Culaccino ~ An ArHi SS | Ch 3 Pg 45 Note Pg 58 (4/4/14) - Page 18

Posted: 10 years ago
I'll be honest, I'm having trouble believing that khushi cheated. It's so hard to
Wrap my hear around. But cheers to you for trying something completely out of the box, and I'll admit- it's gotten me interested. I can't wait to see the reasons behind what happened (although I have to say, I'm hoping there will be a happily ever after- after the angst is solved, of course). I'm looking forward to this- I love your other story, so I can't wait to see where this goes!
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by gmsk


Superb start..
With the help of that article clipping and stuff, it update seemed more realistic
Enjoyed it
Lookng forward to read more
Cheers for d pm :)

Thanks so much for the feedback! :D
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by Javeria3991


Awesome update 
Khushi is back for six months in Arnav's home. Everything is difficult for both of them. 
Davendra is the only hope and help Khushi could get. 
Poor ArShi. 
Update soon 

Thanks for the feedback! :D
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by amaypranay


Fabulously penned...
It's hard for me to doubt...Khushi...is there more to tell...


Arnav is heart-broken...and wish he investigate's further...


Looking forward to the next...




Thanks! :D

But think about this (even if there be may more which might or might not be the case) - why is it so difficult to doubt Khushi of cheating on Arnav and would the same difficulty arise in believing had the roles been reversed? :)
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by Bavari


Nice update. Did she really cheat on him. Curiously waiting for next chapter. Thanks for the PM.
 

Thanks for the feedback! :D

And I think the answer to your question has been given in the prologue itself.
Edited by FieryPhoenix - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by Sanaya.Barun


This made me so emotional! Though i don't like to read the Sad stories coz there's already too much in life to take fictional's character's pain. But i still read and loved it.
The whole hand burn thing till the end just touched my heart.
I'm so liking His dad's character.
But I'm not able to believe Khushi cheated.. And it doesn't look like Arnav misunderstood her. Just tell me she was drunk or something.. Damn! :(

Aww Arnav! 😒

Awww! Thanks so much for reading this even though you dont like the genre :)

And about not being able to believe that Khushi cheated? Why do we put her character up, just by the name that too, on a pedestal so high? She is also a human who can make errors, no? Anyway, keep reading to know the answers to all your questions! :)
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by mpuhan


nice update

Thanks! :D
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by roma_khanam


A very interesting story. Loved the update. Thanks for the pm

Thanks for the feedback! :D
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by imrannc


Interesting looking forward

Thanks! :D
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by 18shabbo


ah ha! Khushi did what she is being accused of? or she almost did it? or did it for a reason?...please jaldi batao , coz i cant see Arnav so hurt!!!!!!!!!!😭
wonderfully written!!👏

Aapke pehle do sawaalo ka jawaab prologue mein hi hai aur teesre ka tab milega jab aap yeh kahani padhti rahengi :)

Thanks for the feedback! :D

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