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Posted: 10 years ago
yaar didnt write update till now  one more day will have to wait kuch kaam mebusy hu tour mehu 
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Posted: 10 years ago

linki for part-2
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3829025?pn=5

    IZHAAR... PYAAR  KA... 

Still image of Maan and Geet in tv show Geet Hui Sabse Parayi

  Part-3

    Maan droved the car to his destination still thinking whole incident. It is coming again and again in to his mind. He shooked his head to get rid of that incident but he failed again. Its not that incident its,.. she ,.. her face ,.. her beautiful hazels which speaks volumes and the shrewdness of the girl ,... taking decisions spontaniously at that small age ,.. how is it possible?

   May be 17 r 18 yrs hoga isko ,.. itni maturity and the way she thanked him ,.. naming the baby his name ,..everything,.. everything seems like a mistry to him. He is not able to come out of her spell which cost on him.

Gurmeet Choudhary as Mann

     

      Finally he reached to his destination . Munshiji is waiting for him. He welcomed him,..

 Munshiji:- Ayiye chote babu,.. itni der kyu hua? raasthe me kuch pblm hua?

  Maan:- Nahi,.. kuch pblm nahi hai,..

 Munsh:- Chaliye aap ander ,.. mai luggage lek aatha hu,..

 Maan moved to inside.

 And munshiji came to the car and opened the car back seat door for luggage and stunned by the state of that seat and back,.. all blood stains,...

 He ran to Maan asking,..

" Chote babu;,... kya hua? koi accident hua kya ,..all the seat filled with blood"

  Maan:- Nahi,.. mujhe kuch nahi hua,.. raastheme ek,... and he told him everything.

Munsh:- Koun hai wo aurathe,.?  aap ko unki naam pata hai?

   Maan then realised he didnt' even try to know who r they,.. nahi,.. i didn't ask them.

Mun:- Thik hai,.. aap araam kijiye mai pata lagaunga ki wo koun hai ,.. mai gaai ko saaf karwadethahu ,,kal tak wo thik hojayega.

Maan:- Haa,.. mujhe jyaada din nahi hai kal mai hoshiyaar pur me apni survey pura karke waapas Delhi jaana hoga,..aap iski intezaam kijiye

Munshi:- thik hai chote babu.

  Next day Maan completed his survey and went to Delhi.

   After 2 months.

   In these 2 months Maan didn't forget her. Not even a single day without her thoughts. When once munshiji came to Delhi ,.. he even asked about that women ,.if he find them but he didn't get a positive reply and he even don' know why he is wanting to know about that women.

Maan Singh Khurana

    After 2 months , Daadi maa got the invitation  to a college function,. as she is the founder of that jr. college in hoshiyaarpur. Every year they announce prizes and cash awards to the toppers of that college in their respective streams. And dadimaa will sponsor that cash awards to them,. So the management informed and ivited dadimaa for that function. Dadi was planning to go,.. when suddenly her b.p. raised and she was hospitalised.  Maan got panicked seeing her like that he hell worried for her health as she is only parent he had,...

 Maan:-dadimaa,.. aap ko aram k ijarurath hai,.. aap ko kisi tension lene nahi chahiye aap suna nahi dr. ne kya kaha?

Dadi:-Maan ,.. mai thik hu beta,.. mujhe kuch nahi hua,... aap pareshaan math hojayiye. Maan beta  aap humari ek kaam karenge?

 Maan:- Haa,.. dadi bathayeye,.. kya kaam hai?

Dadi:- Hesitatingly,. saying this as Maan hoshiyaarpur ki baath sunthe hi chidjaatha hai,." beta mujhe hoshiyaaarpur jaanahai,. kal waha ek function hai ,. aur mujhe  jaruri jaana hai,. kya aap meri jaga waha jaasakthe?mai chahtha hu ki meri bagar aap ye function attend kare.   

 [Hoshiyaarpur naam sunthe hi maan ki dil me ghanti bajrahe,..pata nahi kyu kuch azeebsa ehsaas honelaga ander ,..aur w o oacchi bhi hai.]

Maan without thinking even onetime said,..o.k. dadimaa mai jaunga aapki jaga aur function attend karunga.

Dadimaa got astonished by his right way aproval to go to hoshiyaarpur. He always used to crib about that place,now straight way agreed to go.

 Dadi:- Wah,. maan kya baath hai,. aap itni jaldi maangaya,.waha janeki,.. uss gaon  ki naam sunthe hi chid jaathe pehle aaj kya hua aapko?

[ Maan also wondered by his behaviour]

  Wo,..wo,... mai,.. nahi tho aap is haalath me waha jaane a zidd karthe isiliye mai maangaya. mujhe aap ki  chitha hothi hai daadimaa sliye ,.. mai aapkeliye jana chahtha hu.

