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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: Onir

wohi jo... ...😆


Hadd ho gayi! Do do words kar ke hi bata do ab! 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: mayyo


Hadd ho gayi! Do do words kar ke hi bata do ab! 😆

Simple sa toh hai... I had thought that you would have guessed it by now... 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: Onir

Simple sa toh hai... I had thought that you would have guessed it by now...😆


I think I have. I've just been playing along. 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: mayyo


I think I have. I've just been playing along. 😆

Me too... hum twinnies ko majja jo aa raha tha... 😆
Now you know it... so tell me what it is? 
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: Onir

Me too... hum twinnies ko majja jo aa raha tha...😆

Now you know it... so tell me what it is?


Ae lo! Test lene pe hi utar aayi! 😲

😆 😆

Yes, that's where the germs of writing stuff have come from, but I'm not even close to how she writes. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: mayyo


Ae lo! Test lene pe hi utar aayi! 😲

😆 😆

Yes, that's where the germs of writing stuff have come from, but I'm not even close to how she writes. 😊

Ab teri Twinnie hu toh itna toh test lena ka haq banta hai na 😉
Bang on girl... Perfect answer... 👍🏼 
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Posted: 10 years ago
Does she write on a regular basis??? 
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Posted: 10 years ago
Haan, haq toh banta hai. 😃

No, she doesn't write often anymore. Just helps us around in our essays and stuff.
This poem was written about thirty years back, when she lost someone she was very close to and I liked it so much that I have it saved with me for almost sevens years.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: mayyo

Haan, haq toh banta hai. 😃

No, she doesn't write often anymore. Just helps us around in our essays and stuff.
This poem was written about thirty years back, when she lost someone she was very close to and I liked it so much that I have it saved with me for almost sevens years.

Oh ... she is good... Very good. expressing something so impactful and deep with just few lines is an art and needs to be felt at the same time. 👏
30 years back... hmmm .. do tell her I loved it. 
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: Onir

Simple sa toh hai... I had thought that you would have guessed it by now... 😆

 
 
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