i read all ur updates in one go very well conceptualised
swayam's luv n pain was very well reflected thru his anger
n kria's pain in missing her best frn was beautifully penned
i also liked the small rey n swayam's convo
whr rey questions swayam's luv for sharon n
rey's worry for kriya n swayam n
his anger for sharon on leaving them was very well penned
all in all i liked tis build up sequence
do update more
waitin for ur updates 🤗