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Posted: 24 January 2014 at 4:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by brat2008

Really nice !! I do follow Hindi very well too.LOL
 Pls don't stop , continue writing plsLOL

Pls pm me once you updateEmbarrassed

Thanku...!!! Embarrassed olryt i'd cntinue...LOL Smile  sure i wud... Smile

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Originally posted by usrfan

Love it. I can follow hindi. But when it is mainly dialogs, I would feel easier to read the English version (and Hindi version in leisure, as I did for another ff of yours).

Thanku..Smile but srry yaar datz my prob m not dat gud in writing dialogs in eng Ouch dats why da oder 1's dialogs were also in hindi but had given translation...

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Originally posted by saravathi

Thanks for the pm and very nice update ...continue writing

Thankss...! Smile mp...

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Hey everyone! Thanks for your Lovely comments! Here u go with the next update! Hope u'd like it!

chapter 4:

From back people kept on horning as Kabir was busy in grinningLOL
pee peep peeep finally he came back to senses
Kabir:Angryjaa raha hun waitt pagal awaam kahin ki...

at home...

Sug: aray Pihu yeh Kabir kyun nahi aaya abhi tak
Pihu: pata nahi maa itna door tou nahi hai Rachna ka institute mein abhi usay phone karti hoon
at the same time Kabir enters
Pihu: yeh lijiye aagya KabirTongue
Kabir: bhabhi coffee milegee plzzTongueTongue
Pihu: coffee? itni garmi mein??Confused
Kabir: han tou kya huaSmilegarmi hai tou chayay bhi tou peetay hain na sabLOL waisay mujhay aur hot lagna hai kisiko patana haiWink
Pihu: hain yeh pehli baar mein sun rahi hun hot lagnay ke liye coffee peetay hainLOLLOLaur btw my naughty dewar kisko patana hai tumhein sharam nahi aati maan ke samnay aisee baatein kartay huweLOL
sugi: yeh tou hai hi pagal Pihu iske liye koi achi si ladki dhoondoLOL
Kabir: maan meine 100 baar bola hai mein apni marzi se shaadi krungaAngry
sugi: acha acha chod ab yeh sab baatein chodo haan tumharay friend Mayank ka phone aaya tha us se baa karlay
Kabir: oh acha ok...

at phone
Mayank: kahan hai yr tu Kabir kal se na akoi phone na koi message
Kabir: aray yr busy tha
Mayank: busy oh acha haan suna hai tumhari bhabhi ki sister aayi huee hai kaisee haiWink
Kabir: haan achi hai..bt thodi pagal haiLOLLOL
Mayank: ohoo means tum us mein interested hoWink
Kabir:Angrypagal hogya hai kya kaisee batein kr rha hai
Mayank: acha sun aaj raat ko ashish tania hum sab ne party rkhee hai yehee batanay ke lye phone kya tha
Kabir: really wowww kitnay dinon baad hum sab milengayTongueTongue mujhay dekhna hai tania abhi bhi utni hot lagtee hai jaisay college mein hotee theeWink
Mayank: chal 9 bajay tak aajana aur haan apni new friend ko bhi leke aanaWink

and he cuts the call
Kabir: new friendConfused koun.oh yeh Mayank bhi naAngryAngry...

at door ..knock knock
Kabir: comein
Pihu: hmmm yeh lou tumhaari cold coffeTongue
Kabir; woww thank u bhabhi
she was abt to leave...
Kabir: bhabhi ek minuteTongue
Pihu: haan kya huaSmile
Kabir: yahan bethain na ek baat krnee hai aapse
Pihu; Kabir mujhay buhat kaam hai baad mein
Kabir: nahi na plzz 5minutes plzz
Pihu: okk 
and she sits on bed 
Pihu: han ab bol
Kabir; woh ,,actually mujhay yeh poochna tha ke..woh bhai ne kabhi aapko stairs se utarte waqt stare kya hai
Pihu:AngryKabir ye kaisa sawaal hai tum mera time waste kar rahay ho
she was abt to leave 
Kabir: nahi nahi sorry LOLLOL mein mazaak kr rha tha please ek aur baat
Pihu; uff Kabir phr koi fuzool baat mat krna
Kabir: acha ek baat plz plzz
Pihu: ab kya hai
Kabir: kuch nahi warna aap phr daanteingeeOuch
Pihu: Kabir tum bilkul pagal hoLOLLOL acha suno Rachna ko pick krnay ke liye driver ko boldo
Kabir; okBig smile driver kyun mein khud chala jata hun
Pihu; aray waah pehlay tou to and jerry ki tarah usay tang krtay thayLOLkya baat hai
Kabir: woh bore horha hun na mein khud hee chala jaata hunTongue

