STORY (non-investigative): Flashback - 2 - Page 5

No no gd its just my opinion :)

This content was originally posted by: nsapo

No no gd its just my opinion :)

I read this story straight after getting your pm... but reviewing this much lately because I was trying to guess some nice words to praise this beautifully written story.
I must say Vis di you are brilliant.. I love this non investigative one shot. Liked how you simply ended this up leaving us to think and make up rest of the things😉
Great work di... keep on writing such cute one shots.. 😊 👏

This content was originally posted by: gadhadada

Arry Nahi BACCHA...

Mujhy bhi yehi feel ho raha hy...

Parhny mein kuch miss ho Gaya hoga...

Main phir say parhun ga ab...😉

Arey GD...it's ok...you didn't like it, I have no problem with that...I can't expect everyone to like all stories. It's ok. 😊

This content was originally posted by: nsapo

And moreover vis di I think the abhijeet they have sculpted is like that.and you have interpreted it rightly is what I felt 😊😊..lot of bottled up emotions ,sometimes spouts of anger but a lot of nice things to say inspire of the fire inside...eg last scene of sr insp abhijeet...if I were him I would have lot to say to survi😆

True...

This content was originally posted by: visrom

True...

 

But did you mean Survi of Flashback or Purvi of Sr Insp Abhijeet?

 

I first thought you meant Survi of Flashback...even there he doesn't tell her anything. The episode ends with him saying 'maine bohot kuch khoya hai'.

Congratulations Vis di...
and lovely story..
It was really nice and simple with some lovely
dialogues ... ⭐️   ⭐️   😊

This content was originally posted by: visrom

Arey GD...it's ok...you didn't like it, I have no problem with that...I can't expect everyone to like all stories. It's ok. 😊

Ohhk I think I am the the most late arrival on this thread which had lots of things... I loved the emotional part of Abhijeet... You are great at filling the gaps dear... But the story I personally felt was short and sweet... An attempt of showing CID officers are human and have their own problems... Abhijeet trying to stay away from his Mom because of his pain and then entry of Anirudh her demise I felt all this jelled completly with current flow of the story... The way you tried to show time healed the wound between Abhijeet and his brother was really commendable... Great work Vis...