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Posted: 31 May 2005 at 10:32am | IP Logged

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wonderfullllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll i loved the story plez continue




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it was very touching..... great job 




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That was lovely.  I could imagine it. 




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happe.........wonderful story...please continue.....loved it....




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thanx guys. i am happy that you guys liked it.

i'll try to conclude pretty soon. i am going write it at night and hopefully post by tomorrow.

keep reading.




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Posted: 02 June 2005 at 10:44pm | IP Logged

Finally Kripa and Angad are together.Clap Angad and Kripa go to Kripa's parents and tell them about their decision of getting married. Kripa's parents are very happy with their decision and they decide to do the engagement within a week and later they decide to do the engagement within a week and later after talking to Dadi they'll decide the marriage date. Everyone is happy Big smile, Kripa's parents call up Dadi and ask her about her decision. Dadi is also happy with the turn of the things. They decide to do the engagement at Kripa's place, and they asked Dadi to come to Nainital.


At Kripa's place:

Kripa's dad: Angad dadi toh kal ko aa rahi hai. Lekin humne abhi tak naina aur dilip ku invite nahin kiya. Je tumahara faisla hai ke tum aun ko invite karma chahte ho ja nahin

Angad: uncle main mom-dad ko bohat aache se janta hoon, who mere decision se kabhi khush nahin honge. Aur waise bhi aap toh ho hi mujhe aur Kripa ko aashirwas dene ke liye, aapke saath dadi bhi toh hai

Kripa's dad: beta hum toh hamesha tum dono ko khush dekhna chahte hain. Hamara aashirwas toh hamesha tum dono ke saath hai. Par ek baar dilip aur naina ko bata toh do.

Angad: theek hai uncle. Maine une phone kar deta hoon par aana ja na aana aunki marzi.


Angad calling Mumbai

Angad call home, Anitah picks up:

Angad: Angad bho raha hoon, mom ko phone do

Anitah: bhai aap, aap kahan chale gaye thai humain bina bataye, malum hai humne aap ko kitna miss kiya tha

Angad(irritated by sweet talk of Anita): Anita maine mom se baat karne ke liye phone kiya, na ke tumahare sath chit-chat karne ke liye.

Anitah: bhai, aap naraz kyon ho rahe hain, main massi ko phone deti hoon na.

Just then Naina walks in. Anita yell, "Masi, Angad ka phone hai." Naina hops by the phone and takes the phone from Anita.

Anitah: maasi aap pyar se bhi phone le sakti hain, sheen nai ki kya zaroorat thi

Naina (irritated): shut-up Anitah. Jao aur kuch exercise karke aao, zara apna weigh check karo, din bad din moti hoti za rahi ho, kahin muje Bouske ka treadmill na tume gift karna paad jaye.LOL

Anitah (pretending to cry Cry): masi, aap bhi. Pehle toh bahar ke lok mera mazak audate thay  aur aab ghar main bhi.

Naina: dimag mat khayo aur mujhe Angad se baat karne do

Naina(burst on Angad): Angad kahan ho tum, tumahari wajah se kitna nuksaan hua hai, ek mahane main tum ne ek bar bhi phone nahin kiya. Kahan ho tum main kehti hoon ke abhi ghar aao.

Angad: mom apko sirf paise se hi pyaar hai, main aapka hal chal pooshne ke liye phone nahin kiya, main aapko je batane ke liye phone kiya ke main aur Kripa shaadi kar rah hain hain. Do din main engagement hai, maine aap ko invite karne ke liye phone kiya hai.

Naina (red as tamatar Angry): kya keh rahe ho tum Angad? Tum pagal ho gaye ho, main aus ladki ko Khana pariwaar ki bahu kabhi siwakar nahin karoongi. Aab mujhe samaj aaya ke tum itne din kahan thay, tum aus ladki ke paas thay.

Angad: ha main Kripa ke paas tha, maine aapki permission lene ke liye phone nahin kiya, aap ko hamari engagement par aana hai toh aaye nahin toh mat aaye, apki marzi

Angad hung up the phone, leaving Naina very mad.


Day before engagement:

Dadi arrives at Kripa's place. Everyone welcomes Dadi.

Angad: Dadi and he hugs her.

Dadi: duniya ka sabse pyaara baacha kaisa hai Smile

Angad: main bohat khush hoon aur aap kaisi hain

Dadi: main theek hoon, bhai meri pyari si beti kahan hai

Kripa comes from the back and hugs dadi

Kripa: main jahan hoon dadi

Dadi kisses Kripa's forehead and has tears in her eyes

Kripa: dadi je kya, aap roh rahi hain

Dadi: nahin beta, tumahain dubara hastey dekh kar mujhe bohat khushi hui

Angad: kya hum door ke pas khare rekh kar baat karenge, andar chaleyein

Everyone laughs and they all go inside.


