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Posted: 26 January 2014 at 7:10pm | IP Logged
Wow Kabir is so different and I'm loving it!! Keep it up please!!Smile

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Posted: 26 January 2014 at 7:50pm | IP Logged
thnx for the p.m...oho!!Toh Kabir is sanskrai one.hmmmTongueTongueTongue

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Posted: 26 January 2014 at 9:19pm | IP Logged
thanks for the PM! glad to read your FF...it's very entertaining! :) Thank God there were only 6 parts for me to catch up on otherwise would be spending hours just reading ur FF..wouldn't have been able to stop :p

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Posted: 26 January 2014 at 10:48pm | IP Logged
sound interesting 

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Hey everyone!! Thankyou all for your loving comments!!! Glad u liked it! Here is the next update of my FF! Hope u like it!

Chapter 7:


Kabir is tensed as he is not getting permission and Rachna is busy in eating apples

 

Kabir: bhabhii jao naa plzz warna permission nahi milegee

Pihu: ohoo Kabir jaa rahee hun pehlay mujhay kapday tou rakhnay do

Kabir: huhhh yeh billi kis kaam ke liye hai phir kab se apple khayay jaa rhee hai

Rachna: kyun tumhein koi problem hai meri marzi mein apple khaaun ya banana and btw apple khaanay se aapki skin fresh hotee hai samjhay tum :/

Kabir: achaa maataa itna badaa lecture, khaao yeh lo aur khaao (puts all the apples in her plate)

Rachna: thanks but mein hippopotamus nahi hun

Kabir: us se kam bhi nahi ho

Rachna: whattt tum ne mujhay hipo bolaa

Pihu: tum dono phir shuru hogayay ajeeb ho ghoomna bhi saath hai aur ladtay bhi rehtay ho saara waqt ...

Kabir: bhabhiii (making sad face)

Pihu: acha baba jaa rahee hun

Pihu left...

 

Rachna still busy in eating apple and reading magazine Kabir seeing her getting irritated

Kabir: Rachna aisaa kya likha hai iss magazine mein, tum ek ghantay se issay padh rahi hoo

Rachna: Kyun tumhein kya karna hai jaan ke

Kabir: phir bhi pata tou chalay kya padh rahe hooo

And tried to snatch the magazine and he snatched Tongue

Kabir making evil smile Evil Smile hauhahahh wait a minute and Rachna chasing him

Rachna: Kabir give mee or I will kill u

Kabir: nahi dungaa aaj dekh ke rahunga tum kya padh rahee hoo

Rachna: khabardaar jo tumne issay kholaa

Kabir: ahaan ab tou dekhna padegaa

Rachna started chasing him

Rachna: mein tumhari tarah naked pics nahi dekhti

Kabir shocked whattt?? Mein aur naked pics

Rachna: haan mein sab ko bataaun gi tum kya kya kartay ho

Kabir moved close to her and tried to flirt kya kya karta hun

Rachna: Kabir dekhooo door raho mujh se

And he opened the magazine...

Kabir's eyes opened wide and he started laughing like mads

Rachna: huh ab kya huaa tumhein (making baby face)

Kabir: hahahhahah tum yeh sab chupaa rahi thi Oh God Love Life and Romance

Rachna: meri marzi mein jo padhun waisay bhi I love this novel

Kabir: hmm interesting waisay achi hai meine bhi padha huwa hai Dr Rachna

In mean time Pihu came...

Kabir: bhabhi kyaa hua

Rachna: dee

Pihu: mil gayee permisiion

Kabir: wowww wowww yayyy m sooo happy thank u sooo much bhabhi

Pihu: Kabir but yaad rahay kal shaam tak puhanch jana hai ghar ok

Kabir: okk promise pakka promise Rachna tum apni cheezain rakhlo bag mein jo bhi rakhna hai

Rachna : nahi mere khayal se mujhay nahi jana chahyay

Kabir: per kyun abhi tumne bola tum chalogee

Pihu: Kabir sahi hai naa Rachna ko nahi jaana chahyay

Kabir: theek hai phir mein bhi nahi jaa raha (making sad face)

Rachna: kyunn

Kabir: bas yaar mood nahi ho raha

Rachna: Kabir tum jaao naa plzzz

Pihu: ok bas final hai Kabir aur Rachna kal picnic pe jaa rahay hain

Kabir: haan bas yeh final hai okkk

Rachna: okk and she smiled

Kabir: mein jaa raha hun packing karnay Rachna subah ko tayar rehna

Kabir left

Pihu: Rachna apna khayal rakhna aur samjhdaari dikhana bewaakoofi mat karna koi bhi

Rachna: haan dee don't worry

 

Next morning...