...on the way to home RaBir in car Tongue...
both laughing loudlyLOL
Rachna: pata hai kya Kabir meine aisay pata nahi kitnay ladkon ko bhagaya hai ke mere 15-20 bf's hainLOLLOL aur woh sab maan bhi lete thay
Kabir: i cant believe tum itni clever ho sktee ho becharayROFL
Rachna: tou mein kya krtee maan aur papa tou peechay padgayya hain mereLOL
Kabir: hana kyunki tum 30-35 ki hogayee hogee hainaLOLLOL
Rachna:whatAngryAngryKabirShocked
Kabir: sorry kiddingLOLLOL
Rachna: its okSmile
Kabir: woww gol gappayTongue
Rachna: tumhein pasand hainTongue?? mujhay bhiTongue
Kabir: han pata hai mein australia mein stalls dhoondtay dhoontay thak jata thaOuch chalo...Smile
Rachna:okTongue.
they both reached stalll...
while eating Rachna got tears in eyes
Kabir: tum indian ladkiyan na itni kamzor hotee hoo ek mirchi tak bardaahst nahi hoteeLOLLOL
Rachna: mujhay pani chahyayAngry jaldi
Kabir :ok wiat bhaiya paani dena and to do his naiughtiness Kabir added some salt in waterLOL
Rachna drank
Rachna:DeadDead
Kabir: kya hua pani khaara hai naWink
Rachna: KabirAngry matlab tumne is mein
Kabir: han meine ismein salt milayaLOL and ran
she tried to chased him bt couldnt and finally while running they reached to their
Rachna hitted him so hardly on his shoulder
Rachna: i wont leave uAngry
Kabir:LOLLOL sorry sorry mazaak kr rha tha
during their prank Kabir saw one big truck coming ane saw Rachna busy in her own hitting he immediately grab her frm waist and make her so close to him 
Rachna was scared and she closed her eyes so tightlyyEmbarrassedEmbarrassedwhile holding his shirt tightlyWink
when truck went he sighed releif and slowly said her
Kabir: woh truck chala gaya
Rachna loosed her grip in embarrasment and couldnt meet her eyes wth himEmbarrassed
Kabir tried to make situation normal
Kabir: tum ladkiyan kitna dartee ho naLOLLOL chalo late horhee hai
Rachna while standing kept on thinking and then sat in car...
and finally reached home...
mohan: itni late kyun krdee tum logon ne
Rachna: woh jiju
Kabir: woh traffic buhat zyada tha islye
Pihu: Rachna
 yeh tere lips ke pass kya laga hai
Rachna: kyaConfused
Pihu: yeh kya hai...hmm sach cah bataao kahan gayay thay tum donon
Kabir: woh mera matlab Rachna ka bhi mann kar rha tha gol gappay khanay ka islye hum
mohan: oh acha hmmm mere aur Pihu ke lye nahi layay while holding her frm waistWink
Pihu:ShockedEmbarrassed
RaBir:LOL
Pihu: jao Rachna fresh hojaaoTongue


...at Rachna's room...
 Rachna was taking out her clothes 
door:knock knock

Rachna: come in...haan koun hain
Kabir: mein hun
Rachna: tum yahan kyun aayay ho mujhay tumharay pass aana chahyay tha
Kabir: kyunWink while winking
Rachna: LOLtumhein kitnee khush fehmee hai na ke mein tumharay pass flirt karnay aarhe theeAngry
Kabir: kya pataLOLLOLWink
Rachna: tumhein thanks bolnay aana tha aaj jo tumne kiya am really thankful to uSmile
Kabir: its ok uski zaroorat nahi haiTongue btw mein tum se bolnay aaya tha ke aaj hum friends ne get together rakhi hai tum bhi chalo naTongue
Rachna:meinShocked lekin mein wahan kya krungee mein kisi ko bhi nahi jaanteOuch
Kabir: tou kya huaa jaan lo gee aur meree hot friends bhi dekh lenaLOL
Rachna: Kabir tum bhi naLOL har waqt mazaak
Kabir: chalo na plzz trust me buhat mazaa aayegaTongueyahan fuzool mein bore hojaogee
Rachna: ok mein dee se pehlay ppochtee hun
Kabir: lo is mein poochnay ki kya baat haiBig smiletum fresh hojao mein baat krlunga bhabhi seTongue
Rachna: okSmile
Rachna narrowing eye brows
Kabir:kyaConfused
Rachna: mujhay fresh hona hai
Kabir: han tou jaao mujhay thodee na aana hai tumharay sathLOL
Rachna:AngryKabir mujhay fresh hona hai
Kabir: matlab tum chahti ho meinWink
Rachna: KabirAngryAngry tum bahir jaaogay tou mein room lock krungeee na tumharay samnay tou nhi Angry
Kabir: oh acha sorry sorryLOLLOLLOL mein jaa rha hun
he left
Rachna (in mind):yeh kya cheez hai pagalLOLLOLLOL

