This was an amazing update!!! 🥱Originally posted by: RiMjHiM19
Me= Dazzler 😃. Usi khushi me i have written this funny OS on VeeBa.
Sorry for errors and mistakes...enjoy...😆(Veera, Gunjan, Ranvi and Baldev are alone at Baldev's house, since their guardians are out of pind 😆 for a marriage.)(awesome foursome are sitting in the dinning room)Baldev( irritated.)- mainu ki pata tha ki tum dono bhi itthe aa maroge... varna mai bhi chala jaata beeji ke saath...🤢.Veera- oye! hoye! sahi kaha tune... tujhe toh beeji ke bina humse darr lagta hai na... beeji ke puttar...😛.Bladev- muh band rakh veera... ye mera ghar hai.😡Ranvi- bohot ho gaya tum dono ka... abb shaanti se yaha baitho... mai gunjan nu uski dost ke yaha chadne jaa raha hoon...Baldev- 😲 oye mai marr gaya hoon ki??Veera- nahi toh... marr gaye hote toh abb tak mai duniya ko party na de chuki hoti ...😛.Baldev- 😡.Gunjan- veer jee... meri dost nu na, ranvi se kuch kaam hai... isiliye vo chal raha hai mere saath.Baldev- abb usnu ranvi se ki kaam hai???😕😕😕.Veera- haan veer jee... aapse ki kaam hai?😕Gunjan- abb savaal nai... mai jaa rahi hoon... chal ranvi.😊(they leave)veera+baldev= 😲.Veera- eh ho ki raha hai? 😕Baldev- vahi toh mai bhi socchuu... in dono ke beech aakhir chal ki raha hai...😕Veera- hmmm pata lagaana padega baldevv... kahi.. gunjan didi meri bhabhi na bann jaaye!!!! 😆😆😛.(Baldev gets up from where he was sitting and charges towards veera)Baldev- chup kar! meri behen di shaadi kabhi mai uss ranvi ke saath nai hone doonga.. samjhi!!!😡.Veera( getting and up facing him)- kyu?? ki kharaabi hai mere veer jee me...????😡Baldev- oye accha ki hai usme??😆Veera- 😡😡😡 i will kill you baldevv...(Just then the light goes off 😉😆)Veera- baldevvv...!!!!!!😕(she grabs him tightly.)Baldevv- oye! chadd mainu... 😕veera- lights ko ki hoya baldevv... kuch karr!!!!😕😕😕Baldev- hmmm sheher jaake tu bigad gayi hai ye toh mainu pata tha... lekin inni jaada bigad gayi hai ye nahi pata tha 😉Veera- oye matlab?😕Baldev( holding her chin as if she is a child)- oye matlab... tu akeli ek ghar wich battiyaan bujhne parr keh rahi hai , vo bhi ek ladke se, ki 'batiyaan bujh gayi hai... kuch karo' 😆😆😆.Veera- baldevvv abb dekh mai ki karti hoon...😡.(they start a tom and jerry race, in the whole house, even with no lights they were able to chase each other.)(finally baldev is alone and veera is nowhere to be found)Baldev- veera... veera... kitthe marr gayi tu????😕😆.(with no reply, he grows tensed.)Baldev- veera...😕😕😕.(he roams about and finally reaches the door of a room. veera's voice is coming from that room)Veera- baldevv!!!!! darvazaa lock ho gaya hai.. nikaal mainu yaha se!!!!!Baldev- 🤣.Veera- baldevv😡😡 tu hass raha hai????Baldev- gadhi!!! phass gayi na andar... oye ye kamra aisa hi hai... darvaaja kharaab hai iska... andar se band ho jaaye toh bahar se kisi ko chabhi se hi kholna padta hai 😆😆😆.Veera- toh ki mere chudail banke tujhe aadesh dene ka wait karr raha hai??? JAA JAAKE CHAABHI LAA!!😡.(baldev laughs all along and brings the keys to open the door. when he opens the door he finds veera sitting on the floor afraid.)Baldev- 🤣 😆.Veera- teri toh baldevv... tu abhi bhi hass raha hai.. yaha andhere me meri haalat kharaab ho rakhi thi... chal abb bahar... khotyaa!!🤢(veera starts to go out and just then the door gets closed due to strog wind. they are locked again.)Veera- 😲. baldevv... eh ki hoya???😲😲...Baldev- 🤣 phir se lock...😆.(Veera charges to him and grabs hi collar)Baldev- 😲😲 ki hoya??? makeup utar raha hai ki? inne gusse me kyu hai???😆Veera- bakwaas band karr baldev...!!! abb hum bahar kaise jaayenge???Baldev- arre tu bhi na.. darrti bohot jyaada hai.. abhi mai apne naukar ko phone karke bulaata hoon, vo apne kamre wich hoga... vo aake khol dega bahar se...😆.Veera- Thank God.!🤢(Baldev calls his servant.)Baldev- oye! kaka... zaraa upar vo store room ki chabbiyaan laake khol diyo kamraa...😆kaka- jee sahab, chabhiyaan kaha hai?Baldev- aur kaha hongi... mere paas hai...😆😆.(he cuts the call)Veera- Baldevv😡😡😡Baldev- ki??😆😆😆Veera- chabhiyaan kaha hai????😡😡😡Baldev- mere paas hai...😆😆😆(Veera looks at him with straight face)Baldev- mere paas hai oye ki gal hai??😆 😕 arre baap re baap...chabhiyaan mere paas hain???😲 abb ki karenge...😲Veera- hayo rabba... mai kitthe phass gayi 😭.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~kaisa tha guyz...???? plzz comment karna...😳😳😳. next part shaayad aaj hi update karr doon...😊PS- mai dazzler ban gayi ... partyyy 😳😳😳
🤣🤣🤗 Yaar besides romantic u are such an awesome comic writer i mean u are really good and i loved the dialogue of baldev when he told " Tenu mujhe gale lagane ka aur koi baha nahi mila " hilarious keep it up 😉😉😉
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