RaBir FF: ~*Tum hi ho*~ prt 19 updated @ pg27(18 May) - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
i wud have preffered rachna in bathrob instead but its okay excellent going...can i kiss u ?
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CHAPTER 3 :

Rachna: tummm😲😲😲
Kabir:tummm😲😡
Rachna: tum yahan kya kr rahay ho tumhari himmat kaisay huee yahan aanay ki😡
Kabir; oh hello miss president
bt she didnt let him to speak and move towards Kabir
Rachna:samjh gayee mein sab kuch samjh gayee😡 ðŸ˜¡
Kabir: kya samjh gayee aur door raho mujh se apni haalat dekhee hai😡
Rachna: kyun kyun door rahoon tum apni haalat dekho bina shirt ke khaday ho mujhay pata hai tum mera faidaa uthanay ki koshish kr rahay ho😡
Kabir:😲what are u mad mein aisaa nahi hun

Rachna: jhoot jhoot mat bolo tum jaisay ladkay jahan khoobsuarat ladki dekhtay hain wahin pe

Kabir :Oh hello tum jaisee ladkiyan Kabir Tripathi ke samnay australia mein aagay peechay ghoomtee theen bt meine kabhi unhein lift nahi karayee btw tumhein kis ne kaha tum beautiful ho😆😆

Rachna: kya kaha😡😡😲

Kabir(got naughty mind to make her scare): haan lekin itni buri bhi nahi ho...and move close to her waisay buhat hot lag rahee hoo😉 and winked at her

Rachna:😲😲😲 dee
Kabir: chup bilkul chup waisay chalo na thoda flirt krtay hain😉

Rachna:😲😭 tum aisa kyun kr rhay ho mein abhi single hun

Kabir:tou tumhein lagta hai mein 2 bachon ki maan se flirt krunga😉...
then he🤣 dekho apna face mirror mein kaisay darr jaatee ho na tum ladkiyan

then he wore his shirt back and Rachna kept standing in shock

Rachna:😡
Kabir: ohoo dr Rachna Garg ab rona band kro😆😆
Rachna: mein kahan ro rahe ehun😡
Kabir: acha abhi tum ro hee tou rahee thee😆😆

on the other hand Pihu searching Rachna...
Pihu in mind: yeh Rachna kahan chalee gayee then she heard some voices and entered

Rachna:😡mein kabhi nahi rotee
Kabir:acha ab room mein aa hee gayee ho tou tum meree room mate ban sktee ho😆😆😆 i have no problem

Rachna: whattt😲😲😡 Kabir excusme tum mere room mein aayay ho
Pihu: Rachna😲
Rachna: dee 
she go towards Pihu and hug her
Rachna: dee dekho na Kabir mere room se nahi ja raha
Kabir: bhabhi yeh kis pe gayee hai aap pe tou bilkul bhi nahi😆
Pihu: Kabir buree baat meri chotee si doll ko tum aisaa nahi bologay
mohan also enters
mohan: kya hua
Rachna: jiju yeh Kabir mujhay tang kr rha hai
Pihu: ohoo bas buhat hogya ab chalo apnay room mein
Rachna: matlab😕yeh mera hee tou room hai
Kabir: jee nahi yeh mera room hai
Rachna: jhoot mat bolo😡
Kabir: acha is ghar ki maalik tum ho ya mein
Rachna : mein then she realized😲 what she said..m.m..matlab uncle hain
Pihu: basss Rachna Kabir ...Rachna tmeine tumhein bola tha left pe second room na ke first 
Rachna: tou yeh second hee tou tha
Pihu; nahi woh store tha jisay tumne room samjhi😊
Rachna: what😲...oh acha sorry dee mistake hogaye..
Pihu: mujhay nahi Kabir ko sorry bolo
mohan: aray leave it chalo Rachna
while leaving Rachna turned back and Kabir giving her naughty smile😉

Next morning...
7 a.m
Kabir in his room ...while sleeping...
Kabir: ðŸ˜¡ðŸ˜¡yeh koun hai yr itna subah subah itna tez volume mein deck🥱
Rachna busy in her excersise yoga..in yoga dress😆
Kabir wakeup:😡😡😡 dekhna padega...

then he heard voice coming frm Rachna's room
Kabir: oh God yeh ladki subah subah ko dance kr rhee hai kya😡 dekhta hun isay abhi

he opened her door and kept on lookin her in irritating look while keeping one hand on his waist she wasnt knowing and was busy in exercising
 he go and stop the player...
Rachna:😕😡 koun hai 
she tuned and saw
Kabir: excusme miss president yeh ghar hai disco bar nahi😡
Rachna: tumne mujhay excersis krtay dekha😡
Kabir: nahi nahi dekha forgodsake volume slow krkay bhi tum krsktee ho
Rachna:nahi mujhay aisay mazaa nahi aata😡
Kabir: btw tum insaanon ki dr bilkul nahi lagtee ya tou tum pagalon ki dr ho ya tumhein dr banany walay pagal thay😆😆
Rachna: tum ne phr mera mazaak udaya😲
Kabir: nahi meine tou banaya😆 udaya kahan btw jaakay dresh hojaao itni smeel krdee hai sweating se🤢
Rachna :Kabir😡 how dare u
she tried to catch him and Kabir ran away and goes downstairs Rachna keeps on chasing him 
he directly enters kitchen
Kabir: bhabhi bachaao ðŸ˜†ðŸ˜†
and hide behind Pihu...
Rachna: dee hato yahan se aaj mein nahi chodongee isay😡
Kabir:pakad ke dikhaao na kaali billi ðŸ˜†ðŸ˜† meoww
Rachna: dee ðŸ˜¡ dekhoo ab
Pihu: Kabir
Pihu; Rachna😲 tum mere saath chalo ooper😡
before leaving Rachna throwed water bottle to him bt he catch it
Kabir:😆😆😆thanks
Pihu: dekho apnay aapko yeh kaisay kapday pehnay huay hain Rachna dekh yahan koi aisay kapday nahi pehnta aur sun humaray ghr mein bhi aisay kapdon ki ijaazat nahi this hai na tu kaisay aayee is haalat mein bahir

