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Love 2 hate you ashlokff- updated chapter-7 20/12/2013

maivelli IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 19 November 2013 at 1:53am | IP Logged

Hi every one this
is pia and I m here with my first ff

On Ashlok...

I have been a
diehard fan of season 1 and now I m mad about Ashlok

So here I begin
with it...


If Revenge is all
about being in love with some1 I loath most then I would love to fall for u,
knowing even the smallest site of make me feel like hating myself for
pretending to love u, but I will do it not for my sake but the person concerned
to me for some whom u ruined way long back...

No 1 ever dared to stand against me but u did it u will have to pay for it. u will cry for
mercy... I swear U might be strong for rest but for me u r my next possession my next target to hit on, because all my life I learnt to win not 2 loose . No1 ever dared 2 mess with me but u did so let's bring it on.

So guyz here is
just the introduction of two different thought do tell me if u liked it...


Aatha dayal kirloskar- 

Age 20 years mesmerizingly beautiful, young, vivacious, ethereal soul chirpy easy to go lucky gal . help everyone in need lives in an orphanage. Doing MBA in marketing from AIT&M. work a lot to for her living she believe in one thing that whatever happens, happens for goo

Shlok -

age 27 years, Casanova,adamant and egocentric & ruthless rude and many more
similar qualities has a bad reputation in outside world. Loves his parents and
sister like anything they mean everything to him. Can do anything but not
against his parents will. For him girl are use n throw material and if wants
something he gets it by hook or by crook. Appreciated a lot among girls for his
look and because of his looks he became so arrogant Working as MD of AGNIHOTRI

Anjali Agnihotri-
Mother of Sholk she is a very goog housewife wonder full lady and very loving
and caring person

Niranjan Agnihotri-
he is very nice man father of shlok owner of AGNIHOTRI INSTITUTES.

Saritaa aai -
godmother of Aatha and loves her dearly. Head of the orphanage.

karan bahargav -
handsome hunk full of live and a complete gentleman . School friend of Aatha
and loves her dearly she knows it but don't have any feeling for him.

Joti deshmukh -
Siter of shlok married to Abhay deshmukh. Very sweet girl by nature.

Varad Agnihotri-
brother of shlok agnihotri loves him dearly. Dashing persona and work as CEO of
leading advertising firm

Sojal parikh- girl friend of Varad and loves him a lot a very sweet and beautiful.

kalindi and Avdoot dayal kirloskar- Aatha's parents not alive.

Chapter -1

Site- On the road site-

Its was getting
dark car was moving fast on the outskirt
area of Pune it was like as if somebody
want to crush every thing on its way
nothing not even a single street light was there only moon light was there to enlighten the
surrounding not so that at least one get a blur glimpse of site. Man inside the car none other than our Sholk he was moving fast as to reach his house before 10 pm because today was a
party thrown in his house on completion of 30th marriage anniversary of his parents and sholk agnihotri can not get late for this beautiful event

In an orphanage-

Aatha -2 where
are u dear shouted sarita aai , Aai m here itself inside my room said chirpy
aatha wats the matter aai why u
are shouting like this don't u get that u r asthmatic and to top of that u are
shouting like a 16 yr old young girl .

Aai - I m not able to see bebo here where is she????

What she is not here oh no not again she might have again gone to meet her new road side bf I m telling u Aai one day she will run away from here with some stranger mark my words and then u will realize it shouted Aastha from her room .

Aai- shutup Aastha don't blabber such things about my poor soul and now go and find her.

Aatha- ok-ok aai I m going

At road side-

Aatha looked around and then she her bebo sitting on the
bench placed at the other side of road
she saw her and rushed fast to reach her but suddenly her eye
sight got blurred because of a fast moving car head light falling on her face and her face got pale on seeing a fast car moving towards her she got numb and stood there firm she covered her eye with her hand as the intensity of light was too much for her eye to bear .

