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first 10 parts of ff...

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part 11--------------------------------------

NEXT MORNING---------------------------------------------------------------

Jhanvi wake up, sees Viraaj sleeping & smiles then suddenly realizes her motive of marrying him. She goes to washroom for freshen up.

After some time, she comes back from the bathroom & sees Viraaj has waken up & is trying to get up from the bed. She immediately goes to him & order him--------

"ye kya kar rahein hain aap. Aaj aap pura din rest karenge taki sham ke program tak aap bilkul theek ho jayein."

Viraaj - but jhanvi aaj meri meeting hai, dusri company ke saath aur mera wahaan jaana bahut zaroori hai.

Jhanvi -  to aap yahii pe sabko bula lijiye. Mein saari arrangement kar loongi.

Viraaj - par akele tum sab kaise arrange karogi.

Jhanvi - mein kar loongi, pehle bhi to kiya hai.

Viraaj - ok, as u wish.

Viraaj calls up the meeting at home.

After the meeting at dining table during lunch--------------------------------------------

 

Client - wow! The food is very tasty.

Viraaj - thank you! My wife made it.

 Client - ms. Dobriyal u r really amazing. Bhagwan ne aapko kitni saari qualities ek saath di hain, aap jitni khkhoobsurat hain, khana bhi utna hi tasty hai, love it.

Jhanvi - thank u.

After all d clients had gone.

Viraaj goes to jhanvi, she thinks---

"lagta hai viraaj ko bura laga hai, ab wo mujhe takleef pahunchaane ki koshish zaroor karenge. Mujhe pata tha viraaj kabhi nahiin sudhar sakte."

Viraaj - thanks jaan! Tumne sabkuchh kitne ache se sambhal liya. Ab tum thak gayi hongi , jaake thora araam karlo.

Jhanvi is shocked o hear this.

Jhanvi - ummm...  aap bhi medicine lene ke baad thoda rest kar lijiye.

 

EVENING TIME...

Jhanvi is getting ready. She is wearing red saree looking very gorgeous.

Viraaj is wearing black suit looking damn hot. He comes to the room to remind jhanvi about getting late.

He looks at the jhanvi, his eyes fix on her & can't see anything else.

He wants to admire her beauty, but can't say anything, don't know why, perhaps now he doesn't have that right. May be he had lost it.

He just said------

"let's go."

 

AT THE PARTY...

Jhanvi is talking to some ladies & viraaj is talking to some men. Suddenly a woman comes there & says to jhanvi------

"are sia tum, pehchaana mein payal."

Jhanvi - oh payal tum! Kaisi ho.

Payal - sia hum 6 mahine pehle mile the, uske baaad kya tumhe meri yaad nahiin aayi.

Jhanvi - are aisi koi baat nahiin hai, bas time nahiin mila.

Payal - achha raghav kahaan hai, wo nahiin aaye tumhaare saath.

(viraaj is listening their talk.)

Payal - yaad hai pichhli party mein kya hua tha,

Tumhaari aur raghav ki nayi-nayi shaadi hui thi, aur usne to saari hadh hi paar kar di thi. Tumhaare pichhe-pichhe pallu pakad kar puri party mein ghum raha tha.

Tears came in jhanvi's eyes after thinking about old memories, whereas viraaj is feeling uncomfortable listening all this. Jhanvi notices him.

She says to her friend-------

"payal wo time achha tha par ab sbkuchh badal chukka hai."

Payal - matlab?

Jhanvi - raghav ab is duniya mein nahiin rahe. He is dead, aur ab mein ms. Dobriyaal hoon, mr. viraaj dobriyaal ki wife. Aur haan actually mein mera naam mrs.  Jhanvi viraaj dobriyaal hai.

Payal - oh! I m so sorry.

Jhanvi - it's ok payal, galti tumhaari nahiin balki hallat ki hai. Aur waise bhi honi ko kaun taal sakta hai.

Payal - achha apne husband se nahiin milaogi.

Jhanvi - haan.

Jhanvi goes to viraaj.

Jhanvi - zara suniye.

Viraaj turns to face jhanvi and says

"kaho jaan."

Jhanvi - ye meri friend hai payal aur payal ye hai mere husband, mr. viraaj dobriyaal.

Payal - hello! Nice to meet u.

Viraaj - same here.

Payal - waise manna padega jhanvi, tumhaare husband to bahut handsome hain aur tumse pyar bhi bahut karte hain, tabhi to tumhe "jaan" bolte hain, jaise ki tum unki life ho. I m sure he keeps u as a princess, right.

Jhanvi pretends to blush and remembers all the pains that viraaj had given o her &

Viraaj also remembers those scenes and feels a kind of uncomfortness.

 

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Posted: 29 December 2013 at 1:33pm | IP Logged
Thanks for pm

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Posted: 29 December 2013 at 1:37pm | IP Logged
So after so much time u updated. Read it, really awsome please continue

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Thank u kvrkfan & sorry for d late update

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Posted: 01 January 2014 at 10:53am | IP Logged

Thanks for the PM! Smile
Loved the part..Smile Ur an awesome writer..explains everything so beautifully. Big smile
Loving this story of viraj's realisation which we never got 2 seeCry
Keep updating. Just wanted to ask about this 'payal' u introduced..is she gonna play some important role in this story?

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Posted: 04 January 2014 at 11:38am | IP Logged
HAPPY NEW YEAR...

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Posted: 04 January 2014 at 11:41am | IP Logged
No payal is temporary. She is there only to make viraaj realize his mistakes.

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