IshMan FF: Tere Liye-only For You ch 2 A&B pg 6 pm's will be late - Page 2

Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by PoohLover


Nice start fiza πŸ‘πŸΌ
Love the first chapter..seems really interesting πŸ‘
Thank you for the pm πŸ€—
Thank you Pooh dear... n ur welcome
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by SHINYSHREYA


nice start, dear
Thank you dear😊
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by --Janvie--


Awesome FF dear!!πŸ‘
Hate this Subbu😑He'll surely ask for Ishita to come to him leaving Raman 😑 😭
Pls Continue Soon.😊 😳 😳
Thanks for the PM.πŸ€—
Thanks sweetie yup Subbu is the bad boy let's see what
He asks for
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by disha93


Superb Update!!! Loved it!!!



Thanks sweetie😳
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by Nikki_Titli


great start Fiza.. lookin forward to read more..😊
Thanks Nikki will update soon
Posted: 10 years ago
heyy awesome start up please continue soon.. and thank you for the PM.. :) 
Posted: 10 years ago
very nice beginning...

just a point(just an opinion)- i dont like the idea of mature couples addressing each other as "babe" and "jaan" hehhee...
Posted: 10 years ago
Nice start Fiza ... Keep it up dear :)
Posted: 10 years ago
New FF yippe :-)
Nice start waiting for next part. I think there is some mistake in name u have written zoya instead of ishita
continue soon
Posted: 10 years ago

Hi guys thank you for all the lovely comments
Here is next ch updated from cell 
Do comment n press like

Chapter 1: Woh phele Baar jab hum mile
 6 years before
It looked like a scene from a Bollywood Flim  huge typical Yash Chopra Movie The bride side made sure there was no stone unturned with preparations for the wedding.  While the elders were busy with attending to the guests . 
Upstairs in the bride's bedroom  the Dulhan's sisters were help look her best.
"Oye hoye kya baat hai kudiye wah our  lil Minikha is all grown up and now a Beautiful Bride oh.. sorry sorry I mean Beautiful punjabi bride ... kitne Soni lag re ho" says a voice 

Sitting in a beautiful heavy designer   lengha in front of the mirror 
" Akka please na don't tease me aaj mere shaadi hai na " says Minikha
"Arre baba tease nahi kar re hoon Im very happy for my lil choti finally tum  aur aapka pyaar ko maanzal milegaye .. This is nothing short than a Miracle I mean amma and appa agreeing to a Punjabi Munda as long as my Mini is khush im khush understood" says the Girl

They here baand bajja  
"oh ho Baraat is here you our pretty bride stay here " 

The girls run to the balcony to see the baraat and Dulha coming on the horse
The girls run down  The groom family was welcomed in
"Dulhe raaja Mubaraka" says a Guy
"Thanks Mere Bhai" says Mihir

Suddenly a group of girls went to the Dulha and his friends with a tray of  Barfi and Ladoo
" le jiye na " says a Girl in a pretty lengha The Grooms Best Friend Takes A piece of Barfi  & spits it out
"Oh My God Soap yuck this is not Barfi" yells the Guy
"Oh hoo sorry ji wrong Tray actually this is your punishment for taking My sweet baby Sister from Us" says the girl
The girls are leaving
"EXCUSE ME naam tho baatao " 
"Not so Fast waise what's in a naam" says the girl 
"Exactly saali "says The guy

Suddenly the dhole wale  came and music started blaring The Grooms Friends and brides Sisters started Dancing
 
Kisne Yeh Bandhi Doori
Grooms  best Friend starts dancing bhangra

Dekha Na Socha Na Manga 
Jholi Mein Aan Padi

Dekha Na Socha Na Manga 
Doli Mein Aan Chadi

Bride's Sister is dancing ad well a few tumkas here n there

Na To Dundha Hai 
Na To Paya Hai
Na To Khoya Tha
Na Bhoolaya Hai 
 The groom's Best Friend N Bride's elder sister bump into each other while dancing ...
" she gives him the eyes while he winks at her . ..she moves away but her duppta slips off her and some how ends up on his shoulder he takes her duppta and dances with it .
Phir Kisne Bandhi Yeh Doori