 Dadi:-Thik hai beta thank.u. aur aap waha ki college ki building ki plan bhi banvayiye aur waha panchayat ki aproval karwaiye ab hum aur der nahi karsakthe college suru karnekeliye.

 Maan:-ji,.. dadimaa mai saari intezaam karunga aur jaldi suru karneki khoshish kartha hu,.. ab mai chaltha hu,.. mujhe janeki tayaari karni ha i[ badi jaldi me hai]  aap araam kijije.

   He started to pack , his heart is feeling some unknown joy,.. shaayad this time he may get some information about her. Is baar mai usse dhundeke hi rahunga,.. patalaunga uski.

Gurmeet Choudhary on the sets of Geet

 He started to hoshiyaarpur thinking  about her. When he came to that place where the whole incident took place his car automatically stopped without knowing himself .He searched around that place to find her [Arre,.. maan babu,. wo kyu phir ayegi? ye tho unki roj ki kaam thodi hai,... wo har roj waha aakar deliveries karthi hai kya,..?].He stepped out of the car feeling her aroma still there inhaling the air at that place . He stood there for sometime remincing all that once again.[probably,.. n'th time,.]After some time he sat in the car and droved to his destination.

   Next morning he took his college building plan and went to panchayay office to get aproval along with munshiji.Throughout the journey his eyes r searching for her  every where without knowing himself.

  When ever he saw a girl of her age  hoping that it must be her,.un knowing that wat he is searching is very  near to him ,... only a few hours of wait. He is slowly becoming restless.

 Evening 4"clock The college function started Maan arrived to the venue.  All hustle bustle welcoming him.

 And the function started ;- First honouring the guests then their speeches ,,,fallowed by distribution of cash awards and prizes to the students who r topped. and then some cultural programes.

Maan is  now totally pissed off by this stupid saa function lal waste of  time . He cursed himself to obay dadimaa.

Gurmeet as Maan Singh Khurana

He is getting restless mnt by mnt. His mind is damn wanting to run away fr. this and if possible to roam in the town and to search for her. But this filthy function seems never ending. He is planning to run away as soon as distribution overs.

    And finally it started after ages,.. the principal of the college  calling the names of students who won the prizes and cash awards.

    Maan is giving them the prizes and the students r thanking him.,... ohh,..god,...it seems never ending,.. aur kitne der lagega,..god,...

  The principal announced a name"Geet Handa" topped in class 12th in science stream.

   Geet Handa"he called her,.. no response,... he again called "Miss Geet Handa". in loud.

 Here our madam is in green room helping her co-dancers in make up,.. as there is some dance programe of hers later.

  Her friend Khushi tapped on her shoulder" Geet" tumhaara naam ,.. tumhaari baari hai prIzel eneka,..jaldi jao,.. 

  And Geet ran to the stage saying ,.. sorry,.. sorry,.. 

Geet after Maan fills her Maang

 Maan is looking other side all irritated by he late.

  Geet:- sorry sir,... sorry,...

 Maan turned to her hearing her voice.

Gurmeet as Maan in Geet Hui Sabse Parayi

 Guys i know its short and not to up to ur estimation ,.. but note this yaar we cannot write every thing blast sometimes we have to go through some boring also as they also needed to lead the story,.. hope next update will be up to ur estimation ,... try to give maneet scenes ok... its needed yaar to the story,...

link for part-4:-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/99277968

Link for part-115 of Essence of Love https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/98403629





Edited by anuradha.nandam - 8 years ago
Hanishadevi thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update yaar,..cant wait for next part...
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Posted: 10 years ago
thanks for the PM dear...😊
i will comment once i read it...
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Posted: 10 years ago
oho maan s rstless 4 geet,,,bhana mil gaya usee hsp jaane ka
at last geetmil bhi gayee,,,,gud going,,,,anu,,,thnx 4 pm,,,😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow... finally they meet... Lovely update... me waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice part
geet has stolen maan in her first meet
n maan still trying to find her
intazaar khatam bi hua
they met now in coll
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Posted: 10 years ago
wonderful part
loved it
maan was still thinking about her...he even asked munshiji about the information about geet but he didn't get anything
dadi has to go to HP to attend the school function but suddenly she fell ill and she asked maan to go there maan istantly ageed to go that surprised dadi as he always cribbed to go there but this time he agreed to fo there with out creating any fuss.
maan went to school and the function started but he is restless he wanted to see her ...
he is giving cash prize to students who did well in exams...geet name announced for the prize but madam was busy in helping her firned for dance performance...one of her friend told her her turn came she rushed to the staze saying sorry...
u stopped at the right moment...now eagerly waiting for the next part
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago


humein bhi maaloom hai that to forward the story we have to add events...

so no need for panic...

I was just laughing with the narration of Maan's stupidity when he stooped his car in same location to search for the girl...

but now his wait is ended with Geet coming in front of him to receive award...

wonderful upadte...

waiting for next part...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 10 years ago
nice n waiting for next update