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Posted: 26 January 2014 at 2:02am | IP Logged
Loving the kabir here.. He is so naughty.. Lovely update.. Thanks for PM

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Lovely update... so rachna starts feeling for kabir Day Dreaming 

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Heya Peeps! Thanx for your loving comments!!! Love u all!!! Here u go with the next chapter...! Hope u like it!


Chapter 6:

Pihu came near the car, Kabir and Rachna got shocked fr some time...

Kabir: bhabhi aap

Pihu: haan mein time dekha hai

Kabir: oh sorry thodee late hogayee

Pihu:thodee late buhat zyada late dekho 12 baj rahay hain

Rachna: sorry di who actually pata nahi chala

Pihu: hmm chalo ab andar Rachna tumhein college bhi tou jana hai na kitna late hogayee

They all went to their respective rooms...Rachna after getting freshed up & wearing her night suit, opened her laptop

Rachna(in mind): uff Rachna kal tumhari band bajnay wali hai new research aur meine kuch dekha tak nahi

On the other hand Kabir in his room

Kabir: haan Mayank bol

Mayank: tum log puhanch gayay na late tou nahi hue matlab daant tou nhi sunee??

Kabir: nahi yaar all is well chal bye mujhay neend arahee hai

He is trying to sleep but his mind is rolling around Rachna's thoughts whatever happened in the car and party.. a smile curved over his lips...on the other hand Rachna in her room

Rachna: arghh yeh kya hogya laptop nahi chal rahaa ab kya karun...

As Pihu enters

Pihu: kya hua

Rachna: dee mera laptop nahi chal raha jiju ka do thodee dair ke liye

Pihu: oh lekin who tou office chod ke aayay hain

Rachna: Oh No abbb

Pihu: acha tu yeh milk pee aur so jaaa subah ko karlena na

Rachna: nahi dee zarooree kaam hai

Pihu: arrey haan Kabir se lelo

Rachna: Kabir se haan dee aap laake do naa

Pihu: kyun mera kaam thodee naa hai tu jaa mujhay mohan bula rahay hain aur yeh milk pee lena

Rachna (in mind): Kabir se loon lekin meine night suit pehna hua hai kaisay jaun

...

Kabir: arrey yaar neend kyun nahi aa rahee

As someone knocked his room's door

Kabir: is waqt koun come in

He was lying on bed

Rachna: woh mein sorry disturb karnay ke liye

Kabir: no its ok kya huaa any problem

Rachna: woh mera laptop nahi chal raha aur mujhay zarooree kaam krna hai

Kabir: oh lekin abhi tou laptop repair shop band hoga na (laughing in heart)

Rachna: Kabir tum jaan boojh ke mujhay tang kr rahay ho na

Kabir: nahi tou hehheheh

Rachna: acha mujhay tum apna laptop de sakty ho thodee dair ke liye

Kabir :hmm ok le lo

Rachna: thanks :)))

Kabir: tum nahi sudhrogee naa

Rachna: Oh Sorry

Kabir:phir sorry hahahhah

Rachna: acha bas ab laptop do

He gave her his laptop and Rachna was about to leave

Kabir: listen billi galtee se bhi meri pics mat kholna

Rachna: mujhay bhi koi shouq nahi hai acha *showed him tongue* and left

Rachna in her room opened the laptop...

Rachna: ermmm kahan se start karun and her eyes stucked on a folder on the desktop

Arrey yeh kya hai ,,,,aaj tou dekh ke rahungee phir mazaa aayega

She opened the folder...oh, random pics of his friends were there, there was one more sub-folder ..ahan Kabir Mishra aj tou tumharay sab raaz khulengay she opened and what she saw...

Rachna's eyes wide opened: hawww :OOO eee chee chee girls k pics wo bhi naked yeh ladkay na kabhi nahi sudhartay arrey yeh kon hai oh means koi GF hogee haan yeh hee iski GF hogee itna chipak rahee hai

She didn't noticed time it was 3am...oh God yeh kya mera saara waqt iski investigation mein gaya lekin mein kyun interest le rahe hun Kabir ki investigation mein and she tried to sleep when she got  a thought of whatever happened in the car and she blushed and slept..

 

...Next morning...

Rachna was late and still sleeping...

Kabir knocked her door and he was confused

Kabir: huh she still sleeping...he goes in her room and he tried to take his laptop which was near her on bed, and when he was about to take it, Rachna kept her hand on his hand and dragged him in hugging position

Kabir : (confused) oh God Rachna what are u doing mein aisaa ladka nahi hun yaarr

Rachna (in sleepy voice): sonay do na and again dragging him

Kabir: Rachna leave me see m not ur patient plzz mujhay chod doo warna hum dono ko bada injection lagega humaray ghar walon ki taraf se

Rachna (In sleep): tum bhi sojaao

Kabir: whatt no No  mein ladkiyon ke sath shaadi se pehlay nahi  sotaa

After a lot of struggle he freed himself and went

downstairs

Kabir: bhabhi Rachna college nahi jaa rahee kya

Pihu: kyaaa is she still sleeping!

