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TaaRey & Swaron : Make u feel tat u love me (uptd pg no 97) 26/8/1 (Page 15)

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Posted: 13 January 2014 at 6:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aditipandey.adi

awesum concept ..! Clap
luvd d 1st update .. Thumbs Up

taani has changed alot ..!  Big smile

OMG .. taani talks to sharon daily ..! Shocked

taani bringing swaron 2gedr ..! Big smile

what will rey do to brng taani closer to him ..! Confused

excytd 4 d update .. Big smile

update soon ..
thank u 4 d pm .. Smile


Thank u for readingSmile

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Posted: 13 January 2014 at 6:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by priyal_TaaRey

Superb concept
interesting teaser
awesome update...loved it
update soonSmile

Thank u for readingSmile

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Posted: 13 January 2014 at 6:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by navk

nice start
plzzz pm me also


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Posted: 13 January 2014 at 6:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by fantaarey

Hey!!!!!!!!!!
i am a dieheart fan of taarey and swaron
and i love the updates 
pls... PM me when u update 
and i cant comment daily because of my prelims
but i try my best 
Pls...PM me...

Thank u for readingSmile

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Posted: 13 January 2014 at 6:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Mon_tr

awesome chapter..sory for late comentng.i ws busy in sum work

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Posted: 13 January 2014 at 6:43am | IP Logged

TaaRey & Swaron: Make u feel tat u love me

 

Chapter  2

 

Recap:

                   Taani's    re-entry    to college

 

 

 

Nil:guys whts gng on between taani nd swayam I dnt understand

Rey: dude its gng 2 be more fun nd masti now (wid his killer smile)

 

Rey: (in mind) taani I no u still love me. Now u r trying 2 bring swayam Sharon together in tat time I vil make u feel tat u love me nd vil make u 2 accept tat u love. So get ready sweet heart

 

Later in Canteen every1 r there talking nd doing masti. Taani was talking wid gals nd all the time Swayam was thinking  nd Rey was staring at taani nd Thinking how 2 make her feel tat she loves him.

 

Simmi: so rinni shall we leave

Rinni:ya simmi its time to leave

Simmi: so guys shall we leave

Taani: haa Bhai shall we... (taani started 2 say  as usual bt she  stopped wen she realized wht she was saying)

Swayam: (in mind) come on taani pls complete wht u was saying pls come to home wid me

Taani: (in mind) hey Krishna ji wht I was saying  no taani u  should bring bhai bhabhi  together so u have 2 handle tis

 

Taani: sorry. Bhabhi shall we leave

Swayam: (in mind) shit no

Sharon: r u sure taani?

Taani: ya bhabhi we shall go

Sharon: k then cool we shall leave bye guys bye rey

Rey: bye

 

Taani and Sharon moved 2 leave but they were stopped by swayam

 

Swayam: taani ek min

Taani: haa bhai

Swayam: if u were nt in our home it doesn't mean tat I dnt care abt u so after reaching  sharon's home give me a call r msg me got tat

Taani was so happy tat swayam was still the same caring  nd possessive bhai

 

Taani: ( wid very happy tone)  ya sure bhai

Swayam: k then leave

 

After taani nd Sharon leaving

Kria: k swayam bye then I m leaving 2 my home

Swayam: hey wht r u saying I told right u r going 2 stay in my home na

Kria: no swayam its k it was nt serious right

Swayam: no I m serious u r staying wid me ya as taani said u can stay other than her room bcoz I no she cnt stay widout me so she vil be back soon

 

Kria: k then as u wish I vil cum

Swayam: k bye

 

After kria nd every1 left only reyam were there

Swayam:oh no taani is in Mumbai nd she is nt going 2 stay wid me  wat I m going 2 do  of course she is going 2 stay wid Sharon  so she will be fine nd safe  bt even also I m nt satisfied abt it

 

Rey who was seriously deep in thinking

Rey: (in mind) omg taani is nt going 2 stay wid swayam then I shall meet her at any time wow so superb  bt Sharon is there  man even I can handle Swayam bt Sharon no ways if she finds me I m cuming 2 her home through window

 

In sharon's  home

 

Sharon: taani welcome home yr

Taani: thank u bhabhi

Sharon: taani have u messaged swayam tat u have reached here he vil b worried

Taani: oh some1 is caring abt my bhai

Sharon: taani

Taani: k k I vil msg bhai

 

Taani sent a msg 2 swayam

Taani: bhabhi bhai have sent a reply tat take care  k now

Sharon: ya k

 

Sharon showed taani her room  nd later she was in living room nd thinking how to bring swaron together. But she was disturbed by the door bell

 

Taani: bhabhi I vil c

 

Saying so taani went and opened the door nd found only Rey who was standing there wid a wide smile on his face wen he saw taani

Both forgot eachother and  looking into each other's eyes very lovingly .and rey saw taani who was totally lost in him nd he rang the door bell again 2 bring her back 2 her sense.