Haye Kaise Kaisi Ram Milaye Jodi 
Ho Kaise Kaisi Ram Milaye Jodi 

"Ishita tera duppta kahaan hai "says her Akka  
"Huh mera  she looks at herself and looks around and sees him dancing with her duppta in his hands around his neck

She pats his back
"Oh hello she points to her Duppta my name you were asking na well mera naam choro I know your name . Says Ishita

"Well really and what is that Duppta Chor and she pulls her duppta away from him

Aree
Dekha Na Socha Na Manga 
Jholi Mein Aan Padi

Aree
Dekha Na Socha Na Manga 
Doli Mein Aan Chadi


Ho Oo Ooo OOO Ooo

The groom is sitting at the Mandap waiting for his Dulhan and watching his friends dancing

Ishita and her akka slowly grab Mihirs jhoote  and hide them.

Aree Tambe Jaise Hogi Koi Lalli
Ya Gehun Jaise Gori
Aur Kagaz Jaise Kori Lala

Baat Kare To Phool Jhenge Lala
Ke Phool Nahi To Moti 
Aur Moti Ek Katori Rozana


Ghodi Pe Chahe Na Aaye
Khawabo Ka Resham Udaaye
Aisa Kahin Se Bulaye Mujhe 
To Mein Aankhon Mein Rakhun Use

Haye Kaisi Yeh Bindiya Aankhon Mein 
Haye Kaise Kaisi Ram Milaye Jodi 
Ho Kaise Kaisi Ram Milaye 
 
Minikha Comes down with both her Akka's  around her while all eyes are on the bride Grooms best friends eyes are on Ishita . 
Minikha sits next to Mihir The rituals Start  as they are throwing the phool on the Dulha Dulhan Grooms friend throws phool on Ishita 

She looks at him  well if " I'm Duppta Chor you ma'am are no less Ms. JHOOTE CHOR "he whispered  
 
"Listen that is a rasam and us saaliyaan ka Haaq hai so call me what ever you want "
 
"Well I'd like to call you by your name, I'm Raman ...Raman Kumar he extends his hand. 
 Nice name Raman but i Still perfer Duppta Chor and I'm Ishita.. Dr. Ishita Iyer They both smile at each other. 

The phere are done The mangalsutra is being put and Mihir is applying the sindoor in  Minikha's Maang

Raman is noticing Ishita looking at the ceremony with such dream like eyes. 

"You love weddings na" says Raman
"Every girl dreams of this day to come and she gets the man who will love, respect and care for her" says Ishita

"Your dream will also come true very soon I'm sure" says Raman

They are disturbed by the pandit ji saying shaadi sampan hue hai aaj se tum dono pati patni hai. 

Next few days 
New neighbors move in across from the Kumars 
As Raman is walking up to his house his hand gets cut by accident as the furniture is being moved a girl in a salwar suite and a towel on her head runs out her towel falls to the ground her wet wavt b locks dripping  ..

"I'm so sorry because the movers you're bleeding let me see her face covered with her hair. "
" no it's fine"
her wet hair hits his face as she turns to look at " no its a bad cut let me see"  he is lost as her hair hits him he realizes that it's 
" jhoota Chor tum?" Says Raman she looks up "Duppta chor tum "
 " hey you our the new neighbors wow great " says Raman 
 
"Haan 2days back we moved ab shh let me see this " she takes her duppta and ties it around his hand 
He is just looking at her lost in thought
" what an angelic face she has, she looks prettier with out all that make up" he thinks

"This should help for now but put some antibiotic cream on it" says Ishita
 
"Ishita.. Ishita kahan chale gaye iddli thanda ho raha hai " says her mom

"Aye Amma suno I'll talk to you later amma is calling me for breakfast"
She walks back picks up her towel and goes inside
 While Raman looks at her then his hand
And  is smiling. 

PRECAP: Raman Mere Bhai pagal ho kya why did you break the glass in your hand that to on your wounded hand asks Mihir

Kyunki sadly that is only way and time I get alone with her says Raman

 Raman aap yahan mere hospital pe  ? Waise tell me Raman how do you manage to get hurt in the same place again again? Asks Ishita
  "Lately my mind is somewhere else I guess. " says raman

 
 

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