ok Part A thanks for the update, the last words he said were so that she does not feel the happiness which she was going to, and goes back to the painting isn't it?
the was so devastatingly erotic yet aesthetic,, loved it to the core,,,
and i am damn sure tht arnav deliberately decided to be indifferent to khushi post their love making,, so tht her happiness doesnt reach the highest peak which might lead to another painful n temporary separation,, loved his presence of mind,, i hope Khushi understands tht,,
Oh Ho! the ending really confused me..throughout the love making I was worried, but khushi fear, anxiety relaxed me...her fears and her need, her shyness was written beautifully...
with an imagination like yours, I really hope that the curse has not switched now to Arnav...and Arnav was just trying not to let Khushi feel so happy that she would have to disappear again...waiting patiently for second part..
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