Back at Mumbai

Naina, Dilip, Anitah, and Kartik are discussing about Angad:

Anitah: maasi main kaun si dress pehno kal engagement par

Naina (angry): anitah tumahara dimag phir gaya hai, hum kal Nainital nahin jaa rahe. Angad ne humare kilaf ja kar shadi ka phesla kya hai, main us ladki ko is ghar ki bhau nahin mano gi

Anitah: par masi, maine socha tha ke main bhai ki engagement par apni blue dress pehno gi

Naina: anitah mere saar main dard hai, jao jakar dilip aur kartik ka saar khao

After hearing this Dilip and Kartik suddenly get up.

Dilip: Naina mujhe bohat zaroori meeting main jaana hai, main chalta hoon, kartik tum chal rahe ho

Kartik: haan dad chalein.

They both leave Naina and Anitah. Naina is just too tired to hear a word from Anita, she leaves Anita and goes to her room.

Anitah (standing by her self): aab main ikeli kya karoon. Mannan ko phone karti hoon.

Anitah calls Mannan

Anitah: hi mannan

Mannan: oh, hi anitah

Anitah: kya kar rahe ho?

Mannan has his girl friend by him but says nothing.

Anitah starts her ram-katha and poor Mannan has to hear all.

Mannan: anita, anita, mujhe tumari awaaz sun nahi nahin de rahi. He hung up on her.

Anitah calls up again

Mannan gives phone to his girlfriend and she, using operator voice, says: dial kia hua number es waqt unreachable hai, please try again. LOL

Mannan and his gf has a good laugh of how they fooled Anitah.

Anitah has no one to talk to. She says to herself

Anitah: harsho se baat kye hue bohat din ho gaye. Ose phone karto hoon.


That's it for today guys. Wait for the engagement. Don't go anywhere, Angad and Kripa's marriage is coming soon. Dekhna na bhooliye, sorry paadnaa na bhooliye.


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Posted: 02 June 2005 at 11:24pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by happe

My story starts when Angad decides to go to Nainital to win Kripa back, but Kripa has lost faith in love.


Background information:

Kripa had been framed by Naina, and everyone else accused Kripa for stealing money (it's something that we think might be happening in the serial). Angad wasn't around and when he came back he believed everyone else. He insulted Kripa of doing such a low act and told her that he'll never forgive her. Kripa who is shattered leaves Mumbai and goes back to Nainital. In Mumbai, Angad finds about Naina's plan of how she framed Kripa and threw her out of Angad's life. Now Angad feels guilty of not trusting Kripa. So now he is going back to Kripa and to ask for her forgiveness and get another chance to be with her.

Now my story starts

Before going to Nainital, Angad goes to his dadi's house. He tells dadi of how much he misses Kripa and how badly he wants to get her back. He informs dadi that he is going to Nainital to win Kripa back. Dadi supports him and prays that he gets his love back and bring Kripa back. Dadi has a concern face and doesn't know how to tell Angad about what has Kripa been through after their breakup. Dadi knows about Kripa because she always knew that Kripa didn't do anything and she was innocent. Dadi had been calling Kripa's parents to check on how Kripa was doing. It was then that she discovers that Kripa is not same as she was before. After returning from Nainital she doesn't speak to anyone, doesn't eat well, sits alone all day without talking, shows no emotions, she is like a statue. Dadi is the only person in Mumbai who knows about Kripa's state.

Angad had asked Dadi to inform Kripa's family that he was coming to nainital, and that he would like to stay with them rather than a hotel. Kripa's parents agree to have Angad stay with them.

At Nainital

Angad arrives at Nainital by evening. Kripa's parents were waiting for him. Kripa didn't know about Angad's arrival though. Angad comes to their house and is greeted by everyone in the family except Kripa, who is not at home. Kripa's mom asks Angad to freshen up and until then she'll lay the dinner table. Angad goes to the guest-room to freshen up. All this time his eyes are searching for Kripa. He gets a tour of the house and sees Kripa's pictures. Then he strolls around and goes to Kripa's room. He could feel Kripa's presence in the room. Before he could touch anything, Kripa's mom calls him and asks him to have dinner. Angad comes downstairs and just then Kripa enters the house. Kripa who still hasn't noticed Angad is walking. Angad come in front of her and he has a smile on his face, after so long he has seen his Kripa. Kripa looks up and sees Angad. She has no expressions of being shocked or neither of sadness or happiness. She just looks at him, and they both stare into each other's eyes. Before Angad could say anything he gets a call from Dadi. She asked him whether he has seen Kripa or not. Angad goes outside to talk to Dadi and when he comes back he noticed that Kripa is not there anymore.