Sholk got a blur site of someone crossing the road he immediately applied brakes to stop
his car though he wanted to reach his house in time but not at the cost of crushing someone underneath his car . He got annoyed but as he looked up he saw a girl covering her eye with her hand just to avoid the glaring on eyes due to head light she moved her hand down. His heart got a bit skipped from its position on seeing a face with innocence and cuteness at its peak. Perfect figure and to top of that a yellow colour knee length dress enhancing her naive beauty at
its best. His annoyance got vanished on seeing such a little angel all he thought at that particular instant was to get her but before he could act or say anything he saw that girl moving towards a white little kitten on sitting on a bench on the other side of road . she held her cosily rubbing her cheek on her cat and turned back to rush to other side of the road towards her way to orphanage.


Next morning (orphanage)-

Aatha beta get up u are getting late u need to go to "ANJALI Hr. Sec. GIRLS SCHOOL" beta get up.

Aai let me sleep na I want to sleep u know I don't want to go any where please let me sleep na .

No beta u forget u have to give an interview for guest lecturer don't u want to get this job tell me
and more over no need to go to Agnihotri house. All of a sudden Aatha got up on hearing name of Agnihotri house. She suddenly got up went to wash room and within 15 minutes she came out of her room wearing a white anarkali suit she was looking like a serene white beauty.

Aai - have breakfast
don't just run in haste come eat something and before that take blessings from
bappa and do visit to Agnihotri house don't
forget to go there ok .

Aatha - ok aai today I will surely go there don't worry but before there I will go to school for that guest faculty post ok now gotta go bye tc and have vowed before bappa and i will eat something on my way.

Aai- stop aatha now take this lunch-box and eat it when u get time I knew it well that's y got ur lunched packed beforehand and now go fast .


Aaths rushed to her sarita aai and then kissed her on her cheek. Took bebo on her lap rubbed her cheek on her soft skin and then rushed to leave place when someone shouted
from back she looked back it was her sarita aai holding her cell phone with a
angry look on her face ( like always this girl forgot to take her cell).

Note- that orphanage
is a small small house where 10 women lived apart from Aastha. 
Aastha love every1 there but she consider Sarita more as her Aai then as one of inmates of house their bonding is very strong and they do love each other a lot .

She took an auto rushed to "ANJALI Hr. Sec. GIRLS SCHOOL" she entered the gate it was a big
school infact the best school for girls in the city and more to utmost surprise all the faculty in that school are women only . Aatha being a graduate form commerce wanted the post for guest lecturer just to earn some money to keep her expenses going as she has taken admission in AIT&M PUNE to pursue her Management degree from finance on scholarship basis as she is a brilliant student but to meet her daily expenses she need to do job and that y she is
here in "ANJALI Hr. Sec. GIRLS SCHOOL" .

She was aware that there are very few chances of her getting in that school because of its good
repo but to above all she is here to apply for guest lecturer and she has cleared
her all exam with flying colors so there are possibilities of her being selected for the job.

chapter- 7 page 10 

Edited by pt311288 - 20 December 2013 at 12:54am

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rbb1 IF-Achieverz

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Posted: 19 November 2013 at 2:07am | IP Logged
nice story thank you for posting it

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..optimist.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 19 November 2013 at 2:09am | IP Logged
Great going! Thumbs Up
Liked the characters and a different story!
Do continue soon! Smile

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Serviana IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 19 November 2013 at 2:21am | IP Logged
Nice concept! Update soon!!

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maivelli IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 19 November 2013 at 2:33am | IP Logged
thnku  all i will try to update next part soon do keep me writing as m just a pioneer in this field and need lot of motivating comments from ur side

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aisumalavika IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 19 November 2013 at 2:36am | IP Logged
lovely start..Smile
waiting for next update..

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Posted: 19 November 2013 at 2:39am | IP Logged
wow lovely love it 

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nice start, looking forward to reading more

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