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Hey ppl..my new FF enjoy

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Part_1
Chaiji, ratan and veera all insisting on Ranvi's marriage.
Chaiji: lo ab to teri veera ne bhi keh diya chote chan..ab to maan 

ja

Veera; han maan jao na veerji plx plx

Ranvi shying and blushing..

Ranvi; me ja riyan.
He left.

Veera; koi te gadbad zaroor he warna veerji aur meri baat na 

manen esa ho hi nhi skta

Chaiji; han cheechdi..tu na bilkul sahi keh rhi he..daal me kuch to 

kaala he.

Veera went to Ranvi in his room.

Veera; veerji ki gal he das do na...aap qn na na kiye ja rhe ho

Ranvi; koi gal nhi veerakhdi..tu na bs chod de ab is gal nu

Veera; uff ho veerji..kya kharabi he kamo, parminder and preeto 

me?

Ranvi; veera! un me koi kami nhi bs menu na...
he shut his mouth then..and lowered his eyes

Veera; kya kya..menu kya
Veera went close to him to study his eyes which he kept on 

hiding

Veera; veerji!..kahin aap ko...pyaar

Ranvi shivered.

Veera; oye..mere veerji ko pyaar hogya...aur menu pta bhi nhi 

chala..

Ranvi; nhi nhi veera..essi koi gal nhi

Veera; veerji ab aap mujhse jhoot bolo ge..

Ranvi; nhi nhi veera

she took his hand and kept it on her head

Veera; acha meri qasam kha k bolo k aapko pyaar nhi he

he kept silent

Veera; matlab k hai..oye bale bale
she danced.

Veera; magar wo he kon?btao na veerji btao na

Ranvi; koi nhi veerakhdi
he ran away.

Veera; veerji..koi nhi me khud hi pta laga lungi.

she went running outside.

Chaiji; o cheechdi kithe ja rhi he inni tez tez

Veera; baad me btaongi

she left.

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super nice start cont ji

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1st thing the title of the story is awesome
2nd the concept is beautiful ... Loved it Plz continue it and update it soon :)
3rd thanks for the pm :)

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nice start yaar
continue soon

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Awesum start..Sonu..continue soon..and d title..is jus luvly..meri fav movie hai..pyar to hona hi ya..thanku for sharing..

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Veera was sitting on a rock with a sad face.
Baldev was passing by..he thought of teasing her.

Baldev; subah subah tera thopda dekh liya..ab pura din bura guzre ga mera.

Veera; oye ja yahan se baldev...mera mood nhi he abhi.
her voice cleared it that she was not interested. This was new to baldev..veera didn't reply to his prank?he sat down with her.

Baldev; o esa ki hogya...preetampura ka bomb aaj phus pada he

Veera; ab ki dasan tenu..(she thought for a moment)..wese bta hi deti hun..mere pait me baat rukni t he nhi..aur shayad tujhe pta ho

Baldev; to bol na ki gal he

Veera; wo mere veerji he na..unhe pyaar hogya he

Baldev; kya? Ranvi ko

Veera; han

Baldev; pyaar?

Veera; han

He burst into laughter.

Veera; oye tu has qn raha he

Baldev; aur ki karaan..pyaar aur wo bhi ranvi ko...isse bada masaq na tune aaj tak nhi kiya mere se

Veera; oye..me masaq nhi kr rhi sach me

Baldev; ranvi...hahaha...agar menu hua hota to samjh bhi ati pr ranvi

Veera; oye..tujhe hua hota to mera ya haal hota...has has k mar jati..tu na sirf chichora pan kr skta he..pyar to mere veerji jese ache mundon ko hi hota he smjha

Baldev; acha smjha..pr e to dhas k kon he wo bechari qismat ki maari.

Veera; oye..teri waali hogi qismat ki maari...veerji wali to dunya me sb se khush naseeb he.

Baldev; he kon?

Veera; e hi to museebat he na...veerji mun nhi khol rhe

Baldev; koi hogi t khole ga na...tu ne apni trf se kahani bana li aur mujhe bhi suna di

Veera; nhi na mene unki aankhon me dekha he...tu bta na tujhe kisi pe shaq he ki..tu to yahin tha me to thi nhi..soch

Baldev; o me kya uski chokidari krta rehta tha..menu nhi pta.
lekin ab pta krna hi padega k kis ki qismat phooti

Veera; baldev!
she hit him on the shoulder
 
Veera; wese tujhe nhi pta to phir kisi ko nhi pta hoga

Baldev; qn?

Veera; teri bg bbc preetampura hen na..tujhe nhi pta yani unhe nhi pta to phir kisi ko nhi pta hoga

Baldev; veera!

she laughed

Baldev; ab yahin beth k to kuch hona nhi chal alag alag ja k pta chalate hen

Veera; han theek he.

She went towards the market.
Veera; haye inne wade pind me kahan se milegi veerji ki heer.

she saw karan coming.

Karan; hey jhalli kahan ghoom rhi he

Veera; karan yr plx me mood me nhi hun

Karan; ok bye.

he went away.

Veera; yr had he..ik trf baldev ko bhi esa bola to usne mujhse puri daastan sunli..aur ik ye he gadha..chala gaya..ese doston se to baldev jese dushman ache.

On the otherside Baldev with his friends

Bfriend1; praji humne to kabhi ranvi ko kisi kudi naal nhi dekha

Baldev; o dekha to mene bhi nhi pr veera keh rhi he to jhoot thodi hoga

Bfriend2; pta to lagana padega.

Baldev; oye diyaan laga k socho...akhir kon he wo jis ka kisi ko nhi pta.

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ese doston se to baldev jese dushman ache.
Clap show me bhi use jaldi pata chalega yeh baat

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