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Posted: 21 February 2014 at 2:06pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by cuteangelasya

Freaking awesome! can't wait 4 their date.plz update soon 

Thanks alooot!!!SmileSmile Glad u Liked it!!Big smile 

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Posted: 21 February 2014 at 2:21pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by yellowpurse

mein soch rahi hoon ki ande ya tamatars ke badle...thanda thanda fridge-walaWink pani throw karoLOL that scene was too cute! how romantic...planning a date for his dear rachana? kya baat hai! bacha bada ho gaya haiLOL great update! as always...will eagerly wait to for the next one :)

LOL  thanks alooot dear..!!Smile abhi aage aage dekhiye hota hai kya Wink 


Edited by RabirLover - 21 February 2014 at 3:45pm

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CHAPTER 13:

...Kabir's room...

Kabir roaming in confusion: Oh God Kabir hadd hai, tum aaj date pe jaa rahe ho aur tumhein yeh tak nahi pata ke tumhein Rachna se kya bolna hai Confused!! btw mein pehnoon kya!?

He started taking his clothes one by one out of the cupboard
Kabir (to himself):AngryAngryAngry what the hell yaar kuch acha nahi hai!

"tum jo bhi pehnogay tum pe acha lagega"TongueTongue 

He heard the voice coming from his back and turned around
Kabir: Oh really? thanksTongueTongue matlab mein bohat handsome hoon haina Rachna Wink
Rachna: ehem mujh se zyada nahi LOL btw jaa kahan rahay hoConfused?
Kabir: kyaaAngryAngry tumhein yeh abhi tak nahi pata
Rachna: nahi touConfused
Kabir: Rachna tum kaise bhool sakti ho itna important day hai humaraTongue
Rachna: lekin kya hai aaj mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa rahaConfused?

He came closer to her and whispered lightly
Kabir: mein aur tum aaj date pe jaa rahe hainWink
Rachna: kyaa?? Shocked lekin mein nahi jaatee kisi ke sath date peConfused 
Kabir: ohoo Rachna mein konsa jaata hoon, sirf tumhare saath hee tou jaa raha hoonWink
Rachna: Kabir lekin mujhe bohat darr lagta haiConfused
Kabir: come on Rachna tumhari koi suhaag raat nahi hai ke tum mujh se darr rahi hoLOLLOLLOL (then he thought what he saidLOLLOL)
Rachna: whatt? ShockedShocked Kabir!! Angrylekin mein tum se kyun darungeeEmbarrassed
Kabir: tum darogee bhi aur phaso geee bhi WinkEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Rachna: Kabir just stop behaving like some romantic king! mein jaa rahe hoonEmbarrassedEmbarrassed 

Someone caught her handEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Rachna: ab kya hai? Embarrassed
Kabir: tum aaj saaree pehnogee hai naEmbarrassed
Rachna: lekin mujhe wo pehannee nahi aateeEmbarrassed
Kabir: mujhe kuch nahi pata tum aaj saree pehnogee kyunki mein bol raha hoon samjheeEmbarrassed
Rachna: OkEmbarrassed ab jaane do mujhe
Kabir: aur haan agar help chahiye tou mein kar sakta hoonLOLLOLLOL
Rachna: Shocked jee nahi mein dee ki help le sakti hoon okEmbarrassed thank you so much ab chodo 
He left her hand and she ran out from there

Rachna entered her room...
Rachna: Oh no! mere pass tou koi saaree hi nahi haiOuch

Pihu enters Rachna's room...

Pihu: kya hua tu yahan aise kyun bethi hai?
Rachna: dee mujhe saree pehannee hai!
Pihu:LOLLOLtu aur saaree! khud ko sambhalogi ya saree ko
Rachna: dee please mazaak mat karo, please meri help karo na!
Pihu: acha baba ruk mein dekhtee hoon, meri bohat si new sarees hain jo meine abhi tak pehni bhi nahi hain..
Rachna: dee woh red waali do na uska blouse mujhay bohat pasand haiTongue
Pihu: Rachna tu bhi na.. yeh wala blouse pehnogi.. mein tou change karwa rahi thi issi liye rakhi thi
Rachna: haan na dee romantic bhi tou lagna haiWink
Pihu: chal jaldi ready hoja late nahi ho rahi Big smile
Rachna: haan dee okkTongueEmbarrassed

Kabir wore a black 3 piece suit and Rachna wore a red sareeWink she was looking damn gorgeous in it, and the sleeveless blouse was further enhancing her beauty. EmbarrassedWhen Kabir saw her in the saree coming downstairs, his jaw dropped wide openEmbarrassed

Pihu: ehem ehem Kabir baad mein dekh lenaLOL
Kabir:Big smilehaan bhabhi bilkul
Rachna: woh chalein..Embarrassed
Kabirt: haan ok Embarrassed lets go. mein car door tak leke aata hoon. 

He left..

