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Posted: 29 December 2013 at 6:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by saravathi

Very nice update Clap pls write in english

ThaNks...! Smile

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Posted: 29 December 2013 at 6:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by linu82

Lovely starting, cant wait for the next part and to their meeting, keep it up

Thanks alooot!!!!! :)))))))

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Posted: 29 December 2013 at 6:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ZenerDiode

wow i liked starting. different writing. waiting for next update

Thanksssh!!! :)))

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Posted: 29 December 2013 at 6:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by angelinasingh

thnku for giving us a Rabir ff ...i m waiting to see their meeting...add me to pm list

SuRe... :D


Edited by RabirLover - 29 December 2013 at 6:16am

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CHAPTER2 :

Dayal: ayay aayay Tripathi jee hum tou apki raah taktay reh gayay

Om: yar dayal aaj mein buhat khush hun maana ke tum banaras mein rehtay ho mein mumbai par aaj humari itnay saalon ki dosti rishteydaari mein badal gayeeTongue

they both hug each other

OM: aray haan Kabir idhar aao

Kabir: jee papaTongue

Dayal: aray yeh itna badaa hogayaBig smile

OM: aur nahi tou kya abhi abhi  australia se apni degree complete krkay aaya haiSmile

Dayal also hug Kabir

...chalo beta chalo andar chalo

...the baraat was welcomed with so much honour...

 

Kabir (whispering mohan in mandapWink):bhaai mein pehlay bhabhi dekhunga aap se bhi pehla

mohan: tu srf apni bhabhi nahi uska poora khandaan bhi mujh se pehlay dekhlena bas

Kabir: woww yes yesTongue

suddenly everyone's eyes were on stairs as bride was coming on her right side was Rachna and on left Gunjan and Chaya...

Kabir also look towards bride but view wasn't clear at that time...

as they reached downstairs Kabir's cell rang...

Kabir goes to another side...

Kabir in mind: what the hell mujhay pehlay bhabhi dekhnee theeAngry

Rachna, Gunjan and Chaya make Pihu sit in mandap...

and all the mantra's and rasams started...

Kabir: ok ek kaam kar tu direct ghar pohnch jaa, itni late kardeeeAngry

Mayank: oh bhaai kya karun ek tou itna kaam tha 

Kabir: acha jaldi aa m waiting

then Kabir go towards mandap Rachna's cell start ringing...

Rachna:Shockedhospital se

Rachna go to another side

Rachna:whatttShockedShocked aap jaldi se operation ki tayari krein mein 15 mnutes mein puhnch rahee hun

Shail: kya hua tu itni pareshan kyun hai

Rachna: maan woh ek emrgency case hai mujhay abhi jana hoga

Shail: kya abhi tu kaisay jaasktee hai Pihu ki baraat aayee huaa hai teri behen ki shaadi horhe ehai

Rachna: maan lekin ek insaan ki life mere lye meri behen ki shaadi se zyada imp hai aap plz driver ko bolein gaadi nikalein

Shail: Rachna tu aur tera kaamOuch

she goes hurriedly and change all her clothes and went to hospital...

after all rasams Pihu and mohan took aashirwaad...

during dinner

OM: aray dayal Rachna kahan hai humne tou kitnay saalon se nahi dekhee

Dayal: haan woh yehee  kahin hogee

Shail: woh usay hospital jana pada emrgency mein

OM: hospital kyunConfused

Shail: actually uske patient ka emergency case tha usay  islye jana pada

Om: oh acha tou Doctor hai RachnaTongue

Kabir (in mind): kon RachnaConfused..hogee koi

Sughanda: mere khayal se ab humein chalna chahyay

OM: haan abhi ghr pe bhi tou rasmein krnee hain

Shail(in mind):pata nahi Rachna kab tak aayegaa

during rukhsati: maan Rachna kahan haiCry

Shail: woh emergency case agya tha islye jana pada...

Pihu: mujh se mil ke bhi nahi gayeeCry...

Shail: Pihu bas rona band kar...abTongue

Pihu's rukhsati happened...

5a.m

Rachna at hospitaL : what the hell yaar mein dee see bhi nahi mil payeeOuch but am happy saved two lifesTongue

Dr rahul:oh hello dr Rachna kya hua u look tired jahan tak mujhay yaad hai tumhari dee ki tou shadi thee na kal

Rachna: han par humari doctors ki life mein sab se zyada important kisi ki life save krna hotee haiSmile

dr RAhuL: thats the spirit miss beautifulTongue

Rachna: uff rahul plzzz ab tum mat start hojanaLOLLOL

dr rahul: acha yeh chodo chayay piyogee

Rachna: haan plzz phir mujhay ghar jana hai...


after few days...

