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Posted: 30 May 2005 at 6:47am | IP Logged

                    

   

 

                     A Rameena Rahmaan Production.........

   Somewhere,Someone is made for you,

    Let Destiny Decide it........................

                     This phrase is not from Dil to Pagal hai, but is as old as this earth, when "Adam" came on earth he may had a vision that Somewhere some one is made for him and hence got Eve,there started the Era, Era of love through, "Romeo+Juliet", "Heer+Ranjha","Soni+Mahiwal","Salim+Anarkali","Suman+Prem"," Raj+Simran"and now"Sujal&Kashish".......

                   No one needs an intro into the Kashish and Sujal world, the glamorous couple on our small screen, they lighted every heart, engraved life into every withered leaf, cherished the bond of love with their charm and endeavour.

                     ........... Raah -E - Ishq ............

                             ( Sujal & Kashish )

                Time rolls back to 1978, in the greeneries of Shimla, Two Families are blessed with the most auspicious kids after a lot of prayings, Mr Chetan Grewal Is Blessed with Sujal The charmer and the Mr Lalit Raheja Is Given a Slim normal Boy Piyush.....

              Months and Years Pass but Mrs Lalit Vassu cannot control temptations to become an NRI and hence Two Families Seperate with each other, now Veena and Chetan Had a god gift Sujal and is well settle in Shimla but Vassu and Lalit along with Piyush migrate to United Kingdom.........

   *****Time never stops for any one so did this story*****

       Its 2005,Mumbai. Dhuwa dhuwa sa hai sama. Dheemi si khushbu hai in Fizaon may, hey its 16Th july kisi ka Birthday hai.............

        On a white and a Maroon Royal bed Some one is sleeping, aarti ki awaaz aati hai,here comes some one....

Prerna Chachi : Kashish utto, Its morning Beta....

Kashish : Sonay Dijay na plzzzzzzzz chachi,its 6am.

P.C : Kashhu, aap ko pata hai na aap kay dad ap kay haath se hi chai peetay hai.and its 7:30.

Kashish : Uff.

Remember abhi face nahi dekhaya hai kashish ka ..............

          (She gets up and runs to take a shower, aur phir chan chan karti hui woh neechay hall may aajati hai. wahan puja ho rahi hai,Tulsi Ma, dadi, Kumkum bhabhi, Prerna chachi and a bunch of kids are seen.....)

Kashish is surrounded by Kids..........

Kashish : hey mottu,kya chal raha hai.

kids: Di,yaar aap har baar late ho jaati hai.

kashish : chup, dadi dekh rahi hai.

             Puja ends and Kashish bends to take ashirwaad from all,suddenly some one throws water on her and she wakes up.....yes it was a dream that kashish sees daily, yeh us ka ek sapna hai.

              (Is sapna ko neechay eloborate karungi.ok.But kashish is ek kwaaabon ki duniya hai)

               She is a firm believer that some where- someone is made for her and that he is very special..

Now the next Scene, kashish is really wet, and who Did that any guesses, its........

Kashish : Rishi........Idiot.(Screaming)

(standing at the door of her room with a bucket)

Rishi : Im 22222 kool man.

          This is just the trial, and for the real adventure into kashish and sujal world i want gooooooooood reviews, Hope u all like this piece of work........

       wanna know more, then waiting for wat,get going with reviews................

 

 



Edited by rameena - 10 August 2005 at 5:17am

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Posted: 30 May 2005 at 7:15am | IP Logged
tht was really good!!! Clap waiting eagerly for the nxt part!!!
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Posted: 31 May 2005 at 2:08am | IP Logged

hey tats nice

just continue

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Posted: 31 May 2005 at 2:12am | IP Logged
that's so nice gr8 job plz continue with ur maha luv story...!!
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Posted: 31 May 2005 at 2:23am | IP Logged

haha dats kool mannnnn wowww Clap

do continueee

n han hamara sujal kahan hai ussey bhi lao ya sirf naam hiii sunana hai lolz Embarrassed

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Posted: 31 May 2005 at 2:35am | IP Logged

 

     Hi every one,thanx for ur concerned reviews, soon  il post the next part .

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                          Raah - E - Ishq : Part 2.      

                                                                              Continued..............

     Yes Rishi is her friend not bachpan ka dost but a nice friend.

kashish ki life kay hobbies, bas star tv dekhna, roz star characters kay khaab dekhna, dad se love karna,net surf karna,india-forums par reviews dayna aur rishi se fight karna.....

