Arakshi FF: Ajeeb si daastan.. Chapter 18C - Pg.101 27/4 (Page 15)

SeasonOfLeaves IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 24 January 2014 at 5:02pm | IP Logged
New FF yayayayayayayyyDancingDancingDancing
That too by you Avantika!!! YayyyDancingDancingDancing
Ok, sorry for the super late reply to this! I had exams and then was super busy at work! Sooo just catching up with all updates Embarrassed
What a brilliant prologue! I must say again, you literally can write a novel (in fact this would make a very good oneEmbarrassed) and get it published! Like really! And i m not just saying it 
The beginning was beyond amaazing..loved how you introduced Sakshi and Arjun
I was literally at the station, waiting with Sakshi.. but feel so bad for her Ouch

Coming to the first chapter!
First of all - OMG have u been to Dhanaulti? I went there so many years ago..and it is beautiful! Its the first time i saw someone mentioning that placeBig smile MMM you transported me there, amongst the mountains and the pine treesEmbarrassed
LOOOLLL Shree and Chotu's dialogues are hilarious hahahaLOLLOL 
Aisha's entry was superbbb!! hahaha i can just imagine Chotu and Shree gobbling down the paranthas LOLLOLLOL
OMG your descriptions are so amaaazing
Sorry if the comment is getting a bit long. I m actually reading and writing at the same time lol

Did you just say that was NOT an epic meet? Seriously? Did i hear that right?
That was the most amazing first meet i have ever read! I could literally feel the rain, hear the thunder (even though its not raining here - for a change lolLOL)
And I could see the whole scene playing out in front of my the most amazing movie ever!
Ahhh it was just amazing beyond amazing!
And the last few lines were just superbbbClapClapClap

I dunno how you write so beautifully! Most of all, how come you didnt go into being a writer? You could have had a good many books published - honestly! 

Anyway already bada wala comment ho gaya hehe
I absolutely loved it! And i shall be waiting for the next update whenever it is Embarrassed
I shall be going to bed with the memory of their first meet 
Thanks Avantika HugHugHug

P.S - I hope you are feeling better now! Hug

Edited by ritu_24 - 24 January 2014 at 5:00pm

coolRD Senior Member

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Posted: 25 January 2014 at 2:26am | IP Logged
ek to aise hi I ws waitng 4 u 2 upd8 dis stry nd wen u did I dint get d tym 2 read it..wat an irony!! really sry 4 dt Unhappy
vry beautiful I mst say..
arjun ws really clse 2 sakshi's father.. dat ws y he ws so mch afctd by his death.. it's really ironical dt bth arjun nd sakshi hav d sme motive nd r fighting 4 d sme prsn d luv bt stil aren't aware of dis
wel each nd evry prt ws beautifully xplaind.. it ws suprb
waitng 4 u 2 continue Smile
thnx 4 d pm Hug
snemaan Senior Member

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Posted: 25 January 2014 at 11:19am | IP Logged
Nice one...continue soon
sweetpari4u97 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 25 January 2014 at 11:48am | IP Logged
amazing update.
loved it.
thankx for pm and update soon.
..sweetchilly.. IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 26 January 2014 at 12:57am | IP Logged
Yea, I had guessed it before.Both Arjun and Sakshi are set out for the same purpose.They both have the same goal and determination unknown to themselves.
Their first meet was well written and interesting too.
Great start.
Loved it:)    
Thanks for the PM.
hal96 Senior Member

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Posted: 27 January 2014 at 6:35am | IP Logged
So Arjun mentor was Sakshis dad
Loved this updatd
The way everyone was introduced
Update soon
Cant wait 4 their next meeting
Thanks 4 pm
Godly_Affection IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 27 January 2014 at 6:53am | IP Logged
nice update
luvd it
prachi90 Senior Member

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Posted: 29 January 2014 at 3:52am | IP Logged
intrestng start...cntinue soon:-)

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