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Posted: 20 November 2013 at 2:32pm | IP Logged
Oh my! I guess they will get to the next stage of their relationship. I am so glad that Arnav is being supportive. I have a feeling that the curse will only be broken if there is something to counteract the hate. That can only be Arnav's love!

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Posted: 20 November 2013 at 2:52pm | IP Logged
Wow! I'll be honest with you Juhi. When I read chapter 6, I was disappointed at the supernatural turn of things and that's why I didn't comment. But the way you have written chapter 7 is just phenomenal. You have treated this supernatural / paranormal syndrome so naturally that I have been sucked back into the story again, just like Khushi gets sucked into the picture! Wink
 
Arnav's despair and determination and then his methodical approach to solving the problem was so well written. And then there is Khushi and her overwhelming feelings and emotions... Very well done! Clap Will look forward to the future updates...

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Posted: 20 November 2013 at 2:56pm | IP Logged
Aw my heart goes out to Arnav seriously!

He was just there waiting for her and it didn't matter to him about how long it would take but then took a wiser decision and started looking into it finding more and getting her help

It's interesting to know how much she tried to do herself and how she feels each time she goes in



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Posted: 20 November 2013 at 3:09pm | IP Logged
ClapOne needs to be extremely talented to write on such a subject ,I think you are not only talented but a fabulous writer who can make believe that such things do exist. I am very excited to see how this story unfolds so looking fwd for your next update.Clap

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Posted: 20 November 2013 at 3:13pm | IP Logged
Brilliant update! Thank you for shedding light on Payal. She must be a really troubled soul! Looking forward to the next update..

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Posted: 20 November 2013 at 3:51pm | IP Logged
fabulous update
loved it

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Posted: 20 November 2013 at 3:56pm | IP Logged
Great job Juhi!!

To be honest I'm quite conflicted about this topic and the dynamics behind it.

But I feel you've handled it in a very realistic and believable manner. I applaud you for that.

You are writing this so I've continued reading it, you've definitely peaked my interest!!

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Posted: 20 November 2013 at 4:27pm | IP Logged
"The Promise" turned out to be everything I was hoping for; Arnav not backing away from Khushi even though they have this barrier between them. I didn't expect anything less from Arnav when he gave her his word that everything will be alright.

I'm shocked that there is actually an institute on paranormal activity...good job on the researchClap I have a feeling though that the institute will not be able to break the curse, but it will be something that Arnav does (just a hunch). I really think the key to breaking the curse is in the last line somehow (but innocence can dare). I don't know what that means, neither does Khushi nor Arnav, but I think once they uncover that, they will be able to decipher the code to breaking the curse (maybe this is just wishful thinking on my part).

I read someone else's comment that mentioned that with the age difference, Khushi will be considered a cougarLOLLOL All jokes aside, if the curse is broken, I wonder what age Khushi be at?

And I like this older, wiser Khushi...she isn't afraid to voice her wants, and her telling Arnav she wants to stay in his room was a bold gesture; I want to know how Arnav will be able to turn that down knowing his deep need/want of her!

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