fan-fiction (kripa-angad)(can't cont.) - Page 7

WOW it's too good,continue plz!!!!!

its gr8
thx alot😛

pls continue.  i wanna know who this vicky is

Originally posted by: angadkripafan

plez continue i cant wait n plez make angad a bit jealous n let vicky b kripas childhood friend cause if he will b cousin then angad wANT get jealous

no worries, Vicky is not the cousin. I also want to make angad jealous so Vicky is going to do all the magic. I promise u all gonna love the next part. I have already written it but I didn't post yet.

plez plez plez continue happe or any1 else i cant wait anymore

Vicky is played by prem from Kareena Kareena. I don't know his real name.

Vicky and Kripa are hugging and our Angad is red 😡as tamatar (tomato) and full with jealousy. Vicky and Kripa let go off each other and smile. No worries, it was only some seconds hug.

Kripa turns around and takes Vicky to Angad. Before Kripa could introduce Angad to Vicky, Vicky starts speaking.

Vicky: oh, toh aap hain jino ne meri sweetheart ko mujh se sheen liya

Angad has this irriated look, and says: hi, I am Angad.

Kripa: Vicky tum kabhi nahin sudro ge, kyon tum mere Angad ko preshan kar rehe ho.

Vicky: oh tumara Angad, aur mai kaun hoon? He teases Kripa.

Kripa: shut-up Vicky. An bas bohat mazak ho gaya.

Angad who is standing there thinking who is this fool trying to get senti with my Kripa.

Kripa's mom: Vicky ab tum jao aur freshen up ho jayo aur phir sab batein karenge.

Vicky walks toward the the guest room, but Kripa calls him from behind.

Kripa: Vicky, guest room main Angad reh raha hai, tum bobby (I can't remember Kripa's brother's name but I think bobby is his name) ke saath kamraa share kar lo,

Vicky: kya sweetheart, tum bhi, guest-room toh mera hua karta tha.

Angad is just fed us from Vicky calling Kripa, sweetheart

Angad (to himself): agar tum ne ek bar au meri Kripa ko sweet heart bulaya, main tumare dant(teeth) tod doonga, jise tum itni bari smile dete ho.😆😆

 

That's it for today guys. I know it's pretty short but I am running out of time cuz I have a lot of work to do.

good we both r taking story to almost same point

only difference is in my story kripa & angad r married & in urs they will get married

great work

keep writing

lots of love

esha

this story gets better day by day...

  veeeeeeeeeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrrrrrrryyyyyyyyyyyy nice  plz continue😊

👏👏👏

it's really nice....esp da jealousy part....ya plz continue....