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ArHi SS:Seduction *Thread 3* (COMPLETED) (Page 65)

awroneema Goldie
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Posted: 24 November 2013 at 12:59am | IP Logged
wat is dat in ur writing...which hook me wid it to who knows which extent !!! wonderful writing...

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LooneyLuna IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 24 November 2013 at 1:05am | IP Logged
Chapter 8, lulu's shortish comment: 
I read this despite EVERY(FREAKING)THING stopping me! 
J! J! J! 
Tum hii hooo 
sirf tum hi ho 
Its the first time you have written a Proper SAX scene, you know the one from start to finish, with a kind of slow elaborateness to it...
No jokes, feistyness or innuendos (no plateauing butterflies either!)
And it was PERFECT! 
So many damn PHEELZ. 
How can u still want me to believe that the curse didnt mean this kind of "innocence", after writing that scene with such vivid details? huh? 
It was BEAUTIFUL. 
And then there was the declaration...KBA?! 
This chapter went by Super Duper QUICKLY! 
Usually I am like OMG intenseee, need a brake, pliss stop now. (dont stop at cliffs though!) 
Also anjali is heer FINALLY! so damn keen for number 9. and some aman anjali kuch kuch hota hai..

Thank you for a chapter full of Arnav loving Khushi, she deserves all that and so much more..after a century of sufferings. Making my wishes come true, hamesha :) 

ps. More when I unRes at the million different places. (sorry!) 

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Posted: 24 November 2013 at 1:14am | IP Logged
Brilliant, Awesome I can't even imagine how you come up with such beautiful imagination . You just zone me out completely while reading your updates,have no words to express once again you are such a talented writer.

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srain10 Goldie
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Posted: 24 November 2013 at 1:31am | IP Logged
Awesome updateThumbs Up they lovemaking part was sensual and beautifully written... arnav trying isbest to keep khushi to himself... the last part of the curse innocence dare does it mean khushi getting pregnant and giving birth to  child it's just a guess...another *cliffhanger* anjali payal or khushi herself but why will be payal stand there

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Posted: 24 November 2013 at 2:48am | IP Logged
superb update dear plz update soon

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eversweetdreams Senior Member
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Posted: 24 November 2013 at 2:53am | IP Logged
This was simply marvelously written.
You are an amazing writer.

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Posted: 24 November 2013 at 3:08am | IP Logged
who is behind aranv??/ payal?!
i tht arnav was being pulled into the portrait too!

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Posted: 24 November 2013 at 3:09am | IP Logged
Fantastic
superb update
Arnav confessed
He is in love
with Khushi.

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