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ArHi SS:Seduction *Thread 3* (COMPLETED) (Page 54)

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Posted: 22 November 2013 at 5:36am | IP Logged
Amazing Update.

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Posted: 22 November 2013 at 5:46am | IP Logged
This Ch was completely overwhelming... and you've penned it down so incredibly splendidly I felt their hurt n helplessness n anguish n love n passion for eachother.. I could feel it as if I'm one of thm... beautiful extremely moving n touching Ch! I'm awed wth Arnav's ardent love for this cursed girl.. his love
Gripped!!!!

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Posted: 22 November 2013 at 7:52am | IP Logged
Really awesome...
read it for the second time...

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Posted: 22 November 2013 at 8:33am | IP Logged
simply awsumm chapter loved it
thanks for pm

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Posted: 22 November 2013 at 8:40am | IP Logged
Wow wow wow - this is such a good read...can't put it down...don't want to stop.here!!!!Clap

I had the great pleasure of reading 4 parts altogether and I am so amazed at how the story flows seamlessly and is so fast paced.  You built up the suspense and then with a jatka, revealed the secrets...left me gasping for breath.  

You leveraged the Sheeshmahal history so well and are weaving that beautifully into the thread of the story.

Into a situation rife with romance, passion, seduction...you now introduce supernatural, paranormal and a real live curse.  The amazing part is that this feels so life like and real.  Arnav's bafflement, disbelief and then eventual acceptance that this is true...Khushi's plight just hurts my heart.

Now I am going to go back and read from the Begining.




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Posted: 22 November 2013 at 9:08am | IP Logged
reading through the chapter felt like such a surreal experience... it was beautifully written.. i have no words for u... it now seems like a thriller to me with a little added magic... i was holding my breath throughout it , didnt know when i finished it... but now all i want is more , n more n more...

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Posted: 22 November 2013 at 9:56am | IP Logged
Wwwooowww this story is breathtaking

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Posted: 22 November 2013 at 3:19pm | IP Logged
Brilliant update & an amazing story!!
I don't have words to praise you.. You are a very talented writer & each of your stories are mind-blowing... Each time I read an update from you, it leaves me in a beautiful Arhi world.. 
You have some of the most wonderful ideas & your writing style just makes it all the more exceptional!!
Can't wait to read more!!
Thanks so much for the PM..

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