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Culaccino ~ An ArHi SS | Ch 3 Pg 45 Note Pg 58 (4/4/14) (Page 48)

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Posted: 13 February 2014 at 9:44am | IP Logged
I just read ur story n it's really good, the concept is different.

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Posted: 13 February 2014 at 10:59am | IP Logged
Lovely chapter. Smile

Arnav and his father share a rare deep bond. The way he looks upto his father and seeks his advice in important matters is so goodt to see.

Im happy he agreed to khushi's wish. It takes a lot of effort, open-mindedness, and a heart filled with loads of true love to forgive your partner for infidelity. Khushi is so lucky to have him in his life. 

Looking forward to the next chapter. Wonderful story btw. Big smile

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Posted: 13 February 2014 at 10:24pm | IP Logged
Khushi did cheat on Arnav but why and under what circumstances .
Will you reveal this or leave it to our imagination?
I must applaud you for for daring to experiment with such a genre inspite of knowing the chappals that could have come your way.


Edited by MsDroolKanthan - 13 February 2014 at 10:24pm

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Posted: 22 February 2014 at 11:12am | IP Logged
hey just read the story
 
I must say it is different from otherss
as khushi has done something wrong
which effect their relationship
 
love arnav dad he has a great bonding with both khushi and arnav .
 
I don't know arnav is doing correct or wrong Because we don't know actually what happened.
 
but one thing is clear he still love and care for her
 
will love to read more pls continue soon
 

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Posted: 22 February 2014 at 8:04pm | IP Logged
Wow that was such an awesome update!!! Just loved how tender Arnav was with Khushi, despite everything he just cannot stop loving herSmile

Every story Arnav is morally flawed this is so different to see flawed Khushi!!! Please continue soon cannot wait to see how the story progressesSmile


Edited by anu1017 - 22 February 2014 at 8:03pm

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Posted: 28 February 2014 at 1:40pm | IP Logged
Missing the story.
Looong time.

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Posted: 01 March 2014 at 7:51pm | IP Logged
This is such an intense story and interplay of such strong, raw emotions, it has me rattled.!
As I was reading the prologue, I was alternating betwwen Arnav & Khushi as to  who is saying what and who betrayed who. I also didn't realize they were married before it was revealed in the newspaper clipping in chapter 1. BTW, those clippings were smart idea.!

From the prologue it is apparent that the cheating did not happen all the way but I'm just curious to know what made Khushi to take such a step as it is revealed in the following chapters that she shared a loving relationship with Arnav and treated his father as her own father.

Adultry is something inexcusable whether it is done by husband or wife.! And so Arnav's conflicting emotions are totally fathomable.! Your title of the story is so apt for what Arnav is going through.!

Before I end this comment, I like to quote this para from a newsletter from Spiritual Wealth, title being "The One Thing That Changes Everything"

"There is one thing that is common to every individual, relationship, team, family, organization, nation, economy, and civilization throughout the world - one thing which, if removed, will destroy the most powerful government, the most thriving economy, the most influential leadership, the greatest friendship, the strongest character, the deepest love.

On the other hand, if developed and leveraged, that one thing has the potential to create unparalleled success and prosperity in every dimension of life. Yet, it is the least understood, most neglected, and most underestimated possibility of our time.

That one thing is trust." - Stephen M.R. Covey


Cheers
K


Edited by kclovearshi - 01 March 2014 at 7:55pm

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Posted: 02 March 2014 at 2:20am | IP Logged
hii,
when are u planning to update?...this is really a nice storyBig smile

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