ArHi OS - Aye Dil Bata - Page 5

Awesome update..loved it a lot.. 😊

he thought she left him
and how much he panicked
but she was still there
thank god for that
but if he hadnt let it out she might have left him one day for sure
oh my she had to do this though Edited by chavvi16 - 10 years ago

Lovely OS !! This is the way IPK should have been !! They were just showing Khushi as an OTT person which she is not !! She is a very strong person and I loved the way u portrayed her in this OS !!

that was awesome <3
loved the story

Wow.. That was just so damn amazing! Loved it! :D Thanks for the Pm.

Very realistic OS.. CVs would never think in this angle ..

I have read such a meaningful OS after, a very long time! :)

This is a really, really good take on what happened in that scene. I thought the way Khushi reacted to those words was completely out of character and ridiculous- no one would actually react like that if their husband told them they were nothing. I really like how you didn't make Khushi into a whiny brat either, who holds grudges for the heck of it. I like how she understands that Arnav has these insecurities, and attempts to help him with it. Really well done.

Owhh..that was heavy duty and I loved it because it was very well thought of. I liked it that Khushi didn't actually turn away from him at the sign of trouble but evoked it in him that helped him to share his heart s aloof part with her.