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Arshi FF: Along Came Khushi #2...LAST PART/Page 33!! (Page 53)

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Posted: 22 May 2014 at 9:57am | IP Logged
Omg omg omg !! I came across your SS and i just couldn't help but read in from the beginning to the end in one go . I initially started reading it as i wasn't sleepy and thought of reading a chapter or two of an FF before going to bed..but once i started reading this one , i seriously couldn't stop !The entire story was so freaking amazing !!
I totally loved it !Excellently written !
The way you have written the whole thing...is plain marvelous !
I really have no words.
Most of all i loved the positivity that shined in your story..
This was an absolutely brilliant piece of work..!
This story has surely made its place into my top favorite SS' !
And last but to the least i have to that you're a fantastic writer..!
I'm so glad i read this wonderful Story ! 
Keep this amazing work up !
Would surely love to read your other works too Big smile


Love
Nikita XoXo


Edited by zoobie-doobie - 22 May 2014 at 9:53am

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Posted: 22 May 2014 at 3:02pm | IP Logged
Good Lord! what a beautiful story...
Rocky sometimes with little ups and downs but never too much yet a beautiful serene love story of Arnav and Khushi, "Along came Khushi!"
Bravo...
I have smiled, laughed and felt sad with Arnav and Khsuhi and didn't leave the story until I finished. 
Now when I check my clock it say 2:30 A.M...
So I hope you understand that you did a good job in hooking me up to your story...
Clap
Standing ovation! for you.

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Posted: 24 May 2014 at 1:14am | IP Logged
Lovely story loved it

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Posted: 23 June 2014 at 11:56am | IP Logged
lovely story...read all in one go n i just loved it :)

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Posted: 27 June 2014 at 11:32am | IP Logged
well written

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Posted: 27 June 2014 at 7:48pm | IP Logged
Congrats Dil on thread 2 of your most amazing FF!!!!


God I love this ArShi story, so beautifully written!!!!!


Thanks for giving us a happy ending and getting Arnav and Khushi married, they truly deserved each other!!!! Awww their son Arjun was tooo cute!!! But at the same time I'm happy NK and La figured ou their feelings for once another (with a little help) and settled!!!!!


Dil you are just awesome!!!! Hats off for coming up with this amazing FF and writing it so beautifully!!!!


Anyway thanks for a great reading experience!!!!!!


Wish you all the best for your future Fan Fictions; please continue to write many more amazing ArShi stories!!!! I would definitely love to read them!!!!


Well I'm off to find your Index so I can read your other works!!!!



Take care,


Lots of love,


Your fan,


Rahat





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Posted: 28 June 2014 at 8:01am | IP Logged
Beautiful story. ..

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Posted: 07 July 2014 at 9:15pm | IP Logged
Along came Khushi came as a refreshing tale.


First of all, I loved the title. It suited her presence and the change in Arnav's life which she made.

Also, it was nice to have an Arnav who wasn't perpetually grumpy; he did have a past which he was helpless about and which was tying him in the present as well, but the hint of melancholy provided to him was just the right amount.

I also liked how the characters were portrayed; I especially liked the part where you showed Khushi's guilt, linking it to a lesson she had learned in her childhood in the orphanage.

There wasn't an overdose of malice in the form of Sheetal and Shyam; another plus point.

And the two banners were wonderful!

P.s. Rasgulla_sp recommended this story to me

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