Kabir: haan mein apna laptop lene gaya woh tou so rahee hai shayad kisii ne nasha pila diya hai

Pihu: what Kabir har baat pe mazaak ruko mein dekhtee hun

Pihu: Rachna tu abhi tak so rahee hai uthh

Rachna: kya hua deee cheekh kyun rahee ho

Pihu: time dekh 10 baj gayay hain

Rachna woke up in shock whattt!!!! mein late hogayee she got up hurriedly and ran towards the washroom...

 

...On the way to college...

Rachna: Kabir who is alex and winked at him

Kabir: Alex!! kon Alex (confused)

Rachna: jhoot mat bolo mujhay sab pata hai ya itni GFs rakhee hain ke naam hee yaad nahi

Kabir:kya kya pagal hogayee ho kya billi aisa kuch nahi hai

Rachna: ek baat bolun meine tumhari sab pics dekhee hain bachpan se leke

Kabir: se leke?????

Rachna: nahi nahi kuch nahi and laughed

Kabir: mujhay pata thaa tum jo ho na akdu ho tum zaroor meree cheezein dekho geein Angry

Rachna laughing...cheezein in dekhna hee tou doctor ka kaam hai na

They reached the college while leaving she said: btw 5 ki age mein bina shorts ke buhat cute lag rahay thay by saying this she left running

Kabir: whattt :O Rachna I will see u (angry tone)

 

...In night...

Kabir roaming in Pihu and mohan's room

Mohan: oh bhaai kya hogya hai

Kabir: bhaiii  (making sad baby face)

Mohan: kya hua

Kabir: papa aur maa ne mujhay saaf manaa kar diya picnic per janay se aisaa bhi koi karta hai kya

Pihu: hmm mujhay buhat dukh hua sun ke (laughing)LOL

Kabir: bhabhi plzz help kroo na plzzz plzz

Pihu: hmm ok vaada nahi kartee lekin try zaroor krungee

As Rachna came

Rachna: kya ho raha hai

Mohan: kuch nahi aao naa

Kabir: Rachna tum chalo gee naa

Rachna: kahan

Pihu: koi zaroorat nahi Rachna kahin nahi jayegee

Kabir: arrey friends ke saath picnic pe waisay bhi ab tum un sab ki achi friend ho sab bol rahay thay tumharay..

Rachna: lekin mera college..

Kabir: array weekend hai chalo naa plzzz plzz warna mera jaana cancel mein maa papa se bolun ga Rachna ka buhat mood hai

Pihu: nahi Kabir tum kya bachon jaisee baatein kar rahay ho Rachna aisay mein...

Mohan: janay do Pihu kya hogya aisay Rachna akelee yahan bore nahi hogee

Pihu: hmm pehlay maa papa se baat karne hogee..


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I know it's a bit short! I'd be updating the next part tonight!

Likes, dislikes, tamatarz andaz all are welcome Big smile


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i like it and i want to understand it but i cant understand hindiUnhappy

but thanks for pm

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Posted: 26 January 2014 at 10:08am | IP Logged
Am loving his FF!!!! thanx for the pm!!

Kabir:  oh God Rachna what are u doing mein aisaa ladka nahi hun yaarr..LOLROFL

Rachna (in sleepy voice): sonay do na and again dragging him


from where u find such lines...ROFL (Y)

I just love the Kabir's character here... he is so naughty and sweet... ^_^

so they going on anoher trip...! can't wait for u to update...!Day Dreaming


Edited by Preeti16 - 26 January 2014 at 10:07am

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Posted: 26 January 2014 at 12:44pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by hangok

i like it and i want to understand it but i cant understand hindiUnhappy

but thanks for pm

sorry can't write it all in eng... i m not even a bit good in writtin dialogues in eng...Ouch  thaanks 4 liking...


Edited by RabirLover - 26 January 2014 at 12:44pm

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Posted: 26 January 2014 at 12:46pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Preeti16

Am loving his FF!!!! thanx for the pm!!

Kabir:  oh God Rachna what are u doing mein aisaa ladka nahi hun yaarr..LOLROFL

Rachna (in sleepy voice): sonay do na and again dragging him


from where u find such lines...ROFL (Y)

I just love the Kabir's character here... he is so naughty and sweet... ^_^

so they going on anoher trip...! can't wait for u to update...!Day Dreaming

Thanks alooot... glad u liked it...! Big smile

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Loved it Meru! No tamatars for you, only roses!!! Update soon!

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