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As Long As Our Lives Shall Last (Page 5)

Onir IF-Rockerz
Onir
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Posted: 19 January 2014 at 9:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by dqno1

Originally posted by Onir

Originally posted by mayyo

Originally posted by Onir

Originally posted by mayyo

Originally posted by Onir

Originally posted by mayyo

Originally posted by Onir

Originally posted by mayyo

Originally posted by Onir

WowClap

Now I know...Wink

You know what? LOL
That ...LOL

That what? LOL
meaning...LOL

Kya meaning?! LOL
wohi jo... ...LOL

Hadd ho gayi! Do do words kar ke hi bata do ab! LOL
Simple sa toh hai... I had thought that you would have guessed it by now... LOL
 
 
ROFL
 
QOE meets her match...Clap
 LOLLOL
Avi you're forgetting we're twinnies... Wink

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mayyodqno1

dqno1 IF-Stunnerz
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Posted: 19 January 2014 at 9:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Onir

Originally posted by dqno1

Originally posted by Onir

Originally posted by mayyo

Originally posted by Onir

Originally posted by mayyo

Originally posted by Onir

Originally posted by mayyo

Originally posted by Onir

Originally posted by mayyo

Originally posted by Onir

WowClap

Now I know...Wink

You know what? LOL
That ...LOL

That what? LOL
meaning...LOL

Kya meaning?! LOL
wohi jo... ...LOL

Hadd ho gayi! Do do words kar ke hi bata do ab! LOL
Simple sa toh hai... I had thought that you would have guessed it by now... LOL
 
 
ROFL
 
QOE meets her match...Clap
 LOLLOL
Avi you're forgetting we're twinnies... Wink
 
But you are caught up with her on her unique talent now..LOL

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Onirmayyo

Onir IF-Rockerz
Onir
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Posts: 8625

Posted: 19 January 2014 at 9:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by dqno1

Originally posted by Onir

Originally posted by dqno1

Originally posted by Onir

Originally posted by mayyo

Originally posted by Onir

Originally posted by mayyo

Originally posted by Onir

Originally posted by mayyo

Originally posted by Onir

Originally posted by mayyo

Originally posted by Onir

WowClap

Now I know...Wink

You know what? LOL
That ...LOL

That what? LOL
meaning...LOL

Kya meaning?! LOL
wohi jo... ...LOL

Hadd ho gayi! Do do words kar ke hi bata do ab! LOL
Simple sa toh hai... I had thought that you would have guessed it by now... LOL
 
 
ROFL
 
QOE meets her match...Clap
 LOLLOL
Avi you're forgetting we're twinnies... Wink
 
But you are caught up with her on her unique talent now..LOL
 LOL Majja aa raha tha... and aaj hum dono pagal ho gaye hai LOL

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mayyodqno1

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Posted: 19 January 2014 at 9:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Onir

Originally posted by dqno1

Originally posted by Onir

Originally posted by dqno1

Originally posted by Onir

Originally posted by mayyo

Originally posted by Onir

Originally posted by mayyo

Originally posted by Onir

Originally posted by mayyo

Originally posted by Onir

Originally posted by mayyo

Originally posted by Onir

WowClap

Now I know...Wink

You know what? LOL
That ...LOL

That what? LOL
meaning...LOL

Kya meaning?! LOL
wohi jo... ...LOL

Hadd ho gayi! Do do words kar ke hi bata do ab! LOL
Simple sa toh hai... I had thought that you would have guessed it by now... LOL
 
 
ROFL
 
QOE meets her match...Clap
 LOLLOL
Avi you're forgetting we're twinnies... Wink
 
But you are caught up with her on her unique talent now..LOL
 LOL Majja aa raha tha... and aaj hum dono pagal ho gaye hai LOL
 
Eh lo!!!Shocked
 
Aaj tum dono mere unique talent pe bhi caught up ho gaye...LOL

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Onir IF-Rockerz
Onir
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Posted: 19 January 2014 at 9:20am | IP Logged
^ After all we have to maintain our reputation na ... we 3 are ... Wink
LOL

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Posted: 19 January 2014 at 9:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Onir

^ After all we have to maintain our reputation na ... we 3 are ... Wink
LOL
 
That we are ... looney tunes...LOLLOLLOL

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Onir IF-Rockerz
Onir
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Posted: 19 January 2014 at 9:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by dqno1

Originally posted by Onir

^ After all we have to maintain our reputation na ... we 3 are ... Wink
LOL
 
That we are ... looney tunes...LOLLOLLOL
Oh yeah LOLLOLLOL
But I thought we're like Uncle scrooges 3 nephews... 

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mayyo IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 19 January 2014 at 11:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Onir

Originally posted by mayyo

Haan, haq toh banta hai. Big smile

No, she doesn't write often anymore. Just helps us around in our essays and stuff.
This poem was written about thirty years back, when she lost someone she was very close to and I liked it so much that I have it saved with me for almost sevens years.
Oh ... she is good... Very good. expressing something so impactful and deep with just few lines is an art and needs to be felt at the same time.Clap
30 years back... hmmm .. do tell her I loved it.

I will. Thanks Onir! Smile

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