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Posted: 22 January 2014 at 6:11pm | IP Logged
CHAPTER 3 :

Rachna: tummmShockedShockedShocked
Kabir:tummmShockedAngry
Rachna: tum yahan kya kr rahay ho tumhari himmat kaisay huee yahan aanay kiAngry
Kabir; oh hello miss president
bt she didnt let him to speak and move towards Kabir
Rachna:samjh gayee mein sab kuch samjh gayeeAngry Angry
Kabir: kya samjh gayee aur door raho mujh se apni haalat dekhee haiAngry
Rachna: kyun kyun door rahoon tum apni haalat dekho bina shirt ke khaday ho mujhay pata hai tum mera faidaa uthanay ki koshish kr rahay hoAngry
Kabir:Shockedwhat are u mad mein aisaa nahi hun

Rachna: jhoot jhoot mat bolo tum jaisay ladkay jahan khoobsuarat ladki dekhtay hain wahin pe

Kabir :Oh hello tum jaisee ladkiyan Kabir Tripathi ke samnay australia mein aagay peechay ghoomtee theen bt meine kabhi unhein lift nahi karayee btw tumhein kis ne kaha tum beautiful hoLOLLOL

Rachna: kya kahaAngryAngryShocked

Kabir(got naughty mind to make her scare): haan lekin itni buri bhi nahi ho...and move close to her waisay buhat hot lag rahee hooWink and winked at her

Rachna:ShockedShockedShocked dee
Kabir: chup bilkul chup waisay chalo na thoda flirt krtay hainWink

Rachna:ShockedCry tum aisa kyun kr rhay ho mein abhi single hun

Kabir:tou tumhein lagta hai mein 2 bachon ki maan se flirt krungaWink...
then heROFL dekho apna face mirror mein kaisay darr jaatee ho na tum ladkiyan

then he wore his shirt back and Rachna kept standing in shock

Rachna:Angry
Kabir: ohoo dr Rachna Garg ab rona band kroLOLLOL
Rachna: mein kahan ro rahe ehunAngry
Kabir: acha abhi tum ro hee tou rahee theeLOLLOL

on the other hand Pihu searching Rachna...
Pihu in mind: yeh Rachna kahan chalee gayee then she heard some voices and entered

Rachna:Angrymein kabhi nahi rotee
Kabir:acha ab room mein aa hee gayee ho tou tum meree room mate ban sktee hoLOLLOLLOL i have no problem

Rachna: whatttShockedShockedAngry Kabir excusme tum mere room mein aayay ho
Pihu: RachnaShocked
Rachna: deeOuch 
she go towards Pihu and hug her
Rachna: dee dekho na Kabir mere room se nahi ja raha
Kabir: bhabhi yeh kis pe gayee hai aap pe tou bilkul bhi nahiLOL
Pihu: Kabir buree baat meri chotee si doll ko tum aisaa nahi bologay
mohan also enters
mohan: kya hua
Rachna: jiju yeh Kabir mujhay tang kr rha haiOuch
Pihu: ohoo bas buhat hogya ab chalo apnay room mein
Rachna: matlabConfusedyeh mera hee tou room hai
Kabir: jee nahi yeh mera room hai
Rachna: jhoot mat boloAngry
Kabir: acha is ghar ki maalik tum ho ya mein
Rachna : mein then she realizedShocked what she said..m.m..matlab uncle hain
Pihu: basss Rachna Kabir ...Rachna tmeine tumhein bola tha left pe second room na ke first 
Rachna: tou yeh second hee tou tha
Pihu; nahi woh store tha jisay tumne room samjhiSmile
Rachna: whatShocked...oh acha sorry dee mistake hogaye..
Pihu: mujhay nahi Kabir ko sorry bolo
mohan: aray leave it chalo Rachna
while leaving Rachna turned back and Kabir giving her naughty smileWink

Next morning...
7 a.m
Kabir in his room ...while sleeping...
Kabir: AngryAngryyeh koun hai yr itna subah subah itna tez volume mein deckSleepy
Rachna busy in her excersise yoga..in yoga dressLOL
Kabir wakeup:AngryAngryAngry dekhna padega...

then he heard voice coming frm Rachna's room
Kabir: oh God yeh ladki subah subah ko dance kr rhee hai kyaAngry dekhta hun isay abhi

he opened her door and kept on lookin her in irritating look while keeping one hand on his waist she wasnt knowing and was busy in exercising
 he go and stop the player...
Rachna:ConfusedAngry koun hai 
she tuned and saw
Kabir: excusme miss president yeh ghar hai disco bar nahiAngry
Rachna: tumne mujhay excersis krtay dekhaAngry
Kabir: nahi nahi dekha forgodsake volume slow krkay bhi tum krsktee ho
Rachna:nahi mujhay aisay mazaa nahi aataAngry
Kabir: btw tum insaanon ki dr bilkul nahi lagtee ya tou tum pagalon ki dr ho ya tumhein dr banany walay pagal thayLOLLOL
Rachna: tum ne phr mera mazaak udayaShocked
Kabir: nahi meine tou banayaLOL udaya kahan btw jaakay dresh hojaao itni smeel krdee hai sweating seDead
Rachna :KabirAngry how dare u
she tried to catch him and Kabir ran away and goes downstairs Rachna keeps on chasing him 
he directly enters kitchen
Kabir: bhabhi bachaao LOLLOL
and hide behind Pihu...
Rachna: dee hato yahan se aaj mein nahi chodongee isayAngry
Kabir:pakad ke dikhaao na kaali billi LOLLOL meoww
Rachna: dee Angry dekhoo ab
Pihu: Kabir
Pihu; RachnaShocked tum mere saath chalo ooperAngry
before leaving Rachna throwed water bottle to him bt he catch it
Kabir:LOLLOLLOLthanks
Pihu: dekho apnay aapko yeh kaisay kapday pehnay huay hain Rachna dekh yahan koi aisay kapday nahi pehnta aur sun humaray ghr mein bhi aisay kapdon ki ijaazat nahi this hai na tu kaisay aayee is haalat mein bahir

