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Avniii Avniii Avniii🤗
Acha, tell me one thing, how do you manage to keep me hooked until I see the stars at the end and realise that it's all over?
And you said it was long 🤣
Like. Honestly.
Why couldn't you just go on and on and onnn..I was beginning to enjoy the snowww (even though its so summery here!) when you stopped!
I was like this
First of all, that scene by the window when Sakshi was thinking about her father...and those memories, they just took me to another world. Especially what you said about the snow -
"If magic existed for real, this was it..."
Snow is magic 😳
I think your writing made it even more beautiful😳
And then the school scene where they meet I was so reminded of my school and the prayers!
Btw every time they met I was like
This cracked me up so bad 🤣
"Aap barf mein bhi jog pe jaate hain?", she casted a glance at his casual attire and raised a brow.
LOOOLLL barf mein jogging...although that would be quite an eye pleasing sight☺️ Hayeee mujhe wahan jaana haiii
Hmmm wonder what Sakshi is planning now...🤔
I feel the same about hospitals as Sakshi but then she has a painful memory associated with it...that was sad
LOOL Arjun had a break and where did he decide to be? By her side. Sighhh
Yeah you have awakened the hopeless romantic in me again 😳
I realise I am typing an essay out of the comment but I am sure you wont mind😆😆😆
Achaaa so, that scene by the temple was just...
Even silences can speak volumes..sighhh. He was there for her when she needed someone the most *dreamy eyes*
Arjun pursed his lips and nodded, "I'm glad you didn't mind me coming here. I just wanted to make sure that he was fine." That you were fine, a voice corrected him..
Yess yesss just what I thought lol 😆
You're soo falling for her ACP Rawte😉
This part was just beyond beautifully written Avniii😃
Then the scene at the hospital mess just made me hungry😆 Even though I have just had dinner lol
It was such a simple moment and yet I think your words made it so much more beautiful ❤️
Am I making sense here?😆
The last bit...so he wants to get Sakshi back? But the question still remains as to what assignment she is on! You're not gonna reveal that until later are you😆
Anyhooo waiting to read moreee!
Thank youu for the PM and hope you update that TS soon😉
Am being greedy don't mind meee🤣
Thanks soo much for giving a "long" update (it wasn't long ..not when it's your writing😆)
I wanna go back to Dhanaulti! *pouts*
Update sooon and love youu🤗
Edited by ritu_24 - 9 years ago
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