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Culaccino ~ An ArHi SS | Ch 3 Pg 45 Note Pg 58 (4/4/14) (Page 22)

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Posted: 16 January 2014 at 1:16am | IP Logged
Nice update Clap

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Posted: 16 January 2014 at 2:18am | IP Logged
Very interesting chapter...both r so much in pain nd u showed it very nicely.allready waiting for next part.

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Posted: 16 January 2014 at 8:05am | IP Logged
Wow interesting concept. I have never heard of a story where Khushi has cheated and am quite interested in the plot you have portrayed! Hats off to you for trying something different and looking forward to the journey ahead :-)
Thanks for Crazy4Sobti and Anupama for recommending the story. Great banner Geeta Clap

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Posted: 17 January 2014 at 4:18am | IP Logged
Awesome start !! I'm not sure if Khushi really cheated on him !! I don't think so !! 

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Posted: 17 January 2014 at 9:33pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by adhu11

can't judge khushi so early waiting for more update.feeling bad for arnav

Well its always good to wait before passing any judgments :)

Thanks for the feedback! :D
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Posted: 17 January 2014 at 9:33pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by famiya

interesting update

Thanks! :D
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Posted: 17 January 2014 at 9:34pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by N0306

Very very interesting story and your writing is very polished.

The title is what I like the most.. Scars of our deeds it goes so well with the concept..

Thanks so much for the feedback! :D

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Posted: 17 January 2014 at 9:36pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mistyrains

That was a very interesting chapter. There was Khushi, who I perceived to be someone very thoughtful, very understanding and level-headed. Clearly, she loves Arnav and is heartbroken about their situation. Then Arnav's father, I don't know why but I'm really intrigued by this character. I loved the relationship he and Khushi share, its touching. But I have a feeling there's more to him than what you are letting us know at this point. Lastly, Arnav stole the thunder in this chapter, for me. That last sentence, his inability to see Khushi in pain, so beautifully described. I could imagine that conflicted, that broken look on Sobti's face while reading this. Marvelous job! Continue soon! :)

Thanks so much for the detailed feedback! :D

And if you could imagine that last part, then I think I can breathe easy! Visualization is always my aim :)

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