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Culaccino ~ An ArHi SS | Ch 3 Pg 45 Note Pg 58 (4/4/14) (Page 24)

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Posted: 17 January 2014 at 9:46pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by IronButterfly

What a brilliant job you did with this first chapter.

Really liked how you added these articles.

Nice to have a bit of insight to their past and relationship and i'm sure we will be getting it in future too which will help understand the characters better.

For a base, you've done brilliantly well.

People who are used to the best find it difficult to manage with anything less than that and that is what is happening with Khushi.
She's only seen love from Arnav and his father. It's difficult for her to adjust to this indifference but at least she's trying.

And despite everything Arnav is failing to be indifferent.

Bring it on!

Thanks for the detailed feedback! :D

You have described Khushi's state well - she has always ever seen Arnav's love and protective stance and hence his perceived indifference is a bitter pill to swallow not only inside the house but outside in the media too where she had always enjoyed Arnav's shielding previously but yes she also knows that his indifference is just 'perceived' and hence wants to still attempt to make it work :)

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Posted: 17 January 2014 at 9:52pm | IP Logged
I'll be honest, I'm having trouble believing that khushi cheated. It's so hard to
Wrap my hear around. But cheers to you for trying something completely out of the box, and I'll admit- it's gotten me interested. I can't wait to see the reasons behind what happened (although I have to say, I'm hoping there will be a happily ever after- after the angst is solved, of course). I'm looking forward to this- I love your other story, so I can't wait to see where this goes!

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Posted: 17 January 2014 at 10:37pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by gmsk

Superb start..
With the help of that article clipping and stuff, it update seemed more realistic
Enjoyed it
Lookng forward to read more
Cheers for d pm :)

Thanks so much for the feedback! :D
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Posted: 17 January 2014 at 10:38pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Javeria3991

Awesome update 
Khushi is back for six months in Arnav's home. Everything is difficult for both of them. 
Davendra is the only hope and help Khushi could get. 
Poor ArShi. 
Update soon 

Thanks for the feedback! :D
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Posted: 17 January 2014 at 10:39pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by amaypranay

Fabulously penned...
It's hard for me to doubt...Khushi...is there more to tell...


Arnav is heart-broken...and wish he investigate's further...


Looking forward to the next...




Thanks! :D

But think about this (even if there be may more which might or might not be the case) - why is it so difficult to doubt Khushi of cheating on Arnav and would the same difficulty arise in believing had the roles been reversed? :)
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Posted: 17 January 2014 at 11:59pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Bavari

Nice update. Did she really cheat on him. Curiously waiting for next chapter. Thanks for the PM.
 

Thanks for the feedback! :D

And I think the answer to your question has been given in the prologue itself.


Edited by FieryPhoenix - 18 January 2014 at 6:41am

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Posted: 18 January 2014 at 12:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sanaya.Barun

This made me so emotional! Though i don't like to read the Sad stories coz there's already too much in life to take fictional's character's pain. But i still read and loved it.
The whole hand burn thing till the end just touched my heart.
I'm so liking His dad's character.
But I'm not able to believe Khushi cheated.. And it doesn't look like Arnav misunderstood her. Just tell me she was drunk or something.. Damn! :(

Aww Arnav! Disapprove

Awww! Thanks so much for reading this even though you dont like the genre :)

And about not being able to believe that Khushi cheated? Why do we put her character up, just by the name that too, on a pedestal so high? She is also a human who can make errors, no? Anyway, keep reading to know the answers to all your questions! :)
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Posted: 18 January 2014 at 12:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mpuhan

nice update

Thanks! :D

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