ArHi SS:Seduction *Thread 3* (COMPLETED) - Page 17

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what an dhamakedar update!!!⭐️👏⭐️👏
loved it and i am amazed too, yet again!

part--1
how do you do this? i mean, with the inclusion of Institute of Edinburgh and Parapsychology unit, u have taken this to another level and i must say, it was the masterstroke. i mean actually bring reality to this alternate universe is something i wasn't expecting of, and hats off for the striking thought.

i loved the ay u described Arnav from the heartbroken and a man in despair to a man with purpose of  saving his Love, his Khushi.
also i loved the convo and the promise and solace they found in each others arms.

part--2
i remember a story i used to love hearing as a kid. it was that the life of a demon was captured inside a parrot and u have to kill the parrot to kill that demon.

i find the case with Khushi a quite similar one albeit in reverse order. the painting when tried to be destroyed by Garima & Saint, burnt had to be born by Khushi.
what i want to Know though is why only Arnav & Garima were the only people to witness Khushi entering into the painting? is it because only those person could see her because she have loved them and they have overwhelmed her with joy?😕

what is the 4th line of the curse? though i don't want this epic tale to end anytime soon, but i am just itching to know the how curse will be lifted.😛
i loved the ending and the kiss😳
could we expect some seduction and passion in next update?☺️
Edited by celinawalter - 10 years ago

Juhi, this is so beautiful, it is turning into an epic love story where he will not rest till he find his quest to cure his princess and bring her back to life.  This is exactly what he needed, the will to fight and to do everything he can and not accept the inevitable as he keeps blaming himself for not doing anything in Akash's case.  His determination will be the strength that she needs to be hopeful.  I like her train of thoughts at the end about being with him till he won't need her anymore because that will only happen when the last breath leaves his body.  That is how much he is in it.  You go Arnav, I love the change from the vulnerable man to this man possessed with the will and strength to fight for his love.  Quite a transformation but then love give you these powers that you don't think you have.  Can't wait for part 2 and I am going to be late for work but could not stop reading.  Hope you get some sleep.
Edited by Raila1014 - 10 years ago

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Edited by Hawa1997 - 10 years ago

I've been staring at the blank space trying to think of something to say for part 2 but I have nothing. Exquisite the details and thrilling to see a man willed so strongly to fight an eternity of imprisonment. I just wait to see this play out. I think we might find out that Rowling and Dumbledore were always right. The answer is love, isn't it?

PS: sleep woman. You aren't a hundred year old woman in a painting. You should be sleeping. Unless you are the Cullens (really really praying now)

fabulous yarr cant wait more ..

if they are intimate now, khushi will be too happy and vanish!

Can we invite the Winchester brothers and the whole she-bang too? I feel like having a supernatural investigators party for Arnav...scooby-doo and the gang will be there, and everyone can have a 'super' time! 😆

awesome update... loved it...

Part2 is also as good as part1 very nice.