At Dinning Table

Kripa's parents, her brother, and Angad are all sitting at the dinning table. Kripa's mom calls Kripa for dinner. Kripa comes downstairs and Angad's eyes are following her as she walks by the table and sits in the chair in front of Angad cuz that is the only empty chair. Everyone is eating and Angad is glances at Kripa while eating. To break the silence, Kripa's dad inquires about Dadi and her health. Angad tells them that Dadi is fine. Kripa's dad asks Angad whether Naina and Dilip know about Angad being here. Angad tells them that only dadi knows that he is here. He told his parents that he is going for vacation somewhere. Hearing Naina's name, Kripa leaves the food unfinished and goes away. Angad is feeling extremely guilty and he doesn't know what to say to Kripa. Later that night Angad wanted to talk to Kripa but doesn't get a chance to talk to her. So he waits for the morning.

Next Day

Kripa comes downstairs and has a little breakfast, and goes out for a walk. Angad comes to have breakfast and sees Kripa leaving. He goes behind her without even having eating breakfast. He follows Kripa, and Kripa unaware of this just keeps on walking and stops by a bench and sits there. She sits there for long time, her eyes closed, and all this time she has not once said anything, neither to herself or to people that walked by her. Angad who is looking at Kripa from far away just can't take her misery. He goes and sits by her on the bench. Kripa opens her eyes and sees Angad sitting beside her and starts talking.

Angad: Kripa, I am sorry. I know now that what I did was wrong. I should have trusted you, and our love, but I failed. I failed Kripa. I believed others, but I didn't believe my love, I didn't believe you. I should have had faith in our love and should have known that you couldn't do such a thing. I know I am responsible for your this condition. Please Kripa forgive me. Kripa mujhe maaf kardo. While saying this Angad has tears rolling down his cheeks.

Kripa doesn't say a word. Kripa is just looking at Angad without an expression. Angad is just crying but is mad because Kripa wouldn't talk to him. Kripa is about to leave but Angad holds her from her arm and doesn't let her go. He holds her form her shoulders and shakes her, and asks her to say something, anything.

Angad: Kripa don't this to me. Please say something. I know you're mad at me. Say something to me, Kripa kuch toh bolo. Tumahari kamoshi mujhe maar dale gi. Mujhe kuch bhi kaho kuch bhi, par tum mujhse baat karo.

Kripa who is standing there is all numb. Angad who is just crying so hard repeats the same thing over and over.

Angad: Kripa mujhe maaf kardo, main tumahara gunegaar hoon, tum mujhse baat karo.

Kripa leaves from there without saying a word, leaving Angad shattered.

Kripa's house

Angad comes home and asks Kripa's parents of how long has Kripa been like this. Kripa's mom tells him that when Kripa came back from Mumbai, she became like this. She wouldn't talk to anyone; she would just sit in he room for hours without saying a word. After hearing this, Angad is very worried about Kripa. He asks them is they have shown Kripa to any doctor. Kripa's dad said, yes they have but all the doctors say the same thing that they can't help Kripa if she is not willing to herself.  Kripa's parents tried a lot of ways to get Kripa to talk or show emotions but nothing has helped.

Angad: uncle, aunty, ab mai aa gaya hoon, mai apni Kripa ke chehre par muskaan laa doonga.

Kripa's mom: beta main jaanti hoon ke tum meri beti ko theek kar doge.

Angad is happy that they trust him.

Angad has a friend who is a psychiatrist. Angad calls him and asks him if he could come to Nainital and check Kripa. His friend agrees and comes to check Kripa. Before checking on Kripa he asked Angad to tell him the reason why Kripa might be behaving like this. Angad tells him everything. After checking Kripa, he informs Angad that the best way to cure Kripa is to remind her of the time she spent in Mumbai. Remind her about your love, about the concert, about your mom, and everything that is related to you guys' relationship. Angad agrees and decided to do everything that the doctor has asked him to do.

Angad helping Kripa remember

First thing Angad does is call up Harshini and ask for her help. Harshini agrees to help Angad. They both decide to make a folder containing Angad's pictures, the one that Kripa had made of Angad when she was at Nainital. Harshini makes it exactly the Kripa had, each picture with Kripa's thoughts written on them. Angad leaves the folder on Kripa's bed and later on when Kripa comes in her room, she sees it on her bed. Angad is standing by the door and waiting to see how might Kripa react to this. Kripa opens the folder and finds pictures of Angad, writing on them. Kripa gets flashes of the time she came to Mumbai, the time when Angad made fun of her feeling, the time when she expressed her love to Angad and how much she hates him. Angad can see the sad expression on Kripa's face. He knows that it is hurting Kripa, but he has to remind her of both good and bad times to get her to be the same old Kripa.

