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Aruni. IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 20 November 2013 at 4:28pm | IP Logged
You are doing a fab job blending the real world with fantasy... Clap

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flowers4u IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 20 November 2013 at 4:43pm | IP Logged
amazing update loved the twist with the curse...super interesting...keep it up

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spsharmila Goldie
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Posted: 20 November 2013 at 4:46pm | IP Logged
Absolutely brilliant updates...can't wait to see how Arnav fights to find a cure to the curse Big smile

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ArSh23 Senior Member
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Posted: 20 November 2013 at 4:47pm | IP Logged
wow I just read chapters 6 and 7 and I'm speechless! That was so amazing! I never imagined that was going on with Khushi! This concept is so unique and different from what you have written before. I love it! Poor Khushi I can't believe that Payal hated her that much that she left her with this horrible curse. I can't imagine how Khushi has been living for all those centuries and seeing everyone she loves being taken away from her. Arnav will definitely fight for her and I'm sure he will be successful! I can't wait to read the next chapter! Thanks for pm!

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kushiarnav1 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 20 November 2013 at 6:36pm | IP Logged
well written,this chapter first part is bang bang...arnav emotions and his helplessness, wanting to find cure of the curse...feel really bad for him...
second part is very emotional one kushi is telling bout her experience  and loneliness all these yrs...

wondering how arnav will find out...

i have a doubt is arnav  not hallucinating right, becuase the way aman and anjali is talking about his welfare ...

thank u for the chapter and pm...

cheers..

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mattshia Newbie
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Posted: 20 November 2013 at 6:41pm | IP Logged
This is such a beautiful fairy tale...so different...and so well written Clap

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moomin4455 IF-Dazzler
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Joined: 08 March 2012
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Posted: 20 November 2013 at 6:42pm | IP Logged
Absolutely brilliant storyline, which I did not see coming at all. I am confident we'll get a happy ending, somehow...how we get there is as mysterious as this curse...!
The key to absolving Khushi from this curse is in the last line...I think...?

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mrin0709 Goldie
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Posted: 20 November 2013 at 7:25pm | IP Logged
Loved it...

Very unique concept...

Waiting for the next update

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