Culaccino ~ An ArHi SS | Ch 3 Pg 45 Note Pg 58 (4/4/14) - Page 16

Posted: 10 years ago
Really liked this chapter, FP. You words clearly described the pain and anguish in these situations. It is hard to let go so easily for Arnav understandably. I loved the dad and DIL part. All of it was very realistic. Will wait to see how it plays out.
Posted: 10 years ago
This looks so promising FP dear...
Loved it...
Somehow it is very difficult to believe that Khushi has cheated Arnav...
I have a feeling that theres more to it...I will wait for the story to unfold...
You write so brilliantly...👏
Posted: 10 years ago
This is a brilliant story FP.
I was in tears reading it.
Brilliantly depicted emotions.
One could feel the love and the hurt of all three characters.
You've made a fan of your writing with this chapter.
Loved it.
And Geeta's banner is too good. 
Posted: 10 years ago
Very interesting chapter. Feeling bad for Arnav - if khushi has cheated why is she now tring to act so normal.
Posted: 10 years ago
Very interesting chapter...both r so much in pain nd u showed it very nicely.allready waiting for next part.
Posted: 10 years ago
Wow interesting concept. I have never heard of a story where Khushi has cheated and am quite interested in the plot you have portrayed! Hats off to you for trying something different and looking forward to the journey ahead :-)
Thanks for Crazy4Sobti and Anupama for recommending the story. Great banner Geeta 👏
Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome start !! I'm not sure if Khushi really cheated on him !! I don't think so !! 
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by adhu11


can't judge khushi so early waiting for more update.feeling bad for arnav

Well its always good to wait before passing any judgments :)

Thanks for the feedback! :D
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by famiya


interesting update

Thanks! :D
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by N0306


Very very interesting story and your writing is very polished.

The title is what I like the most.. Scars of our deeds it goes so well with the concept..

Thanks so much for the feedback! :D

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