Rachna: han mujhay pata tha aap usee ki side logayCry and sit on bed
Pihu: Rachna mera matlab woh nahi tha chalo ab rona band kro aur ready hojaao Tongue tumhein training ke lye jaana hai na 
Rachna:haanOuch
Pihu: dekh Rachna aisay kyun itna sad horhee hoo...pata hai meine Kabir ko kabhi itni masti krtay huay nahi dekha woh sirf apni sisiter se masti krta tha bt uski sister abhi bahir hai bechara sara din bore hota tha mere sath thoda hassi mazaak kr leta tha

Rachna: lekin dee woh mujhay tang krta haiDisapprove

Pihu: nahi krega ab tang i promiseTongue han lekin Kabir buhat khush mizaaj hai buhat masti wala tumhari aur uski buhat jamaygee dekhnaTongue chal ab smile kr

Rachna:Tongue mein ready honay ja rhee hun

after sometime evryone on breakfast table...
Rachna coming frm her wearing light pink anarkali suit leaving hairs open 
Kabir: eee bhabhi bas itna zyada
sug: LOLLOLPihu isay itna mat khila mottaa hojayega
Kabir: han phr koi ladki mujhayOuch..and his eyes were on Rachna she was looking damn beautiful coming down frm stairsEmbarrassed he kept on staring her
sug: aao beta breakfast krlo
Rachna: nahi aunty woh mujhay late horhee hai
Pihu: thoda sa tou khaa lo
Rachna: nahi mein wahin kuch khaalungee
Pihu: chal mein driver ko bol detee hun tumhein drop krde
sug; lekin driver tou Om legayay aur doosri gaadi mohan
Rachna: koi baat nahi mein auto se chali jaongee
sug: aray nahi aisay kaisay...Kabir hai na
Kabir:Shocked mein
sug: han jaao Rachna ko drop krkay aao
Kabir: oh ok maan...
and he left 
Pihu: chal Rachna jaa and remember my words riteTongue
Rachna: ok dee dont worry

RaBir in carTongueTongue
on the way...she didnt speak a word 
Kabir:Confusedisay kya hua kitna bol rhee the
Kabir: woh...m sorrySmile 
Rachna: kis baat ke lye
Kabir: kal raat se aapko tough time dya na
Rachna: nahi its ok infact m sorry mein zyada over react krtee hunSmile
Kabir:btw aapne bataya nahi aap konsi dr hainTongue
Rachna(fits was abt to show anger bt she):LOLLOLLOL
Kabir: why u laughingConfused
Rachna: kuch nahi ...subah wala joke yaad agya
Kabir: acha wohLOLLOLhmm now serious note tou aap konsi dr hain dr Rachna Garg
Wink
Rachna: tumhein flirt krnay ki aadat hai kyaLOL ya heritance..hmm m gynecologist
Kabir:Big smile nahi mein flirt mein believe nahi krta but haan m damn romantic
Rachna: really mein bhiTongue
Kabir: ok krkay dikhaooTongue
Rachna: kaisayConfused
Kabir:LOL tum na buhat innocent ho
Rachna:LOL
Kabir: lo agya tumhara training collegeTongue
Rachna: thanksTongue
Kabir: ek aur baat
Rachna: kyaSmile
Kabir: tum sach mein beautiful hoTongue
Rachna:Embarrassed thanks...
and left Kabir was grinning inside car

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Sorry for another boring update..Ouch. if u don't want me to continue i'll stop here... thanks.


Edited by RabirLover - 27 April 2014 at 2:24am

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Posted: 22 January 2014 at 7:21pm | IP Logged
Hi! Just read all the parts of your story...please continue, it's reaally good! Also can you PM when you update...just sent you a request. Smile

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Posted: 23 January 2014 at 3:56pm | IP Logged
nice! is it possible to write in English? tks
 

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Posted: 23 January 2014 at 4:04pm | IP Logged
Really nice !! I do follow Hindi very well too.LOL
 Pls don't stop , continue writing plsLOL

Pls pm me once you updateEmbarrassed

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Posted: 23 January 2014 at 4:23pm | IP Logged
Love it. I can follow hindi. But when it is mainly dialogs, I would feel easier to read the English version (and Hindi version in leisure, as I did for another ff of yours).

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Posted: 24 January 2014 at 10:33am | IP Logged
Thanks for the pm and very nice update ...continue writing

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Posted: 24 January 2014 at 4:08pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by nividances

Hi! Just read all the parts of your story...please continue, it's reaally good! Also can you PM when you update...just sent you a request. Smile

Thanksss alooot... still i hv less readers but k i'd cntinue 4 da 1s who cnsider my writting good... and yea sure i wud Smile

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Posted: 24 January 2014 at 4:18pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Yellowdiamond

nice! is it possible to write in English? tks
 

Thanku.. but sorry i am not dat much good in writing dialogues in english...and an ff is all about dialogues.. i'd not b able to do a nice job..! Ouch


Edited by RabirLover - 24 January 2014 at 4:29pm

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