Kripa has tears in her eyes because there is a card by Angad at the bottom of the folder. It says, "I love you Kripa. Please forgive me." Kripa just moves the folder and card away on the other side of the bed. She is crying by herself. Kripa's parents come by Angad and they stand with him by the door. They have tears in their eye, but they are happy that Kripa has shown some type of expression even if she is crying and it's painful.

Everyday Angad would leave something on Kripa's bed that is related to the time they spend together. It was helping Kripa in a way. She started to smile again. Kripa has not fully recovered but she did started spending time with her family. She still hasn't talked to Angad.

One day

Kripa and her family were watching TV and then the song rabba mere rabba started playing. Kripa remembers the time when she and Angad sang this song; she remembers the concert. She has a smile on her face. Then the song is over and they show Angad's parents publicizing their music academy. Kripa sees Naina and gets very upset. She turns the TV off. Kripa started crying and her mom and asks her what happened? Kripa tells her mom of what Naina did to Kripa, and that she'll never forgive Naina or Angad. Angad is extremely sad since he had seen everything that has happened.

Thanks to Angad, Kripa is recovered. She eats well, laughs with her family, spends time with everyone. All this time when Kripa was recovering Angad has not said anything to Kripa. He was waiting for her to recover so he can try  to win her back and show how much he cares for her.

Kripa's parents decide to go on vacation to Goa. Everyone goes, and Angad is invited by Kripa's parents. They want to help bring Kripa and Angad together because they know that deep down Kripa still loves Angad and she'll forgive him.

At Goa

They reach Goa and they stay in the same hotel as the one Angad and Kripa stayed when they come for the promotional tour. Kripa's parents get Kripa the same room as she was in before. Kripa remembers that it is the same room. She remembers Angad coming in her room, hugging her from behind, giving her the necklace. As Kripa remembers this Angad enters her room and she comes out of her thoughts. Kripa feels uneasy around Angad. Angad can also notice Kripa feeling uncomfortable. He feels sad because the girl who couldn't stay without him, the one whom he couldn't stay without is feeling uncomfortable for standing in one room.

Angad hands Kripa a thin box containing a necklace, similar to the one that he had given to Kripa before. Kripa doesn't accept it but he leaves it on her bed.

Angad: Kripa mai jaanta hoon ke tum aab bhi mujhse nafrat karti ho. Mera vishwas hai ke ek din wo nafrat pyaar main badal jayegi. Mai aus din ka intezar karoonga. Ye necklace main tumhe is liye de raha hoon ke jis din tum mujhe maaf kardo, tum eise pehna aur main samaj jaoonga ke tumne mujhe maaf kar dia.

Angad goes away leaving Kripa thinking about what he said. Everyone had fun time at Goa and they return after a week.

Back to Nainital

Angad started helping out Kripa's family, doing small things for them. Kripa started to like his presence. He would make everyone laugh even Kripa. Angad could feel that Kripa has started to behave normal with him. She wouldn't talk much but her eyes would search for him when he was not around. Kripa start realizing her feelings for Angad. She could see that he has changed, and he loves her.

Kripa realizing her love

Kripa goes to her mom and started talking.

Kripa: mama, I have to ask you something

Mom: kya baat hai Kripa

Kripa: mom, kya hum us insaan par barosa kar sakte hai jisne humara barosa todha hai.

Kripa's mom knows whom she is talking about.

Mom: Kripa main jaanti hoon ke tum Angad ki baat kar rahi ho. Beta, wo badal gaya hai. Maine uski anakhon main tumhare liye pyaar dekha hai, izaat dekhi hai, uski aankhon main tadap dekhi hai. Usne tumhare liye bohat kuch kiya hai.

Then Kripa's mom tells Kripa how Angad helped her recover.

Kripa, tears in her eyes) thinking about Angad and how much he has done for her. She just wants to run into his arms and hug him.

Kripa goes to her room, and gets the necklace that Angad has gifted her. She goes to guest-room where Angad is staying and knocks on the door. Angad opens the door to his surprise it's Kripa. He doesn't know how to react. Before he could ask Kripa what she is doing here, Kripa just runs into his arms and hugs him tightly. Angad also hugs her back.

Kripa: (still hugging him) I love you Angad. I can't live without you.

Angad: Kripa main jaanta tha tum mujhe maaf kardo gi. Tum mujse phir se pyaar karne lagogi.

Kripa and Angad share a passionate hug and then Kripa gives Angad the necklace and he puts around her neck. They both look into each other's eyes and they hug each other. Finally Kripa and Angad are together again.


For those who read this, special thanks. You probably got time to read my boring story. Thank you.


Tell me how it is. I know its very lengthy but I won't be able to log in for some days to add to it. So I decided to post all of it. If you want me continue and get Angad and Kripa married, please let me know.

Hey good job loved ur stody hope it comes ture i really want ekta to visit these stories!

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