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neha9

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Posted: 02 June 2005 at 11:26pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by happe

Finally Kripa and Angad are together.Clap Angad and Kripa go to Kripa's parents and tell them about their decision of getting married. Kripa's parents are very happy with their decision and they decide to do the engagement within a week and later they decide to do the engagement within a week and later after talking to Dadi they'll decide the marriage date. Everyone is happy Big smile, Kripa's parents call up Dadi and ask her about her decision. Dadi is also happy with the turn of the things. They decide to do the engagement at Kripa's place, and they asked Dadi to come to Nainital.

 

At Kripa's place:

Kripa's dad: Angad dadi toh kal ko aa rahi hai. Lekin humne abhi tak naina aur dilip ku invite nahin kiya. Je tumahara faisla hai ke tum aun ko invite karma chahte ho ja nahin

Angad: uncle main mom-dad ko bohat aache se janta hoon, who mere decision se kabhi khush nahin honge. Aur waise bhi aap toh ho hi mujhe aur Kripa ko aashirwas dene ke liye, aapke saath dadi bhi toh hai

Kripa's dad: beta hum toh hamesha tum dono ko khush dekhna chahte hain. Hamara aashirwas toh hamesha tum dono ke saath hai. Par ek baar dilip aur naina ko bata toh do.

Angad: theek hai uncle. Maine une phone kar deta hoon par aana ja na aana aunki marzi.

 

Angad calling Mumbai

Angad call home, Anitah picks up:

Angad: Angad bho raha hoon, mom ko phone do

Anitah: bhai aap, aap kahan chale gaye thai humain bina bataye, malum hai humne aap ko kitna miss kiya tha

Angad(irritated by sweet talk of Anita): Anita maine mom se baat karne ke liye phone kiya, na ke tumahare sath chit-chat karne ke liye.

Anitah: bhai, aap naraz kyon ho rahe hain, main massi ko phone deti hoon na.

Just then Naina walks in. Anita yell, "Masi, Angad ka phone hai." Naina hops by the phone and takes the phone from Anita.

Anitah: maasi aap pyar se bhi phone le sakti hain, sheen nai ki kya zaroorat thi

Naina (irritated): shut-up Anitah. Jao aur kuch exercise karke aao, zara apna weigh check karo, din bad din moti hoti za rahi ho, kahin muje Bouske ka treadmill na tume gift karna paad jaye.LOL

Anitah (pretending to cry Cry): masi, aap bhi. Pehle toh bahar ke lok mera mazak audate thay  aur aab ghar main bhi.

Naina: dimag mat khayo aur mujhe Angad se baat karne do

Naina(burst on Angad): Angad kahan ho tum, tumahari wajah se kitna nuksaan hua hai, ek mahane main tum ne ek bar bhi phone nahin kiya. Kahan ho tum main kehti hoon ke abhi ghar aao.

Angad: mom apko sirf paise se hi pyaar hai, main aapka hal chal pooshne ke liye phone nahin kiya, main aapko je batane ke liye phone kiya ke main aur Kripa shaadi kar rah hain hain. Do din main engagement hai, maine aap ko invite karne ke liye phone kiya hai.

Naina (red as tamatar Angry): kya keh rahe ho tum Angad? Tum pagal ho gaye ho, main aus ladki ko Khana pariwaar ki bahu kabhi siwakar nahin karoongi. Aab mujhe samaj aaya ke tum itne din kahan thay, tum aus ladki ke paas thay.

Angad: ha main Kripa ke paas tha, maine aapki permission lene ke liye phone nahin kiya, aap ko hamari engagement par aana hai toh aaye nahin toh mat aaye, apki marzi

Angad hung up the phone, leaving Naina very mad.

 

Day before engagement:

Dadi arrives at Kripa's place. Everyone welcomes Dadi.

Angad: Dadi and he hugs her.

Dadi: duniya ka sabse pyaara baacha kaisa hai Smile

Angad: main bohat khush hoon aur aap kaisi hain

Dadi: main theek hoon, bhai meri pyari si beti kahan hai

Kripa comes from the back and hugs dadi

Kripa: main jahan hoon dadi

Dadi kisses Kripa's forehead and has tears in her eyes

Kripa: dadi je kya, aap roh rahi hain

Dadi: nahin beta, tumahain dubara hastey dekh kar mujhe bohat khushi hui

Angad: kya hum door ke pas khare rekh kar baat karenge, andar chaleyein

Everyone laughs and they all go inside.

 

Back at Mumbai

Naina, Dilip, Anitah, and Kartik are discussing about Angad:

Anitah: maasi main kaun si dress pehno kal engagement par

Naina (angry): anitah tumahara dimag phir gaya hai, hum kal Nainital nahin jaa rahe. Angad ne humare kilaf ja kar shadi ka phesla kya hai, main us ladki ko is ghar ki bhau nahin mano gi

Anitah: par masi, maine socha tha ke main bhai ki engagement par apni blue dress pehno gi

Naina: anitah mere saar main dard hai, jao jakar dilip aur kartik ka saar khao

After hearing this Dilip and Kartik suddenly get up.

Dilip: Naina mujhe bohat zaroori meeting main jaana hai, main chalta hoon, kartik tum chal rahe ho

Kartik: haan dad chalein.

They both leave Naina and Anitah. Naina is just too tired to hear a word from Anita, she leaves Anita and goes to her room.

Anitah (standing by her self): aab main ikeli kya karoon. Mannan ko phone karti hoon.

Anitah calls Mannan

Anitah: hi mannan

Mannan: oh, hi anitah

Anitah: kya kar rahe ho?

Mannan has his girl friend by him but says nothing.

Anitah starts her ram-katha and poor Mannan has to hear all.

Mannan: anita, anita, mujhe tumari awaaz sun nahi nahin de rahi. He hung up on her.

Anitah calls up again

Mannan gives phone to his girlfriend and she, using operator voice, says: dial kia hua number es waqt unreachable hai, please try again. LOL

Mannan and his gf has a good laugh of how they fooled Anitah.

Anitah has no one to talk to. She says to herself

Anitah: harsho se baat kye hue bohat din ho gaye. Ose phone karto hoon.

 

That's it for today guys. Wait for the engagement. Don't go anywhere, Angad and Kripa's marriage is coming soon. Dekhna na bhooliye, sorry paadnaa na bhooliye.

Tell me how it is.

 

another very nice story! keep it up... waiting to see some chemistry bwt angad n kripa or should i say waiting to READ

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Angadzgirl

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Posted: 02 June 2005 at 11:36pm | IP Logged

wow...very interesting....plz continue....

~sweta~

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Posted: 02 June 2005 at 11:45pm | IP Logged
guys, I really wanted to make a joke of Anitah's character so I made her look little dumb. me very happy now. LOLLOLLOL

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Posted: 03 June 2005 at 5:44pm | IP Logged
good job keep up the good work wow

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Posted: 03 June 2005 at 7:02pm | IP Logged
thanks very much it was great

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Posted: 03 June 2005 at 7:27pm | IP Logged
Happe.....you Did a marvelous Work...Please Continue

msbrigades

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Posted: 03 June 2005 at 9:09pm | IP Logged
Happe, good one... jaldi karo engagement aur shaadi, isse padke hum khush ho jayenghe. EKta ki serial mein to we have to wait 2 years or god know never...

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Posted: 03 June 2005 at 10:52pm | IP Logged
LOL the aniTha part was fab!... plz continue

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