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Edited by RabirLover - 27 April 2014 at 2:26am

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Chapter 5:

 

Kabir was going downstairs...he was finding Pihu...finally he got her

Kabir: bhabhi bhabhi plzzz meree baat sunoo

Pihu: kya hai Kabir plzz dekho phr se subah wali koi bi fuzool baat mat krna mujhay buhat kaam hai  she was abt to left for kitchen

Kabir: nahi bhabhi suno touu sach mein ek baat hai

Pihu: hmm bolo

Kabir: who mere friends ne party rakhee hai

Pihu: tou :p

Kabir: tou yeh ke

Pihu: maan se permission lenee hai ya pa'pa se

Kabir: array nahi aap se permission lenee hai

Pihu: mujh se kya  Confused

Kabir: who mein soch raha thaa ke Rachna tou ghar pe bore ho jayegee naa

Pihu's eyes wide open

Pihu: who kyun bore hogeee

Kabir: array I mean agr woh mere sath chalay tou...

Pihu gave him look...

Pihu: u mean tumharay saath party mein

Kabir: han trust me usay buhat mazaa aayega mere friends bhi hongay na

Pihu: lekin raat mein agr late hogayee tou nahin Kabir kabhi Rachna ko aisay akelay maan papa ne nahi choda unhein pata laga tou

Kabir: nahi sach mein we will be back by 11

Pihu: BY 10

Kabir: acha ok By 10 pakka

In mean while Rachna came...

Rachna: kya horha hai

Kabir: dekha bhabhi isay kehtay hain think of devil and devil is here he laughed loudly

Rachna: Shocked mein devil tou tum (she was not knowing what to say)devil ki biwi

Pihu hit her own head

Kabir: isay kehtay hain pagal billy mein tou ladka hon  hahhahah

Rachna: hahhaha lame joke kisne kaha tum ladkay ho

Kabir: Dr ne ab bolo and winkedWink

Pihu: stoppp Rachna Kabir yeh sb kya hai mein pagal hojaungee tum dono ke beech mein..oh God. Rachna jaa ke ready hojaa party mein jana hai na!

Kabir: haan haan jao aur sunoo achay se kapday pehan na

Rachna: matlab Confused

Kabir: achay se

Rachna again confused

Kabir: array tumhein itni simple baat samjh nahi aatee

Rachna: Oh God mein ja rhee hun ready honay

Rachna left

Pihu: Kabir yeh kya hai mein samajh gayee tum kya bolna chah rahay thay and *held him from ears* sudhar jaao

Kabir: sorry bhabhi mazaak kar rha tha ahhh mera kaan

Pihu: hmm jao aur late mat karna aur Rachna ka achay se khayal rkhna

Kabir: don't worry

Its 7pm...

Kabir went in Rachna's room, knocking first.. Rachna was getting ready.. she was wearing a beautiful red top knee length, she was wearing a one piece and had left her hair open(she has step cutting) she wore silver loops and high heels

Kabir eyes and mouth was wide open she was looking stunning she wasn't knowing he is standing at door when she turned from mirror

Rachna: come in who is there...oh Kabir sorry for late m ready now shall we go

Kabir was staring at her and then came back to senses :yeah its ok chalo

They sat in car and went to the party...

As they entered the club it was fully disco environment...

Mayank saw Kabir

Mayank: Kabir idhar aa

Kabir: ok coming

Mayank: kahan tha yaar tu itni late krdeee..

Kabir: kuch nahi yr traffic tha oh yes meet my new friend Rachna

Mayank: hello Rachna

Rachna: hii

Mayank: ok lets go to tha side everyone waiting

Kabir met all his friends and his one friend tina hugged him so tightly

Tina: Hi Kabir omg u r looking so handsome

Rachna(in mind);yeh ladki pakki flirt hai

Kabir: oh yeah meet Rachna...Rachna she is tina, nisha ,neha, ashish and rahul

And guys she is Rachna my sister in law's sister and my new friend

Rachna: Hi

They all greeted her..Rachna got happy that he atleast introduced her as a friend

Tina: oh Rachna u  really beautiful...Kabir coughed to tease Rachna.. Rachna understood

Rachna: thank u

Nisha: guys lets dance hum kya krnay aayay yahan

Rahul: yea lets goo...

Kabir: Rachna chalo na and in mean while

Tina dragged Kabir and all friends were busy in dancing Rachna was left alone

Rachna: mein yahan kyun aayee (feeling sad)

Rahul noticed Rachna

Rahul: come on Rachna lets dance

Rachna: no sorry mujhay dance nahi aata feeling little weird

Kabir: wait a minute tina m coming he went towards Rachna...Rachna chalo naa

Rachna:lekin Kabir

Kabir: arrey come on... he hold her wrist unknowingly and dragged her to dance floor.. Rachna felt goose bumps...