Taani: wht? (wid the attitude)

Rey: wht?

Taani: wht  r u doing here? Just go  away

Rey:oh hello tis is nt ur bhai r ur home tis is my best friends home I vil cum here at any time ( said in a husky voice)  

Taani: just go to hell

Rey: thank u sweet heart

 

Taani's mouth was O shaped

Taani: dnt call me sweet heart

Rey: k as u say sweet heart

Taani glared at him nd Rey was enjoying seeing tis new attitude taani  so much

 

Sharon: taani who was it ( she saw rey) hey rey

Rey: hi Sharon

Taani gave way for rey 2 get inside

 

Taani:  bhabhi  u carry on I vil make dinner

Sharon:no taani kaka vil do tat

Taani:no bhabhi I love 2 cook so if  u dnt mind shall I use ur kitchen

Rey: ya of course

Taani: did I ask u? no na then pls shut ur mouth

 

Saying so she went frm there to kitchen. Here  rey smiling like an idiot cing taani  nd Sharon saw tat

Sharon:rey stop smiling like a stupid

Rey: k k

Sharon: so whts the matter rey looing so happy?

Rey: ya of course the only reason is taani

Sharon: hmmm

Rey: Sharon bt u didn't say me tat taani's engagement was stopped nd she was cuming here

Sharon: taani told me I shouldn't tell anything 2 any1

Rey: k leave tat any ways I m so happy Sharon

Sharon: bt rey I don't know wat she is going 2 do abt bring me nd swayam together

Rey: ya  even I thought abt it

Sharon: wht she vil do rey?

Rey: no idea Sharon tis time I vil nt come in between u nd swayam only taani vil bring u together nd I vil b busy in bring back my taani 2 me

Sharon: oh k k. haa rey did u talk 2 swayam abt taani staying here?

Rey: no Sharon he  was blabbering to himself abt tat  he cant stay without taani. Lets c wats going 2 happen

 

Sharey were talking nd at the same time in Swayam's home Kria reached there nd she settled herself there.

 

In sharon's home

 

Taani:Bhabhi dinner is ready came on bhabhi we shall eat

Sharon: ya cuming taani

Taani: haa bhabhi say ur friend also 2 cum nd eat

 

Sharon nd rey smiled  nd come 2 dinning table . all three started 2 eat

Sharon: taani u r awesome in cooking

Rey: ya Sharon u r correct

Taani: thanks bhabhi

Sharon:taani  really  swayam is lucky 2 eat like tis nice food daily

Rey: Sharon even I vil b lucky in future 2 eat like tis daily frm taani's hands

Taani: wht??

Rey: nothing

 

Sharon laughed at rey. Taani thought something nd she took her phone

Taani: bhabhi

Sharon: haa taani

Taani: can u give me kria's number I don't have it

Rey: y do u want her number?

Taani: I don't want 2 answer u. bhabhi msg it na

Sharon: ya k

 

Taani dialed kria's number

Taani nd Kria convo

Kria: hello who is tis?

Taani: hello haa kria tis is taani sorry to disturb u

Kria: oh hi taani nd u didn't disturb me

 

Here rey don't like taani talking 2 kria

 Back 2 kria nd taani

Taani:  kria have u reached our home

Kria: ya taani whts the problem?

Taani: wo actually I kria did bhai  nd u finished  ur dinner?

Kria: no taani nt yet kaka is preparing.y?

Taani: no usually me nd bhai used 2 eat at tis time so I asked

Kria: oh k k after finishing dinner I vil say u k

Taani: ya k thank u so much

Kria: hey no need thanks we r friends right so no sorry nd no thanks k

Taani: ya k k no thanks nd so sorry between friends

Rey: wht? Friends?

Taani glared at rey

Taani: k kria bye vil call u later

Kria: ya bye

 

 rey, taani nd Sharon finished their dinner nd rey went frm there.

 

Later in taani's room  she was talking 2 herself

 

Taani: hey Krishna ji now wat I m going 2 do. Think taani think

After thinking deeply

Taani: ya I got it first I want bhabhi 2 be friend wid kria. Want 2 prove 2 bhai tat there r really friends. Yes superb

 

Precap:

                   Sharon nd kria friendship

 

Hope u all like itSmile

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Posted: 13 January 2014 at 7:22am | IP Logged
wow awesme story!!!
plss update soon!!!

thanks 4 d pm!!! Smile

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Posted: 13 January 2014 at 7:35am | IP Logged
Nyc update
TaaYam r so adorable i love them
Rey ...not liking kria n taani to b frnds nyc
ShaRey convo awesiii
Taani's care towards swayam was fab
Loved d update
Ty for pm dae

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