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luvzindagi thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ohh Why did you have to stop at that my dear??? 😲
You are right you are evil😑

But I loved the update... ❀️ It was superb πŸ‘
You are absolutely fantastic πŸ€—
And the way you expressed feelings of a devastated Randhir was comendeble... The guilt of saying all that to Sanyukta and behaving so harshly with her, the pain of seeing her name with someone else's, the unbearable thought of his love, his girl marrying someone else, the uncontrolled anger, frustration, helplessness which he ended up releasing on his friend Frank... All was perfectly and beautifully writtenπŸ‘

By the way, lovely choice for Frank ha!

And sanyu! OMG her heart must be racing hearing his voice 😳
Oh please please please continue soon... I hate cliefhangers and I am dying to read ahead

Thanks for the PM dear 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ohh Why did you have to stop at that my dear??? 😲😲
You are right you are evil😑

But I loved the update... ❀️ It was superb πŸ‘
You are absolutely fantastic πŸ€—
And the way you expressed feelings of a devastated Randhir was comendeble... The guilt of saying all that to Sanyukta and behaving so harshly with her, the pain of seeing her name with someone else's, the unbearable thought of his love, his girl marrying someone else, the uncontrolled anger, frustration, helplessness which he ended up releasing on his friend Frank... All was perfectly and beautifully writtenπŸ‘

By the way, lovely choice for Frank ha ☺️

And sanyu! OMG her heart must be racing hearing his voice 😳
Oh please please please continue soon... I hate cliefhangers and I am dying to read ahead

Thanks for the PM dear 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
OMG WHY DID YOU HAVE TO END IT THERE WHAT DO YOU GET BY TORTURING US
BUT NO REALLY AMAZING PART CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE
I LIKE HOW YOU MADE FRANK CHRIS PINE HAHA
OH AND THANKS FOR THE PM 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update . . .

Well written πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Loved all the part . . .

You have beautifully penned Randhir 's state of mind . . .

Franks is so cool . . . 😎

Aryan ??? πŸ˜• Aryan loves Sanyukta . . .

OMG it didn't
take Sanyukta more than a second to recognize the voice 😳 😳


"Fifteen minutes and a hundred abuses later, Jiggy managed to calm down both of them and made them sit down. " πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

"But how can I go there? I am not even invited", Randhir said a while later

Frank gave a Shut-the-hell-up look to Randhir.

"As if I am invited! She doesn't even know me. She'll wonder where this.. what do you call? Ya.. Firangi! She'll wonder where this firangi came from!",he completed.

Randhir couldn't help but laugh at him.  🀣


Can't wait to read more . . .
Try to update soon . . .

Thanks for the pm 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
Amzing update...!! πŸ‘
Randheer call her...wow 
but u stopped dere only πŸ˜­
loved it πŸ‘πŸΌ

P.S thanks for da update dear n pm πŸ€—
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Posted: 10 years ago
Dhat teri ki where u stop πŸ˜” I'm eagerly waiting for next update.. 
I liked sanyukta's pov . She is in dilemma where her mind may say its good for her & heart disagrees with it as something is missing. A well written chapter where Randhir realizes his mistake for which only he is at fault. 

Lets see what he does to get back his love. 

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Posted: 10 years ago
hey dear its amazingπŸ‘πŸ‘
ohh...u ended at this convoπŸ˜•
waiting to read further...update soonπŸ˜‰πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago
nahiii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
how can you leave it hanging THERE?????????????????????????????

*COUGHS*
Moving on frm my ekta kapoor style reaction...

awesome update...
loved sanyukta's pov...in a few words u managed to say so much...
randhir's pain was very realistically portrayed and i liked the way frank handled him even if it was in a not so...well...gentlemanly manner...
i'm loving frank more and more...jiggy's understated confusion and his eagerness to help was really cute..loved the way he got the two frnds to patch up...
all in all a beautifully executed part which had a nice sense of completeness...

update soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
u r an evil...
how dare u stopped there 
uhaan...pls continue it as soon as possible...
dying to read more...
u evil...
nice 1 btw and thanx 4 the pm too
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Posted: 10 years ago
just now read all the 3 parts
they were awesome
plz cont soon