RaBir reached their picnic spot Tripathi's farm house...

Rachna: wow this is beautiful

Nisha; Rachna tum yahan first time aayee hoo na hum tou har month aatay thay yaha

Tina: yeah aur yahan bohat baar hum sab ne stay bhi kiya hai

Rachna: really wow kitna mazaaa aata hogaa na

Mayank: guys apnay apnay rooms mein jaao aur fresh up hojaao

Kabir: yeah phir hum sab maza karenge

They all went to their respective rooms...and changed their clothes, after sometime Rachna came up wearing a T shirt and jeans and was roaming in the park Kabir saw her and he made her scared

Kabir: bhauwww

Rachna: hawww Kabir tumne meri jaan nikaal di thi

Kabir: darpok billi...yahan kya kar rahi hoo chaloo

Rachna: kahan

Kabir: arrey chalooo touuu

And dragged her

Rachna: wowww kitnay cute horses hain

Kabir: tumhein pata hai yeh wala mera sab se favorite hai,,,,,tumhein ride karna hai

Rachna: nahi mujhay dar lagta hai

Kabir: nahi lagay ga chalo mere sath

He got up on the horse

Kabir: haath do naa

She gave her hand and he made her sit on his front

Kabir: ab issay jo hai naa zor se pakadna

He start riding horse Rachna make her eyes close tightly she was damn scared horse started riding sooo fast

Kabir: aankhein tou kholoo yar dekho kitna maza araha hai

Rachna: NOoo m scared

The horse galloped more fastly, she couldn't control and hugged Kabir while closing her eyes

Rachna: Kabir plzz stop stop stopp

Kabir was getting goose bumps as she was hugging him

He slowed down the horse and she opened her eyes and felt embarrassed and turned her face in front, her hair were flying and touching his face he was not knowing what was happening to him and finally the horse stopped and without looking towards Kabir she get down, Kabir also got down in meanwhile their friends came

Tina: Kabir this is not fair tum hamesha mere saath horse ride kartay ho

Kabir: hamesha kab??

Mayank: arrey yaar ek baar hi tou ki thee tumharay saath

And all laughed except Rachna smiling softly and unable to look in his eyes

Tina: whatever ek baar hee sahi

Ashish: arrey guys chalo na am soo hungry lets do lunch

 

They all did lunch...and went near the pool side...they all were in the pool and enjoying except Rachna

Kabir: Rachna chalo naa wahan kya kar rahi hoo

Rachna: no mere kapday

Nisha: what kapday Rachna dekhoo kitna thanda paani hai buhat mazaa aaraha hai

Kabir: come on Rachna aao naa and he dragged her in the pool's water

Rachna: Kabir noo what r u doing

Kabir: hahahha mazaa aaya see kitna acha paani hai splashing water on her

Rachna was getting too much shy seeing him in vest and wet look

Rachna: Kabir stop it

And she also started splashing water on him and she was covering herself with her arms as all her clothes became wet, their friends were busy in playing with each other, Kabir noticed she is getting uncomfortable he went near her so close so no one can see her she was blushing on Kabir's closeness and he got her out from the pool

 

In hall

Kabir: Rachna tum change karlo warna thand lag jayegee

Rachna went in her room and shocked

Rachna: oH shittt ab kya karunnn

After thinking for sometime she went to Kabir's room, he was changing his shirt

Kabir: ye koun hai

Rachna staying tensed

Kabir: Rachna tum, kyaa hua

Rachna: woh mein

Kabir: kya hua tum pareshan lag rahee hoo

Rachna: woh Kabir mein apni top laana bhool gayee LOL

Kabir: ohh Koi baat nahii nisha yaa neha se le loo iss mein pareshani ki kya baat hai

Rachna: lekin woh log tou abhi tak pool mein hai

Kabir: hmmm wait  a minute

Rachna: kyaa (confused)


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Likes dislikes tamatar andaz all are welcome Big smile



Edited by RabirLover - 27 April 2014 at 2:29am

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Posted: 27 January 2014 at 7:07pm | IP Logged
Yay! I'm the first one to comment!! Big smile
Loved it! Especially the horse scene...I could just imagine Rachna hugging Kabir and her hair flying everywhere!! Too good yaaar...update soon!

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Posted: 27 January 2014 at 8:47pm | IP Logged
hey can't wait or next part .. what will kabir do??WinkLOL
very nice update ClapClap

thanks for the pmTongue

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Posted: 27 January 2014 at 8:47pm | IP Logged
getting better with every chap...agree with the person above..the horse riding was rlly good...although i can picture all the scenes, that one was really nice ;)
great update! post again soon :) & thanks 4 PM


Edited by yellowpurse - 27 January 2014 at 8:43pm

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