Rachna: han mujhay pata tha aap usee ki side logay😭 and sit on bed
Pihu: Rachna mera matlab woh nahi tha chalo ab rona band kro aur ready hojaao ðŸ˜› tumhein training ke lye jaana hai na 
Rachna:haan
Pihu: dekh Rachna aisay kyun itna sad horhee hoo...pata hai meine Kabir ko kabhi itni masti krtay huay nahi dekha woh sirf apni sisiter se masti krta tha bt uski sister abhi bahir hai bechara sara din bore hota tha mere sath thoda hassi mazaak kr leta tha

Rachna: lekin dee woh mujhay tang krta hai😒

Pihu: nahi krega ab tang i promise😛 han lekin Kabir buhat khush mizaaj hai buhat masti wala tumhari aur uski buhat jamaygee dekhna😛 chal ab smile kr

Rachna:😛 mein ready honay ja rhee hun

after sometime evryone on breakfast table...
Rachna coming frm her wearing light pink anarkali suit leaving hairs open 
Kabir: eee bhabhi bas itna zyada
sug: ðŸ˜†ðŸ˜†Pihu isay itna mat khila mottaa hojayega
Kabir: han phr koi ladki mujhay..and his eyes were on Rachna she was looking damn beautiful coming down frm stairs😳 he kept on staring her
sug: aao beta breakfast krlo
Rachna: nahi aunty woh mujhay late horhee hai
Pihu: thoda sa tou khaa lo
Rachna: nahi mein wahin kuch khaalungee
Pihu: chal mein driver ko bol detee hun tumhein drop krde
sug; lekin driver tou Om legayay aur doosri gaadi mohan
Rachna: koi baat nahi mein auto se chali jaongee
sug: aray nahi aisay kaisay...Kabir hai na
Kabir:😲 mein
sug: han jaao Rachna ko drop krkay aao
Kabir: oh ok maan...
and he left 
Pihu: chal Rachna jaa and remember my words rite😛
Rachna: ok dee dont worry

RaBir in car😛😛
on the way...she didnt speak a word 
Kabir:😕isay kya hua kitna bol rhee the
Kabir: woh...m sorry😊 
Rachna: kis baat ke lye
Kabir: kal raat se aapko tough time dya na
Rachna: nahi its ok infact m sorry mein zyada over react krtee hun😊
Kabir:btw aapne bataya nahi aap konsi dr hain😛
Rachna(fits was abt to show anger bt she):😆😆😆
Kabir: why u laughing😕
Rachna: kuch nahi ...subah wala joke yaad agya
Kabir: acha woh😆😆hmm now serious note tou aap konsi dr hain dr Rachna Garg
😉
Rachna: tumhein flirt krnay ki aadat hai kya😆 ya heritance..hmm m gynecologist
Kabir:😃 nahi mein flirt mein believe nahi krta but haan m damn romantic
Rachna: really mein bhi😛
Kabir: ok krkay dikhaoo😛
Rachna: kaisay😕
Kabir:😆 tum na buhat innocent ho
Rachna:😆
Kabir: lo agya tumhara training college😛
Rachna: thanks😛
Kabir: ek aur baat
Rachna: kya😊
Kabir: tum sach mein beautiful ho😛
Rachna:😳 thanks...
and left Kabir was grinning inside car

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Sorry for another boring update... if u don't want me to continue i'll stop here... thanks.
Edited by RabirLover - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi! Just read all the parts of your story...please continue, it's reaally good! Also can you PM when you update...just sent you a request. ðŸ˜Š
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice! is it possible to write in English? tks
 
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Posted: 10 years ago
Really nice !! I do follow Hindi very well too.😆
 Pls don't stop , continue writing pls😆

Pls pm me once you update😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Love it. I can follow hindi. But when it is mainly dialogs, I would feel easier to read the English version (and Hindi version in leisure, as I did for another ff of yours).
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for the pm and very nice update ...continue writing
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: nividances

Hi! Just read all the parts of your story...please continue, it's reaally good! Also can you PM when you update...just sent you a request. ðŸ˜Š


Thanksss alooot... still i hv less readers but k i'd cntinue 4 da 1s who cnsider my writting good... and yea sure i wud ðŸ˜Š
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: Yellowdiamond

nice! is it possible to write in English? tks

 


Thanku.. but sorry i am not dat much good in writing dialogues in english...and an ff is all about dialogues.. i'd not b able to do a nice job..! 
Edited by RabirLover - 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: brat2008

Really nice !! I do follow Hindi very well too.😆

 Pls don't stop , continue writing pls😆

Pls pm me once you update😳


Thanku...!!! 😳 olryt i'd cntinue...😆 ðŸ˜Š  sure i wud... ðŸ˜Š