Next Scene:

Kashish and rishi are running around and fighting ,her dad( remember old Mr sinha- Amarji) comes .

Dad : Kya hua, tum dono phir lard rahe ho.

Kashish : dekho na Papa, rishi nay mujh pay paani dal diya.yeh kya koi tareekha hai kisi ko neend se uthanay ka

rishi: uncle, kya neend, wohi dreadful dream dekh rahi hogi Mrs Prerna Ka khwaab.

Kashish : hey rishi watch out, i dont want any one to joke on my dreams. waise bhi tum kya jano wat are dreams.Guys kya jano wat is dreams, wat is love.

Rishi : theek hai theek hai, o harry potter ki harmoine, dont start ur philosophy.

   Rishi plans a simple yet exotic candle lit dinner exclusively for three, kashish, Papa and him, they njoy the meal and rishi leaves. Papa also goes to sleep, But Kashish as always goes to her room and sits in her window with folded hands.....

Kashish : (closes her eyes and prays) Mumma, AAp jahan bhi ho i miss u, Aap mujhe Wish nahikarogi...

                   (she s staring at the moon)

             At the same moment some one is also staring at the moon, who is it, a dashing dude in his Polo Neck top and a Denim jeans, Suddenly some one comes and keeps hand on his shoulder.

Veena : Sujal, kya dekh rahay ho.

Sujal : Mumma, Kuch nahi.

V : nahi bataogay pata hai mujhe ,lekin jaanti hu har roz tumhari aankhon main kisi ko dekh layti hu.

Sujal : Pata nahi mumma, Jab is chaand ko dekhta hu, to ek Kashish si mujhe mahsoos hoti hai.

Veena : chalo ab bas karo, so joao kal tumhay mumbai jaana hai na .

Sujal : Haan , mumma that meeting is very important ,agar woh success rahi then we will spread our business world wide. ( Sujal Grewal Groups).

Mumma, Piyush ki photos mail ki thi us nay, aap nay kahan rakhi.

Veena : Kyun kya karna hai photos ka frame karana hai.

Sujal : haan mumma Karwa dijay, main mumbai se achha Bouquet laoonga aur hum us ki photo par phol lagayengay.

Veena : Sujal, kya kah raha hai.

Sujal : just joking Mumma. u Know na how much i love him, bus woh hi toh ek achha dost hai mera.

Veena : mera beta, kitna pyaar karta hai piyush se.

Sujal : Ok mumma . Good night ab aap bhi so jao. Waise Dad aatay hi hongay.

Veena : han us chichori Rewa kay saath hai.

( Rewa is Cgs Mu boli Sis, A widow and lives with his son Swayam.Swayam works as Accountant in Sujals Office. )

       Next Day as Refresh as he is Sujal arrives in Mumbai, Goes to office and had a successful meeting. Sujal now want to buy something for Veena and so goes shopping.

City Mall 5:30.

               Sujal enters the mall and proceeds towards the clothing section. There Rishi had taken kashish for shopping as to buy her a B day gift. Kashish starts to check out some fine Dupattas, and buy one .

      Now sujal is over with his shopping and coming out of the store suddenly kashish ka dupatta us ko chu jaata hai. He is out of his senses, every thing is blank he had not seen her, just a glimpse and the fragrance of her ( Christion Dior Perfume, gucci,Poison..) got him out of this world.

     jab tak woh hosh may aata , kashish has left, Sujal runs to search that one girl for whom he had been waiting till now.

Sujal : ( thinking) kon thi, kahan dhoondu usay, nahi jaanta. kaash ek baar dekh sakta us ko.'O' god.

Sujal goes back to shimla, its evening and Sujal is searching her face in the moon.

Sujal : Tu Door Bhi hai mujh se Aur paas bhi hai,

Teri kami ka mujh ko ehsaas bhi hai,

Dost to lakho hai, lekin tu pyaari bhi hai aur khaas bhi hai................

Bas is ek pal nay Sujal ki zindagi badal di..................

Kya woh kabhi mil payengay , agar haan to kaise just keep watching.............

To no more Wait till The Next Part...................

Note : Criticism is welcome....................

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Posted: 31 May 2005 at 7:00am | IP Logged

Hey,

Rameena  you have shown Sujal as a dreamer

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