Bed Of Thorns : Whose ?

            Shalok a loner who was living his life on his terms . I feel he was rebel from the starting .your inborn traits do not change . He neer came in Astha, s way ., kept his distance when he was in train .It was Astha who was making fun of him and kind of insulted him .One needs to k ow where to draw a line .But Astha never heard the meaning of keeping your distance .Everyone , buziness is hers , she straights jumps in to the fire without givig a thought of consequences of her actions. She is childish immature , unaware of the world ways .
            She insulted and ruined ShLok and his father , s reputation publicly in award funcion then ShLok has to go to police station handcuffed
        Next day madam Astha goes to office to save from the goons who were voilent and later on lectures Shalok .Astha thinks she is authority on values and upbringing where as till now she has slapped back thoes same values at her parents face . If Anjali does not want somethig inher event who sheis to give her lecture about her mother , values . Its Anjali, s parents , you have no business to lecture her how to treat her parents .For me list goes on where I find her parents to be responsible to some extent .If she was given freedom then should have been told about the responsibilities which follows .She was naive , would hae been taught to keep her distance and where to draw the line . Her naivity made easy for Shalok to entrap her .His man handling ., physically he invaded her personal space and not the least , his slap appeared to her , his love , in her dumb analysis .

           Shalok was already sleeping In the bed of thorns with his past darkness where he had none to share .
    

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so true neerja

Will write later .this mobile business is not my cup of tea .so many grammatically mistakes..
Mine expression which were going on.A lesson
Edited by Neerjaa - 10 years ago

                             I feel sad for Astha .She is with heart of gold , always tryimg to bring sunshine in others life without any selfish motive .I have seen her kind of innocent girls who are trusting . When you yourself are good you look at the people from same perspective but there is difference in practicality and idealism where you may be decieved . Life itself is teacher but for girls it becomes very late and guyz go scot free and fingers are pointed at girls blames goes to parents values and upbringing . Astha was never taught to keep her distance and be responsible for her actions . She took for granted everyone and at every opportunity was ready with her preaching .
             Any guy at Shalok, s place would have got angry with her . She had lots of opportunities to back of when shalok was getting physical with her , girls have instincts when something iz not wrong but she went on ignoring them . Her invading his personal space means his study . He was angry when she entered first time , any girl will be wary to enter that room again knowing shalok does not like . .There has to be limit of being nosey at someone place . Was these values she is talking about ? Never asked Shalok about his past which made him so voilent sometimes.

        She is newly wed in the new home , you have to firdt go with their customs and rituals not to give your opinion when elders are sitting there .
           Shalok himself has created all dituations where she has to suffer Anjali, wrath .
      She told to stay away from each other , Shalok took her to hid room , so she got the wrath .
   Then ring ritual .Anjali yold her to letshalok win but shalok put the ring in her finger and again became the reason for dis pleasure
     Shalok smartly got awrd at home and that also from madam Astha , who prsised Agnihotrisand took all blame on herself . Shalok scored his lost reputation from the same girl who was the reason to ruin .
        Now on publicly Agnihotris have got more respect publicly who treat their women with equality and respect .Shalok has very subtly weaved the web around Astha where she will entangle herself more she try to escape , more she will be entangled .
       Same happened at her home where like a caring , loving husband Shalok asked Avdhoot to meet her daughter . Astha will not be able to tell her parents if shalok goes to hurt her .Every one has very good impression of Shalok..
        Last how an Astha invite her parents for puja when she has elders in her family . You have to first ask them .Astha will learn from her mistakes .And she thi k she can change people when you can not save your own parents being insulted .
     First this colored glasses have to go and then she will haveto land onthe earth from clouds where shalok honey dipped words have made her stay in dream world .
          Shalok , s approach should be subtle and Astha should be waking herself ..

      This track should be for those girls who are naive and trusting kind . Life is great teacher .
    She was having a bed roses where her dear ones never ever any thorn come .After meeting shalok , her life changed , so did her equations . Shalok also has made a bed of roses for her but underneath has spread thorns .She does not have now none , will Shalok , treachery will make her mature and smart to remove thorns and make life again filled with roses , removing the rose color glasses. When you are emotionaly betrayed that is turning point of your life .Either you are submissive or rise again to face the world , happens only if you have strong will power . Shalok will get hurt when he will know about the masked face of his father, s cruelties and painof her mother and feeling the pain he gave Astha .


[/Edited by Neerjaa - 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Neerjaa

Life itself is teacher but for girls it becomes very late and guyz go scot free and fingers are pointed at girls blames goes to parents values and upbringing . Astha was never taught to keep her distance and be responsible for her actions . She took for granted everyone and at every opportunity was ready with her preaching .

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 Astha will not be able to tell her parents if shlok goes to hurt her .Every one has very good impression of Shlok..

.Astha will learn from her mistakes .And she thinksshe can change people when you can not save your own parents being insulted .

 First this colored glasses have to go and then she will haveto land onthe earth from clouds where shlok honey dipped words have made her stay in dream world .

 Shlok 's approach should be subtle and Astha should be waking herself ..

 This track should be for those girls who are naive and trusting kind . Life is great teacher .