Ek Veer Ki Ardaas - Veera

A veeba story part 50 (last part) - Page 5

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woww getting interesting..:D
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wwoow...its awesome cntinue soon...
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Awesome!!!...eagerly waiting for next chapter...
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wow yaar nice part continue soon and thanks for the pm
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Intersting ... But poor Veera ... Kaisi ban gayi hai wo... But that's gud ke Baldev took her side ... Thanks for the pm :)
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Part-10
2 days had passed since the wedding and veera was still a stone both physically and mentally..she hardly talked to any1.

Bansuri from downstairs; o veera..cheti a teri bg milne waste ai hen

suddenly some life appeared in a stoned veera
veera; bg ai hen

she went running downstairs.she was out of control but as soon as she saw her she stopped and was frozen unable to move forward. Ratan caught sight of her and opened her arms wide open. Veera ran into her arms and they shared a hug..something veera had never experienced.it brought tears in both of their eyes

bansuri; tussi galan karo me zara pados wich ja rhi hun

bansuri left.ratan wiped veera's tears
ratan; kesi he tu puttar

veera; me theek hun bg aap btao na veerji kese he, naraz hen na abhi tk aur chaiji

ratan; theek hen tenu bht yaad krte hen..aur ranvi naraz nhi bs bht pareshan he

veera; chalo bg mere kamre me chalo tussi

veera pulled her upstairs and into her room.

veera; ao bg ithe baitho.

they both sat on the bed

ratan; veera ye kamre me tu

veera; kamre nu chado bg iss kamre me na meri aur uski alag alag side hen..aur hum dono sirf ye palang aur wo bathroom he share krte hen.

ratan; qn veera

veera; ab ki karaan bg cupboard to share ho nhi skta wo uska cupboard dekh rhi hen aap..bahar se kitna acha lag rha he aur andar se...kholte hi sab kuch bande k upar gir jaye..wo to zara sa kholta he andar haath gusata he jo haath laga wahi pehen leta he...aur me aapnu ki bataon bg kal to usne mera tooth brush istimaal kr lia...wo to acha hua mere paas dusra tha..(veera went on..she was so happy..she felt alive aftr so many days)

ratan; veera...me...wo

veera; ki hoya bg

ratan; ye poochna to fazool hoga k tu khush he k nhi...me to sb janti hi hun...

*flashback*
veera crying in her room talking to the photo of sampooran.
veera; papaji me sahi kr rhi hun na...agar mene esa nhi kiya to aapka sapna..hamara ghar sb kuch khtam hojaye ga

ratan heard everything and forced veera to tell her everything which she did
veera; bg aap nu meri son..aap kisi ko kuch nhi btaogi

ratan; nhi puttar...aaj tu ne meri beti hone ka farz ada kr dia
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veera; bg me

ratan; dekh puttar...menu ek gal yaad ai...jab baldev peda hua tha tab sarpanch ji ne balwant bhai sahab ko kaha tha k agr hamari koi beti hui to uski shadi zarur baldev se karayenge.

veera was shocked

ratan; ek tarah se tu ne apne papaji k do sapno ka maan rkha he to ab..puttar viyah to tera hogya he...ab kuch nhi ho skta to ab ye tujh pe he k tu kese apne aap ko khush krti he..aurat me bht taakat hti he usko hr museebat ka saamna krna hi padta he aur tujhe bhi krna hoga...is ghr nu baldev nu apnana hoga..yehi teri qismat he

she stood up and went to baldev's cupboard.
ratan; aur iski shuruwat tujhe yahin se krni hogi.
ratan pulled the doors of the cupboard and opened it.
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thanks for pm 
aur story toh intresting hota jarahe ji 
update soon๐Ÿ˜Š
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Nice yaar but feeling bad for veera
Waiting for veeba scenes
Thanks for the pm
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thank u :)
waiting for the next part.. ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Nice again... Hmm tou ab Veera Baldev ko sudharegi ... Waiting-2 for next part :)