Kabir: kya hua tum itni chup chup kyun ho kaali billi ghar pe tou buhat meow meow boltee hai and she laughed

Rachna: woh Kabir mein kabhi aisee parties mein nahi aayee naa islye thoda ajeeb

Kabir noticed she didn't mind his word kaali billi he got it she is not in good mood...

Kabir: hmm tou ek kaam krtay hain chalo hum ghar chlatay hain

Rachna: nahin tum apnay friends ke sath raho mein ghar chalee jaaungee

In mean while nisha interrupted kya ho raha hai guysss arrey Rachna chalo mere saath tum bore horhee hogee na dekho jab mein new thee na is group mein mujhay bhi yeh log aisay bore krtay thay

Kabir laughed: hmm yeh tou baat hai lekin nisha tumhein nahi lagta Rachna kuch zyada alag hai and winked to nisha

Nisha: ehem haan yeh baat tou hai

Rachna: mein paani peeke aatee hun she went towards the counter

Kabir was seeing her where she is going..

Nisha: Kabir waisay agar tum aur Rachna I mean ehemm

Kabir; shut up nisha

Nisha: showed him toungueTongue

Rachna was drinking water in mean while some white guy who was fully drunk came near to her

Guy: hi baby u look so hot

Rachna became scared and tense she by saying excuse me tried to leave but that guy held her hand

Guy: hey where are u going

Rachna tried to loosen the grip of his hand and slappd him with the other hand.. she got tears

Guy: u slapped me I won't leave u!! 

he held both of her hands and she in scare started shouting but there was too much noise people couldn't hear...she shouted loudly Kabir plzz help me plzz help...

 

Kabir : yaar yeh Rachna kahan reh gayee

Nisha: mein dekhtee hun

Kabir:haan chalo dekhtay hain...

He reached the counter and saw some guy was trying to drag her and harrass her he immediately held him from collar and punched him and that guy fell on the floor and they left from there

Nisha: Rachna are u ok...

Gang reached there...

Rachna was crying badly she nodded her head.. Kabir felt really bad for her... he went towards her Rachna was scared so she hugged him and she was crying

Rahul: guys lets move from here

Kabir: Rachna chalo ghar chaltay hain...

Outside the club... At a restaurant

Tina:oh God these guys are sooo stupid jahan ladki dekhee start hojatay hain apni asliyat pe...come on Rachna cheer up

Rachna: yeah am ok with a fade smile

But Kabir knew she wasn't ok.. he tried to console her by holding her hand..Rachna was shocked to see his care towards her

Mayank: I guess ab hum dinner kar latay hain kafi late hogayee hai

They all had dinner and Rachna also became there friend...they had a fun time but Kabir was noticing Rachna was still too much scared due to that incident...

On the way returning to there home...

Kabir: m sorry Rachna mujhay tumhein nahin leke aana chahyya tha

Rachna: tum sorry kyun bol rahay ho tumne tou meree help ki hai mujhay tumhein thanks bolna chahyay tha

Kabir: I think friends mein thank u word nahi hota hai na

Rachna (smiled): aur sorry bhi nahi hota they both laughed

they reached the gate...Rachna felt something.. she was confused...

Kabir: arrey chalo na andar

Rachna: woh...mein aisay

Kabir: kya hua

Rachna: kuch nahi tum chalo mein aatee hun

Kabir: aisay mein andar nai jaa skta gaadi kon band karega chalo na

Rachna: Kabir lekin mera dress.

Kabir: kya hua tumharay dress koo

Rachna: woh peechay se shayad zip khul gayee hai (while looking down)

Kabir also felt shy and blushed...

Kabir: mein help kardun

Rachna was having no other way

Kabir signalled her to turn Rachna turned and he removed her hair from back she felt her heart beat raising so hard Kabir while looking only towards close make her zip up she felt his fingers touching her bare back and she closed her eyes breathing high...

Kabir: while looking in other direction...ho gaya chalo ab

Rachna was blushing soo much she was again going to say thanks when he interrupted her no thanks and sorry remember btw u are looking really beautiful today

 Rachna only smiled while blushing

In the mean time Pihu reached the gate


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Edited by RabirLover - 27 April 2014 at 2:27am

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Wow superb especially the end Clap Day Dreaming

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aha amazing...superb..thank god i can follow hindi ...LOLLOLLOLLOL
i have not been able to catch up with ur another ff..sorry fot that once i catch up with it will comment there too...

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Wow.. great update .. Loved your FFs.. Please continue Hug

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