Arakshi FF: Ajeeb si daastan.. Chapter 18C - Pg.101 27/4 - Page 18

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Posted: 10 years ago
Res. currently swamped by school, but I will definitely read this as soon as I can! Can't wait :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Indeed it has been ages since u updated this story but have to give it to u that u did make up by posting a long one...

From the meeting at the Dhaba to the ride home and upto the meet in the temple all was extremely well executed

Really looking forward to the story unfolding more and lots of arakshi meets and scenes

Thanks for the pm and update soon plz x
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb
just amazing
so some secret about sakshi open wow story theme change now its more interesting veri well written Either its Ayesha, sameer, arjun or sakshi all character n their states are veri well potryd.
Thank u so much 4 such a long update
and yeh kea in end Cliff-hanger Eagerly w8ng 4 next plz continue soon n thanx 4 pm
and i love this story so app please mujay pm karna.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Here you come back...
First I hope you are feeling better now.

Back to the update,
Sakshi is in middle of some big plan and the only name that we got out now is Jay.
But his sudden reaction on hearing Arjun's name is a bit confusing. It makes me think whats actualy his role. is it the supportive or not.
Having experience with your way of hiding the character's actual face till the last moment, it rings an extra thinking bell for me. and plus your note that Gorky have given you some ideas supports my doubt.
Any way I am really going to keep an eye open out and if possible a Watson hat, as I have a personal Sherlock with me, (you know who)

Your description of Danaulti made me to Google search it and Mashallah... kya jagah chune hai!!!
You have no idea how much I liked those pics. And i wish to see it one day.
Have you ever been there? After seeing those pics and reading it, it looks like a travel memoir. 
Mashallah!!! Superb dear.

Aisha!!! there she is again to take my heart away.
Her rapo with Arjun is truly heart warming. So the couple is going to be away for a while? And who as that who heard the talks?

Sakshi and her uncle's talks were too good.
I feel like I understand both Arjun's and Sakshi's loneliness. And all thanks to your writing.

The mandir scene... no words at all. Esp the surrounding description... I just loved it. and they meet again!

Precap me hi jaan loge meri Maa??? jaldi update karna.. and yes only after your health is better.
Tale care.
Oh yes bhool gayi... should I say that I will be waiting for the update? you know it na? and so bring it on my dear.

Kafi lambi hogayi na? sorry

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Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful update... like all the time...
i am really loving this different Sakshi
she is there for something big... her mission...
Arjun & Sameer... their glaring & smirking session was rather cute ... i loved it...
Aisha !!!! my all time favorite lady... her bonding with Arjun... a treat to read..
and the scenes of Mandir... they met again... beautifully written...
very very very nice writing
loved it 👍🏼

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Posted: 10 years ago
first thnks for pm 
i read prologue an dfirst chapter ( gotta go with something will read ASA i gt back frm ds)
i love the way u write and describe things
well this is really mystery 

lookinf froward fr whole story

oh yeah somewhere in cmmnts i read u want filmy things with ur last one 
wht does last one mean u r nt writing after tht  dnt do tht 
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update
so Sakshi hold something really big in herself
n her convo with Jay was nice n interesting one
Arjun n Aisha's bond is really nice
Sakshi n her uncle's convo was nice
n also depicted Sakshi's pain
Arakshi's mind state was wonderfully described
and the mandir sequence was beautiful
thanks for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
loved it
Beautifully written
Arjun and Sakshi's feelings were beautifully described
Sakshi is up to something Big
interesting
Aisha-Arjun convo was great
The Mandir Sequence was Beautiful
Just loved it
waiting for the next part
continue soon


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Posted: 10 years ago
That was one nice long update more of sakshi and less of arjun but interesting
sakshi has little doubt of her own and wants info on arjun
she has a partner jay and they r answerable to someone 😕
Both arjun sakshi inspite of having everyone around them still feels lonely and want that some one special in there lifes
Guess with out realising they have found each other
what precap only dhamaka per kya kuch to hint deya hota 😡 😕
thanks for pm
And ya the story is really beautiful 😃


Forgot to ask hope ur not planing to give grey shades to sakshi according to what gorky sir had planned poor girl had enough of in serail she didnot get deserved screen space and nethir she got her love nor any interesting work to do
so atlest in ur story give her all that she deserves 😊
Edited by sisodia_shefali - 10 years ago