Om: haan haan Dayal tum fikar mat karo Rachna yahan 6 months kya 6 saal bhi reh sktee hai

Dayal: thanks alot...

OM: aray thanks ki kya baat hai chal bataa kab ki flight hai Rachna ki

Dayal: aaj raat ki

OM: theek hai mein khud lenay jaaunga driver ke saath

after ending call

Sughanda: kon tha

Om: Dayal tha woh Rachna ki koi training hai mumbai mein usay 6 months ke liye aana tha usne tou bola woh hotel mein rahegee per meine bola nahi jab unki ek betee humaray ghar ko itna cha chala rhee hai doosree ki rehnay ki woh kyun fikar kray

Sughanda: yeh tou buhat acha kiyaTongue...mein room tayar krwa detee hun

Rachna: yayyyTongueTongueTongue mein dee ke pass ja rhee hoon per maan mein aapko aur papa ko buhat miss krungeeOuch

Shail: ohoo Rachna tu srf  months ke lye jaa rhee hai sun achay se rehna

Rachna: haan maan don't worry...maan mere night suits yaad se daalnaTongue...


Kabir: woww bhabhi  aaj tou aap buhat khush lag rhee haiWinkkya baat hai bhaai ne koi romantic line bolee kyaWink

Pihu: Kabir tu sudhar jaa

suddenly mohan enters 

Kabir: ehem ehemWink mere khayal se ab mujhay yahan se chalay jana chahyay

mohan : kyunConfused

Kabir: aray apki koi private talk hogee naWinkWink

mohan: Kabir teri life mein romance aur flirt ke ilawa aur kuch possible hee nhi hai naLOLLOL

Kabir:i hope mujhay bhi koi romance krnay wali mil jayayWinkWink mein din raat uske saath romance karun

Pihu holding his ears: ahaan tou ab romance krnay wali chhayay mohan jee jaldi se iski shaadi krwaayayTongue

mohan: haan mein aaj hee pa'pa se bolta hunLOLLOL

Kabir: nahi bhai plzz yeh mat krna...

Night :

Pihu: RachnaTongue and hug her

Rachna:Tongue dee i missed u so sooo much

Pihu: kya hua hai tujhay itni patlee kyun hogayee hai

Rachna: dee aap bhi naLOLLOL

mohan: hi  Rachna

Rachna: jeejuuu and hug himTongue

then Kabir came...

Kabir: bhabhi yeh kon haiConfused

Rachna: excuse me tum dr Rachna Garg ko nahi jaantayAngry

Kabir: tum koi president ho kya jo tumhein sab jantay hongayLOLLOL

Pihu: Rachna chup

Rachna: dee yeh mera mazaak udaa rha hai

mohan: Kabir sorry bol

Kabir: oh ok sorry miss presidentLOLLOL

Rachna: dee dekhoAngry

Pihu: ohoo Rachna tu sun tou yeh Kabir hai mera dewar

Rachna: Ohhh acha tou yeh hai woh green kurta guy

Kabir: whattt whatt green kurta guy m wearing white cant u seeAngry

Rachna: kuch baatein unkahi achi lagtee hain Evil Smile

suddenly Sughanda gi come...

Rachna met Sughanda and hug her also...

Sughanda: Pihu tum Rachna ko uska room dikhaa doo

Pihu: han maan chal Rachna

on stairs...

Pihu: Rachna tu kab sudhregee

Rachna: meine kya kiyaConfused

Pihu: Kabir ke saith aisay behave kyun kiya

Rachna woh hai hee aisaLOLLOLLOL

Pihu: acha tujhay kaisay pata

Rachna: dee samjha kroo naWink

Pihu: uff Rachna

suddenly mohan calls Pihu...

Pihu: acha sun yahan stairs se left second tera room hai

Rachna: oh ok aap jaao

instead of second Rachna enters the first room...LOLLOL and throws her bag

Rachna: oh God m super tired mein fresh up honay jatee hun.. she took her night suitWinkand went to bath

suddenly Kabir enters his room and he was changing his shirt he saw someone coming out from the washroom...

Kabir: tummmShockedAngryAngry (and cover body with arms)

Rachna: hawww tummmAngry

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Edited by RabirLover - 27 April 2014 at 2:24am

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nice ff

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i wud have preffered rachna in bathrob instead but its okay excellent going...can i kiss u ?

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