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A veeba story part 50 (last part)

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Part_1

It was very early in the morning when suddenly Baldev wokeup and realized he was asleep on his couch. He had been thinking all night and fell asleep in his thoughts
"E mene pehle qn nhi socha. Ab pata chalega ranveera nu k yahan kis ki chalti he"
...


Veera was roaming with Gunjan in the markets of pritampura when she was spotted by Baldev's friends.
Baldev's friend1: "O parjaijee. ese akele na phiro praajee nu bura lag jayega"
gunjan: o papiton kedi parjai te kede praajee di gal kar rhe ho?
Bfriend2:Gunjan jee sade to ek hi prajee hen aapke veerjee baldev prajee
Gunjan:wo to theek e pr phr e parjai kon he?Jahan tk menu pta he veerjee abhi tk to kisi kudi se nhi pate
Bfriend1: o gunjan jee sadi parjai kaun he ye naam leke k btaya to prajee ne chitar marne hen tuanu dikha dete hen

veera and gunjan stared at them blanky wen thy walked towards them and suddenly both of thm bowed infront of veera
bfriend2: parjaijee aashirwaad do u khende hen na k bhabhi maa saman hti he.
bth veera nd gunjan were shocked to hear this


aage ki kahani is pe reviews k baad 2 b continued



Edited by overactor - 12 February 2014 at 1:41pm

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Hain Baldev is upto something... Why his friends call Veera Bhabi ... Hmmm interesting nice start ... Plz update soon :)

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nice one 
u khow punjabi??????

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will update soon. yeah a little i hv many punjabi frnds and my kaam wali used to b punjabi
part_3 pg 3


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Part-2
Baldev was alone in his so called "adda" when veera slammed 

open the door
veera: oye baldev e ki kehnde phir rhe hen tere chamche?

baldev: oye veera tameez se baat kr mere naal warna bht 

pachtayegi

veera:bakwas bnd rkh e ho ki rha he wo menu parjai kis waste 

bol rhe hen

baldev: wo log menu bhai smjhte hen to meri voti unki parjai hui 

na

veera: (in a loud angry voice) baldev! khabardar mere saamne to 

ye bakwas kr li lekin bhul k bhi veerjee k saamne esa mat boliyo. 

mazak ki shararat ki bhi ek had hti he

baldev: karunga ki krlega tera veer apne jeejaji ko maar k behen 

nu vidwa kre ga ki..(he lauged)

veera:baldev!(she raised her hand to slap him but he got hold of 

it and pulled her close moving her hand to her back)

baldev: bht phudak li tu bht badash krliya tere veer ko aur tere 

ko pr ab bus ab tu meri...baldev balwant singh ki voti 

banegi...meri biwi banegi aur tb tujhe smjh ayega k me cheez kya 

hun

veera: tu pagal to nhi hogya...me aur shaadi wo bhi tujhse 

never!!!!
baldev: haha kuch der ki baat he veera phr tu mere kadmon me 

shaadi ki bheekh mang rhi hogi aur baldev bht dayalu he teri 

baat sun lega.


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Wow next part tou very quick yaar ... And bhai yeh Baldev ko ki ho giya hai yaar ... Why he is doing all this and whats his plan and why she will get marry to him ... U r making very much suspense yaar .. Update next part soon :)

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s agree with nicky update next part today onlySmile yeh kya suspense heinConfused
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suspense se to maza ata he aage aage dekho hta he kya

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