Pihu: Rachna sunn
Rachna: haan dee boloSmile
Pihu: dekh maan papa ko abhi tak tumhare aur Kabir ke bare mein kuch nahi pata sambhal ke ok
Rachna: haan dee aap fikar mat karoTongue

On the way both uttered not a word, they were just blushingEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Rachna: Kabir
Kabir: hmmm
Rachna: hum kahan jaa rahay hain?
Kabir: hmm abhi bata diya tou surprise kaise hogaaWink
Rachna blushed: Kabir yeh jo na tum mujhe baar baar aise dekhte ho mujhe bohat darr lagta hai
Kabir:LOLLOLLOLhmm ab tumhein uski aadat daalni padegi
Rachna: haan lekin..Embarrassed
Kabir: chaloo aagayi humaari destinationTongue



Rachna:Shockedwowww kitni beautiful place haiEmbarrassed
Kabir: ab chalein Embarrassed warna breakfast ka time hojayega
Rachna: hmm haan chaloEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

As Rachna tried to walk...
Rachna: aah ouch Ouch *she was about to fall* *Kabir caught her from her arm*
Kabir: kya hua?
Rachna: kuch nahi aise hee shayad.. Oh NoShocked
Kabir: kya hua?
Rachna: woh meri heels...OuchOuch
Kabir: don't be sad, mein hoon na! *and he lifts her in his arms*
Rachna:ShockedKabir Embarrassedutaaro mujhe!
Kabir: nahi tum bohat achi lag rahi ho aise mere baahon meinEmbarrassed
Rachna blushed
They kept on looking in each other's eyes

Rachna: Kabir neechay paani hai..
Kabir: pata hai mujhay Embarrassed now shhh...

Keeping having eye lock they reached their table, and he made her sit on her chair
Rachna was blushing hard..

and then he sat opposite to her..
Kabir: Rachna kaisa laga yeh sab? Tongue
Rachna: bohat khoobsurat hai Tongue

A waiter comes...

waiter: sir aap kuch lenge?
Kabir: hmm haan 2 smoothies and Rachna kya khaogi tum?
Rachna: mein chinese
Kabir: haan aur 2 chinese
waiter: ok sir. *and he left*
Kabir: Rachna i wanna tell u something..
Rachna: kya? Embarrassed
Kabir: u r looking damn beautiful Embarrassed
Rachna: thanks Embarrassed
Kabir: ek aur baat *he held both of her hands* mujhe kabhi bhi ghalat mat samajhna uss raat jo kuch hua...
Rachna: jo kuch hua woh mein kabhi nahi bhool paaoongi Blushing 
Kabir: Shocked
Rachna: tum mere itne kareeb aaye aur meine tumhein roka bhi nahi.. kyun nahi rok paayi yeh bhi mein jaanti hoon.. Embarrassedkyunki...
Kabir(interrupted): kyunki humne mehsoos kiya ke hum ek doosre ke baghair nahi reh sakte Blushinghai na?
Rachna: haanBlushing
Then he left her hands and put one of them in his pocket..
Rachna: Confused
He took out a box...
Kabir: Will you be mine forever? EmbarrassedEmbarrassed



*Rachna shocked*
Kabir: Bolo Rachna..
Rachna just nodded her head without uttering a word and blushed Blushing
Kabir: EmbarrassedEmbarrassed *He took her left hand and made her wear that ring and kissed her finger*Tongue
Rachna looking at her finger: wow its really beautiful!! Tongue thanks thank u soo much!!
Kabir: lekin tum se kam Tongue

Mean while the waiter came with the ordered food and served them elegantly, they had the dinner and it was time to leave...
Rachna: Kabir i loved this place a lot! Tongue
Kabir: hmm agar kaho tou raat yaheen reh lein *and laughed*
Rachna: Kabir tum na sudharna mat chalein ab late ho gaya hai bohut
Kabir: hmm chalo

They reached back home...

...at door...

Kabir: Rachna
Rachna: haan
Kabir: thank u so much for the wonderful time Tongue
Rachna: Embarrassed thanks u also *she hurriedly kissed him on cheeks*
Kabir: Shocked
She was about to get out of the car when he held her hand and pulled her back towards him
Rachna: Kabir kya kar rahe ho stopShocked
Kabir: tumne jo abhi kiya wahi tumhein wapis de raha hoon
*And he kissed her on her cheeks, Rachna turned totally red.*
Rachna: chodo na..Embarrassed
Kabir: dil nahi kar raha
*she pushed him away and open the car's door and LOL*
Kabir: Embarrassedkoi baat nahi baad mein dekh lunga tumhein

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Posted: 21 February 2014 at 4:05pm | IP Logged
Lovely   Wink

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Blushingis this enough in the comments? lol jk.

Rachna: Kabir lekin mujhe bohat darr lagta haiConfused
Kabir: come on Rachna tumhari koi suhaag raat nahi hai ke tum mujh se darr rahi hoLOLLOLLOL (then he thought what he saidLOLLOL)
i was thinking the same thing!!! y the heck scared?LOL oh, and also like the line where he's like main help kar doon kya (saree pehen ne mai :p soo cute & naughty.

it was all very sweet and beautiful...thanks so much! a really nice treat :)

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Posted: 21 February 2014 at 8:10pm | IP Logged
Hai Meru...tumne to maar hi daala LOL

Just loved it! Romance hi romance and proposal also!?!?   Embarrassed

Too much...can't wait for the next part!

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Posted: 22 February 2014 at 1:23am | IP Logged
Very cute and nice update I love it. So lovely and romantic make me blush. Rabir r just cute can't wait for next part now . I hope we will have some romance in the show as well between them I just can't waitEmbarrassed

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Posted: 22 February 2014 at 2:22am | IP Logged
Wow! u r awesome. what a romantic place.its was so so so romantic.plzz update soon 

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