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Pyaar Ka Anjaam NOTE PG3!!!! (Page 2)

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Posted: 15 October 2006 at 9:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by dude068

Originally posted by rachandeep

Originally posted by dude068

wow finally sum1 wants to write about SUKK

Big smile

i'm gonna njoy readin dis fanfic

plz do continue
 
thanks.....i wrote this time bak but never got much response so i forgot bout it..but if u want i can continue?


plz do...
i really njoy reading ur work Embarrassed
 
k ill get 2 work on this asap
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Posted: 15 October 2006 at 10:53am | IP Logged
wow finnaly sukk ff
hope to read soon from u rach
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Posted: 15 October 2006 at 2:01pm | IP Logged
 

Part 1

 

You can hear someone singing "Mitwa" from Kabhi Alvida Naa Kehna.

 

mere mann ye bata de tu
kis or chala hai tu
kya paya nahi tune
kya dhundh raha hai tu

jo hai ankahee jo hai ansuni
woh baat kya hai bata
mitwa kahe dhadkane hai tujhse kya
mitwa yeh khud se toh na tu chhupa
 

Everyone is watching him, his voice has everyone hooked, his eyes are show, then his lips, a friend close by is playing the guitar

He smiles as his face is shown, he is Sumit Whadwa

 

mere mann ye bata de tu
kis or chala hai tu
kya paya nahi tune
kya dhundh raha hai tu

jo hai ankahee jo hai ansuni
voh baat kya hai bata
mitwa kahe dhadkane hai tujhse kya
mitwa yeh khud se toh na tu chhupa
 
jeevan dagar mein prem nagar mein
jeevan dagar mein prem nagar mein
aaya nazar mein jab se koi hai

tu sochta hain tu puchata hai
jiski kami thi kya yeh wohi hai
haan yeh vohi hai haan yeh vohi hai
tu ek pyasa aur yeh nadhi hai
kaahe nahi isko tu khulke bataye

jo hai ankahee jo hai ansuni
voh baat kya hai bata
mitwa kahe dhadkan hai tujhse pyar
mitwa yeh khudse toh na tu chhupa
teri nigaahen pagaye raahein
par tu yeh soche jaaoon na jaaoon
yeh zindagi jo hai naachti toh
kyon bediyon mein hai tere paanoo

preet ki dhun par naach le paagal
udta agar hai udne de aanchal
kaahe koi apne ko aaise tarsaaye

jo hai ankahee jo hai ansuni
woh baat kya hai bata
mitwa kahe dhadkan hai tujhse pyar
mitwa yeh khudse toh na tu chhupa

mere mann ye bata de tu
kis or chala hai tu
kya paya nahi tune
kya dhundh raha hai tu
mitwa...
 
Sumit  looks up to find everyone clapping, he turns and faces his best friend Rahul, who shows him a thumbs up, Sumit stands up and the pair of them bow to everyone., Sumit steps off the stage and he is immediately showered with compliments
 
P 1 - that was awesome!
P 2 - tum bohat ache gaate ho
S - thanks
P 3 - why don't you sing professionally?
 
The managr arrives
 
M - agar yeh professionally gaane laga tho mera kya hoga?
 
Everyone laughs and slowly they disperse. The manager looks at Sumit and shakes his hand, he then hands him some money
 
S - Sir ye?
M - tumhari pay
S - lekin Sir.....main ye paise nahin le sakta
M - kyun nahin? tum paise ke liye nahin gaate?
S - nahin Sir, gaane mera kaam nahin mera shock hai, I do it to please people.....
 
Sumit walks away leaving the manager confused, Rahul walks to the manager
 
R - Sir....aap shahid bhool rahe hai....Sumit is shaher ke sabse bade industrialist Kul Whadwa ke beta hai, usse paison ki koi kami nahin
 
Rahul follows Sumit, they sit in the car and make their way home. As they are driving they approach a red light, Sumit is in the driver's seat waiting for the light to turn green, he looks around him, suddenly he is blinded by light, he looks closely and sees a necklace, as he looks closer he notices a girl's smile and then her eyes, he keeps on staring but before he can get a proper look at her he hears horns honking behind him as the light has changed to green
 
R - Sumit kya hogaya tujhe, light change hogayi hai chal, varna paanga pe jaayega
S - haan haan ja raha hoon
 
Sumit drives off but the girl's eyes and lips are still in his mind, he arrives home and walks inside and sees his dad busy with phonecalls, his mom Veena comes up to him
 
V - kahan tha tu?
S - cafe per mama
V - kitni baar samjaaya hai tujhe ke vahan na jaaya kar, humhara itna bada business hai fhir vahan jaane ki kya zuroorat hai
S - jaanta hoon mama lekin main abhi business nahin karna chahta
 
Kul, who has now gotten  off the phone
 
K - haan business nahin karna chahta, ek saal se beta hai ghar par jabse graduate kar chuka hai lekin apne future ka koi andaza nahin
S - mama please, dad ko samjaaye I'm going to my room
 
Sumit walks off while Kul continues his lecture, Sumit just rolls his eyes and walks into his room and puts the stereo system on, he closes his eyes and flashes of the girl from earliercome before him, he smiles and buries himself in the duvet cover.
 
To be continued
 
how did you like the first part????? plz comment
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Posted: 16 October 2006 at 5:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rachandeep

Originally posted by dude068

Originally posted by rachandeep

Originally posted by dude068

wow finally sum1 wants to write about SUKK

Big smile

i'm gonna njoy readin dis fanfic

plz do continue
 
thanks.....i wrote this time bak but never got much response so i forgot bout it..but if u want i can continue?


plz do...
i really njoy reading ur work Embarrassed
 
k ill get 2 work on this asap

 

I didn't knew that it started long time back......if I knew there was one here I'd be on already....lolz....you know what I mean Rach di!!Wink...i just went and checked the date and realised that it's really actually long time back...well you can continue now!!!

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Posted: 16 October 2006 at 7:38am | IP Logged

wah wah!!!

taleyan taleyan plz!!!

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LOL LOL LOL

well Rach seems like u've done it again!!!! Gr8 work 10/10

(can i make a suggestion tho...y dont u post this in da KK forum...I bet it'll b more appreciated there...forgive me if its already there too)

 

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Posted: 16 October 2006 at 11:05am | IP Logged
hey dude lol whats ur name....lol im always callin u dude LOL LOL LOL thanx 4 liking it...erm i cud do it there.....actually i might lol ill see what happens Big smile
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Posted: 16 October 2006 at 11:07am | IP Logged
hey my name's Henna! Embarrassed

dont worry i didnt mind u calling me dude either
Rachu_1987 IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 16 October 2006 at 11:59am | IP Logged
ok Heena.....safe ill post this up in da kk forum

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