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Culaccino ~ An ArHi SS | Ch 3 Pg 45 Note Pg 58 (4/4/14) (Page 54)

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Posted: 02 March 2014 at 3:28pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by diyadivya

love arnav's dad
awsum updt

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Posted: 02 March 2014 at 3:30pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by aarrsshhii

the part were he was with her was tender... despite all his inner confusions and turmoils he does deeply care for her... well khushi has to be elated afterall his love remains unfaltered even now... hope khushi will be able undo whatever that she did and win him back completely...
my heart goes out to arnav here...
and yes the proposal was simply beautiful...and dreamy... :)

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Posted: 02 March 2014 at 3:31pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by prpk525

Loved it..

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Posted: 02 March 2014 at 3:32pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by rajiarshian

Really i like d way u write
simply amazing
waiting 4 next update

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Posted: 16 March 2014 at 11:20pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by soaringskies

lovely update FPBig smile

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Posted: 16 March 2014 at 11:21pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by dikilove6

I love this ff. Its fabulous. :D

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Posted: 16 March 2014 at 11:21pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by gmsk

Awww..Very cute..
Loved it
Thnks for d PM :)

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Posted: 16 March 2014 at 11:31pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -doe-eyes-

This was the perfect time for that flashback. I could feel the magic of the moment coming off my screen and drowning in it and after the tensions of the previous chapter, it was blissful. That moment had been poignant because it had marked a beginning for them, and this moment, as he promises to try, even though he's not sure it'll work- the chance that he gives her is another beginning, and I hope for their sakes that it's a beginning of good things :) This was the most beautiful part of the update, for me, how the past and present are intertwined and you feel like you're on the verge of something wonderful happening. I'm so happy he gave her the chance, so happy Khushi is determined to erase each of his doubts. The hope she gleans from his ambivalent agreement was palpable.
I love the relationship shared between Arnav and his father. The older man has a wise head on his shoulders and I'm glad to see him being more rational than his son instead of flying into a temper as on assumes almost hereditary with the family. His keeping his cool and choosing not to judge at the heat of the moment, and valuing the relationship ArHi shares makes him an awesome dad and character in my book. His bluntness only makes me feel happier, because I feel Arnav needs someone like that in his life, to keep him grounded. I also love how in this story we get to see an Arnav who was left behind by his mother, and doesn't abhor his father. I've honestly never read an FF with this concept before, and you've done it so well and so realistically this might have been happening on screen the whole time *claps*

The last scene...sigh. Reminded me of the night of her birthday. The Arnav here too succumbs to his emotions when no one can see him- or at least, that's what he thinks. It was a beautiful, poignant, profound scene, and I'm kinda running out of adjectives here to describe how much I'm enjoying this story. Continue soon! 

Awww! Thanks so much for such a wonderful and detailed feedback and for all the praise (undeserving praise!) you have heaped on me! I am so glad that you liked the chapter, the flashback, the relationship between Arnav and his father and are liking the story and the character dynamics! In all honesty, I want this story to step away from the mainstream here in the FF world and look at things from another perspective and in the process make us question (you and me both) our own biases and conjectures...

So thanks a lot for noticing all the things you did, makes writing worthwhile! :)

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