AsHlok OS'---Written In The Skies--- (Astha's Birthday)) - Page 3 | Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon... Ek Baar Phir

Aishwarya

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Posted: 10 years ago

Beautifully written😳

My fav part

"Shlokkk!!" her pitch was overly excited. He hugged her back with one arm behind her back and the other balancing the chocolate larva cake.

"Happy Birthday Love." He whispered in her ears. Astha closed her eyes taking in every ounce of the moment. She broke the hug and hit him hard on his chest.

😳Do write more on ashlok!!

Edited by Aishaa3 - 10 years ago

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944456

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Posted: 10 years ago

That was a superb OS...

Loved the way Shlok confessed finally... Aww Astha actually waited for him...

Loved the last line

"I had to come back for you...before anyone else could take that place in your life I had to make you my wife."

Cute Os!... 😊

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Anusha16

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Posted: 10 years ago

simply wonderful...

very short and sweet...

loved how shlok made her chase...and also TOM and JERRY!!!😆

thank you very much for the PM deary...🤗

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Natasha

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Posted: 10 years ago

Cute OS, I so wish Aastha and Shlok were like this in the serial, but am waiting ... cause that day should cum within a year. Keep writing and do pm me :) BTW, thanks for the pmEdited by NatashaRia - 10 years ago

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537048

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Posted: 10 years ago

oh dat was such a sweet story

and shlok fulfilled astha wish by wishing her the way she wanted

thanks for this os

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maivelli

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Posted: 10 years ago

this is wndrful well written
nicely depicted
well done dear!!!
i rilli do love ur writin skill
can i know ur name???

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r

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: NatashaRia
Cute OS, I so wish Aastha and Shlok were like this in the serial, but am waiting ... cause that day should cum within a year. Keep writing and do pm me :) BTW, thanks for the pm

hopefully they will be like that soon

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Soujanya

@Vsoujanya

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Posted: 10 years ago

Awww that was sooo cute and I loved it!

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meerab

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Posted: 10 years ago

lovely and beautiful update dear
just too good...

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Suri

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Serviana
beautiful

Thanks!😳

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