it seems she keeps the two friend connected also.

Yesh! I love her too.. I've always wanted to see her this way on the show as well.. She's someone who doesn't mince her words.. Silly

So the team was estranged after Arjun lost his mentor. It seems the loss has made Arjun angry and stubborn too and that doesn't seat well with the straight laced, by the book Sameer Rathore, yet he can't kick his friend out of his life completely either.

Now once again they are all together and I hope they are successful in proving Arjun and Sameer's mentor and Sakshi's father innocent.

Exactly.. But I had to get them all together, right? What's Arjun without the ETF? Wink

Yes this part was absolutely necessary, now we know how things will progress.

As I have already said, I am loving this story, its different and gripping so please don't make us wait long and update soon.

As always loved the update.Hug

Thank you soo much behna.. keeping my fingers crossed.. Embarrassed

shreya09 Goldie

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Posted: 18 February 2014 at 10:23pm | IP Logged
update please Day Dreaming

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